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Click hereOn the forth day, the power came back on. Then later that afternoon, we heard the roar of the township's road grader as it slugged its way down Huron road. Dad used the frontend loader on his tractor and cleared the lane. Bob put that big truck of his to use and smashed down any of the snow Dad's tractor missed. We said our goodbyes by the mailbox on Huron Road.
It truly was a Christmas none of us will ever forget.
End part one
- COMMENTS
I keep waiting for Moose to show up and cause drama. Probably in part 2. Hope Jim and Hannah make it. Also, cheating slut hypocrite holier-than-thou mom, cliché much? :)
lol anon was so mad he had to make 4 comments back to back and in three of them say the same damn thing pretty much
JIM IS A CUNT!! SEEMS HE MUST HAVE BECKY AROUND HANDLING HIS OFFICE, HIS SEX LIFE, HIS RELATIONSHIPS!
HANNAH NEEDS A NEW THERAPIST
DIANE BARTLETT WAS AN EPIC FAILURE IN HER PROFESSION, ESPECIALLY WHEN IT CAME TO HANNAH
Honestly speaking loving a broken person is too difficult and too unreliable. It looks good in romantic story - in real life it is an extreme toll on the person loving them. BTW - if it were me, Becky would be looking for a different job.
However 5 stars for maintaining a complex storyline smoothly (albeit multiple proof errors).
Becky would be looking for work and Hannah and her issues would not be my problem
Good overall but needs a good proof read and an editor; so many mistakes that detract from an otherwise good story.
Great story! Maybe a bit realistic for Literoica but you have been posting here longer than I have been reading this site. Nice to have a story based in a part of the country I am from.
Looking forward to chapter 2.
Cheers
SAGE
Great story. It's a life different than I lived but many people do. Thank you. Look forward to reading the next part.
Some rough patches, I'm not certain that Hannah would be too keen that Jim seems to keep telling people how they met but nice to see that the hero has problems and isn't the superstud he thinks he is or usually appear in these stories. As for his mother, well the least said. A good story and keen to see where it goes.
I’m with hellsbells. I couldn’t click with any of these characters. I had to stop reading when he started crowing about setting a personal best at 5 minutes.
I must be wired different than all the other commenters. I thought becky was a terrible friend. She had sex with him 10 times and never communicated to him that he wasn't good a sex. If she was such a good friend she would of told him, instead she let him keep embarrassing him self with other women. But with that said that might just be a me problem
Great story with well written characters. At times I was ready to shout at your protagonist, but then you would redeem him. Would have loved to be able to watch as his ex girlfriend explained that he was a lousy lover and why. This definitely needs another chapter, or more.
No matter what you may think, this is well written. I can honestly say that I am hoping you write an additional chapter/section. Looking forward to seeing the rest of what you have written.