by HeyAll
If you're looking at this -- yes, you -- thanks for reading. I hope you've enjoyed.
Take care,
heyall
Very entertaining read with something different. Thanks for sharing.
your stories are always a good read not too long and to the point THANKS!!
I really liked the setup, but I thought the story was rushed. It would have been much better if you took the time to generate a lot of sexual tension.
Giavanna's thoughts would have made the story much more interesting. The conflict of what she was doing and how she was feeling was a missed opportunity.
The agent was a poorly thought out character that could have been much more interesting. Having her masturbate in the doorway was plain silly.
Please let the story continue for all three of them. Let the trial drag out needing a lot of preparation and attention to detail. Let the Fed have some fun in a threesome. That’s what mothers are for.
Hopefully this is the first part of many. This has so many possibilities that it could turn into a great series.
Thank you for this one. It was silly, but very fun and exciting. I especially like how Giavanna struggled. Much more believable.
Strange and wonderful. I hope there’s a second chapter as the moms get closer.
Hot ,sexy and very stimulating! A new story from you is always exciting, My Friend!
Please continue with a series that leads to lesbian and tgressones please!
Please continue this story. You have room for a bunch of chapter I'd guess.
you can do a lot with this beginning. A 3 some burg age agent would be a nice touch
This was one of your better short stories, but maybe you could
add a part 2. Maybe we could hear about trial, and how they
work off the stress. As always great read.
....THANKS....
Given the right opportunity many mothers and sons will give in to latent desire.
I was reading the story, not knowing who the author was. A big smile broke when I again saw by HeyAll. I am never disappointed, and had my own warm feelings. As always, thank you. At the end I thought maybe the two women were going to get together. Maybe?
On the whole a great read.
Build up was a little bit slow and some of the dialogue was stilted, but that's nit picking.
Would like a continuation, as suggested moms swapping their sons and and of course them getting together as well.
Super Hot incest story ! Incestual sex has always been the best for me! I had LOTS of fun in my late teens and early 20s. Still do just not near as often! Hit me up guys, love to share stories mastevens001 yahoo
I ate my first incestuous pussy when I was 10 years old, and have loved it ever since! This story can go in many directions, which I hope it does.
I never had the opportunity to have sex with my mom, but I had 4 sisters and have had sex with all 4. Good times many many years ago! Your story was nice and kept me hard. Thank you
So well written and hot, can't wait to read more about them.
Very well presented. A little build up with hesitation then unbridled fucking. The ending paragraph would suggest a follow up involving the agent. Cool if it featured her and her son fucking along side the Jen and hers, then a spontaneous mother-son exchange. Oh the possibilities. That's what a good writer leaves their audience, wanting more!
Super hot, but it would have been better if the agent went in after she and her son fucked, and ate her pussy, sucking her son's cum out.
In the kitchen next morning, she gives him a hand job before the agent's arrival. Could have delayed the arrival. Leo should have taken her from the back with her bending at the counter. After a pounding orgasm the agent could have arrived. Later the agent could also have got in the act.
Great story. Gotta do a part 3. if you can. Maybe something with the agent. Thanks. Keep up the great work.