All Comments on 'Dirks Donuts Pt. 01'

Interesting story!

5

I love your stories - this is a fine addition to your works. I can't write, myself, but I know what I like, and you certainly deliver, time after time. Thank-you!

Great start - looking forward to your next chapter

I loved your story. Looking forward to part 2.

Cannot wait for the next part! Maybe part 2 goes in the Romance category?

This was a good story, departing from the poke, poke, grind and buckets shot six or seven times a day. It is a work of erotic literature not a pornographic story

You never know when Cupid's arrow will pass through you. Sorry to see that Jenny is gone. Look forward to see where this goes.

I usually don't give 5 stars on an early chapter, but you sucked me in right from the beginning, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!

This is a great story. Keep it coming. 5.

A wonderfully written opening chapter! Lovely, but not sad, deal with it and move on type! I love it, thank you!

Normally i like suck 'em and fuck 'em stories, but this was a different league, erotic without being slutty and beautiful, looking forward to Part 2.

if it's as good as this bring it

Another R410a masterpiece in the making! Tough to loose Jenny at the end of chapter 1 but they had more in a short time together than many in a lifetime. But there is the “Redhead” unless she is just an R410a distraction inserted to misdirect the reader while the plot develops in some other mischievous way! Gives us something to look forward to in the new year. Thanks for helping get through the past year. Your posts were among the high points of the past 12 months.

Stay healthy and keep spinning your enjoyable tales. Hope your Christmas was a blessed one and the New Year a happy and enjoyable one. Thank you for all the joy and entertainment you bring through your craft and art.

5 stars of course for this offering and looking forward to the next episode.

Cheers

SAGE

What a beautiful story, very well done, I just wish he'd married Jenny after the world tour. 5 stars.

Even though you know it was coming, you still are not prepared for it, it was pretty emotional. This is another one of your stellar stories and I look forward to the next part.

Great work!!!!!!! Loved the way you set the story board and followed it. Great with character introduction and integration. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your follow-on chapters!!!!! Again loved it!!!!!

Good solid writing as always. Looking forward to next piece.

Well written story.

The physical aspects were solid, but peripheral and mattered only as a part of the story.

The premise was believable and kept my attention throughout and makes me look forward to part two.

Happy Holidays.

Go to miss Jenny. At least they had their time to gather while it lasted. Maybe Jenny knew what was coming because there never was a word of getting married.

Looking forward to the next chapter(s) as always.

BTW, loved her panties...

Really enjoyed. I like the premise of this chapter. Hope you are able to find additional ones...

This was a great story and I am looking forward to chapter two!

The one minor flaw was the trans-Canada road trip. Juneau, Alaska is a land locked city with no way to drive in or out. Not a big enough flaw to ruin the story for me, though. Good job!

Miss Jenny, I fell in love with you too.

Thanks for the story, waiting with bated breath for the next.

5 stars

Great story, sexy and loving. Thank you.

I like your pen name, too. How did you end up using the Refrigerant name?

You were able to provide a wonderful sensual and sexy piece of work where we fall in love with the characters and you were able to do that without being Lewd or involve cliches. I always say that I hope my work leaves my readers with a sense of grief when the story is over. I’m looking forward to the next installments keep up the good work.

Excellent work. Well written with some fun and a bit of sadness. Looking forward to part 2.

Lovely and loving. I normally don't grade parts but this was a complete story with a full conclusing!! 5*

Bravo. The true measure of art is the emotional response it evokes. This is the first five stars I have given in over a month. Thank you for your art.

touching and lovely

A nice story, sweet characters

Thought this was going to be run of the mill even though well written then you introduced Jenny and it became very moving.

Second time reading. Moving, sweet with likable characters.

Ducking onion ninjas got me good!