by only_more_so
I love words, well written words, they are sexier than any story filled with fucks, cunts, other words so overworked that they may be a short cut to descriptive, but are not erotic. "unrequited erection". Wonderful writing, fun story----thanks!
There are sexy stories, fuck stories, and erotic stories. Your story had sex in it but it is a well written erotic tale. As well written as it is, it makes it an outstanding effort. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Well-written, short, extremely erotic tale. A simple, common situation evolved into a romantic interlude. Keep the stories coming!
LeoDavis
This was a short but very well written bit of eroticism. Very well constructed and a novel premise on this site. Someone who hypnotizes someone for the benefit of no one but the recipient! On this site? Who knew it could happen? Again Congrats!
Beautiful, sensual and erotic!
Reading this story brought back some good massage memories for me. Adding the hynopsis voice is genius - Wonder if it will work in reality?...