by AWhoopsieDaisy
Comments, analysis, critique and even key smashes are all welcome. I was a little hesitant to put this of all things on Literotica, so definitely let me know what you think of it. Predictions are great and I love to hear them. I'm having a lot of fun writing about these bisexual disasters.
I loved it. I love the way you encorperated Eddie's inner dialogue, and Peter's spider sense. I've dated 'middle of the road' guys like Eddie, so the interactions felt authentic to me.
It's awesome to hear I got that much right. As a lesbian I was worried about accidentally sounding like fujoshi (I think that's the word). I really wanted to dig into the psyche of these two and explore Eddie's complicated relationship with Venom and Peter. I'm glad these two read as believable and in character.