All Comments on 'Kicking Ass'
by Iwroteathing
- 4 Comments
Another masterpiece from you. Love to read how the helix went down on both and really can feel the anger and humiliation they felt.
the whole story is well written and the scenario is build up nice and perfect.. All I want in a good story here. Thank you
Sincerely, all of your stories have their own flair to them, with characters that have genuine... well, character! I always look forward to seeing your works, and I also hope that you are as appreciated and well-regarded in all other aspects of your life as you are on this website.
It's funny how competitive they are. So strong and yet so insecure.
This may be your most realistic story so far. Also the most moderate. Not a bad thing, except because too much realism limits the possibilities.
Well done, anyways. Very good as usual.
-Onkana
There are few stories on this site that actually manage to instill an inherent sense of poetry to them, bravo man. Beate's character design is beautiful, her insecurities wrapped together with almost cathartic narcissism, bravo.