All Comments on 'Dixie's Downfall Pt. 01'
by Iwroteathing
- 13 Comments
I'm guessing that you have written other parts, but since I'm a sick fuck here's some suggestions. He could certainly make her have sex with lots of guys and girls - including her family. Farm animals? Having her take humiliating photos, each one with and without the mask, so he has additional blackmail material. Maybe a late night visit to local landmarks - her school, church, mail street, monument, etc. - again taking photos with and without the mask. Have her perform with her hands cuffed behind her back and no collar so that he can threaten to pull off the mask at any time. Maybe have a session with kids from her high school, the ones who hated her and who she hated. Boys and girls. You know, the last people you would want to have leverage over you. Bad enough she does horrible things at their direction but knowing the additional humiliation when her identity is revealed? And it will be eventually, but on the way it is threatened many times.
Looking forward to part 2, hopefully she won't enjoy what your planning to make her do next. Its such a shame when they enjoy it to much.
Loved how she managed to trap herself by taking too many risks. Can't wait to see what happens next!
I wish I could trade places with Dixie Jackson!! It has to be an exhilarating experience watching the whole town lust after you.
so looking forward to see where Dixie Downfall continues. first part interesting.
Thinking of what Dixie went through at the bar & what you’re planning for her next has my panties completely drenched!
Dude, this predicament bondage / humiliation series is amazing, I really hope you decide to continue it soon.
Liked the whole story, including the big twist! More humiliation in at least one more chapter?
I can’t wait to give something like this a shot! I’d love to be naked amusement for all the men in town, lose my senses and bring myself to a glorious orgasm in front of them, and become the slave to someone from the crowd while having no control over my body & dignity!! I’m so close to beginning my own adventures (sub, slut, embarrassment/humiliation) but I will be finishing myself off again first!! I’ve soaked my panties fantasizing about being in a similar position as Dixie.
Come on please we need more Dixie.
And please make a numbering system so your fans can read them in order.
Well was all fun & games until (A) the reading part at the party. That was a too big jump to be credible, for me.
_ Why did she take the risk? Especially with (B) the last task? She should have balked as it broke the implicit erotic games for anonymity deal.
_ Does the bartender hold a grudge against her (and did guess, right or wrong, her identity)? Why else should he destroy a good thing by exposing her? Lack of his motives is plot gap (C).
_ In contrast, he should be more supportive in keeping her anonymity thus stretching the fun as far as possible. The slippery slope of more risky thrills might lead to exposure and an end to the profitable alliance anyway - but more as an (enforced?) accident not by intent.
Other opinions on these 3 gaps? Did I miss something?