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Click hereShe was really taken with Alice, and left her some very nice jewelry. When we married, she was sitting on the groom's side of the church. The heirs hinted at contesting the will but the lawyers explained the cost and delayed execution, so they let it pass. We had managed to concentrate on her land, so we added another 4.5 million to her coffers before she passed. I had no doubt the money would be frittered away.
In a last expression of respect, we built a really nice road to the hill she wanted to be put to rest on, and a wrought iron fence around the burial plot. She had already picked the stone she wanted, in black granite, and had made arrangements to have her husband moved to rest beside her. I hoped they enjoyed the view.
We married, and it's been twenty years. At least once every summer we park the kids at one of the grandparents, and reenact our first coupling at the swimming' hole. I looked at her floating across the pool, her breasts still sitting high and firm, and grinned.
I never really liked Alice, but she was pretty easy to love.
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I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop. So refreshing that it never did! The author obviously isn't a slave to predictable formulas. I really loved the descriptions of their violent fucking! I'm jealous.
Did anyone else find it very disturbing that neither one of them said a single kind or loving word to each other???? and he has balls, he was a bigger DOUCHEBAG
5+ *s This has to be one of, if not the best, story I have read here, and I have read Many. Thanks for this one, and all you have written.
I doubt few would argue, Q is the best writer on this site. Thank you sir. 5 stars
somewhere east of Omaha
Elite means well beyond the standard fare, I have a category for the Elite stories. Your nom De plume takes up uses many spaces on said list!
I am a “hill William “ from west of AVL. I reside in Concord, you are one of the authors I would like to meet!
I am weird but not harmful. Cheers to you and yours,
Love it, but it could have been more: An Unexpected Reaction, Food Desert, Let Go.... Enjoy all of them, most more than once!
A nice little enjoyable story. You should write in this category a little more often. Thanks for your time and all the effort you’ve put in over the years. KS
The oil and water mix of personalities ended up as a fine emulsion. I hope they continue to remember to shake well for best results.
The depiction of their ‘sexy time’ was outstanding.
Very nice! — Borat
5*
The only thing missing is a Black Walnut paddle (to ensure she behaves) (or assures that she misbehaves).
[Foghorn]
Very nice story about how opposites attract each other. I wish the story were longer as the characters were really terrific. Four stars.
Great read and best in show...
...for a surprisingly good invitational. They usually are comprised of 2nd tier stories from great authors, perhaps due to deadline.
Special bonus from this event - we got to see Mr. Tedious crack the door to his closet.
One of your signature shorts (and sweets) 5* It takes an intelligent man to keep a strong woman.
Very enjoyable and as usual really well written. But it feels way to sparse on details e.g. her parents and how he got on with them. There are many more I could list. The ending again wS too brief and didn't have the same punch as the beginning. When I saw a new QHML story I got excited and finished this feeling a bit let down. BardnotBard
Well, we certainly learned a lot about the various wood types and forest cutting. 3*
An interesting if obnoxious Romance story. And rather absurd. She's got a screaming asshole for a father, a strong intelligent woman for a mother, and a schizophrenic personality, until she gets fucked into submission and good manners. Kind of ironic and silly. Hope that's what you were going for. Thanks for the seminar on trees. Wish it was accurate.
Should have been in romance genre as I don’t get a warm fuzzy reading EC stories - LOL! Great job! 4.8*
I parrot a commenter a few hours ago who said some authors make reading stories on this site a joy. And, of course, a is one of the foremost. Hear Hear!
JPB NOT BOB
A really enjoyable read. And a loving wife to boot. Five stars for sure.
JPB NOT BOB
Another great story! …so well written and enjoyed ‘o so much! Thank-you for your talent!
Sorry I can't award the number of stars this deserves - easy a 10-star ROMANCE!
OBTW, any lady with a '66 Mustang is great in my book! (We bought my wife one just after we got married - of course it was just a 6-year-old used car, at the time. ;^) ;^) )
Never really liked but kinda loved her after a few years. A good tale about love and hate, good people and bad, thoughtful people and assholes. The world is full of all kinds. Live and let live, it's a lot easier to love than to hate. Very well told tale. It doesn't cost anything to be thoughtful and nice. 5 stars
Surprise, surprise. Good laugh at the end. Never know what life dishes out to you. 5 stars.
Despite hostilities, it was a rather sweet story. In my opinion, it could have detailed their post-wedding life a little bit more, but that’s me being greedy.