by ilikeithot6308
I loved the story. The build up of trust and lust, plus good explanations for their feelings for each other. The pace of the increasing sexual tension and releases was hot. Great job! I'd love to read more.
Great description of character's thoughts and feelings. Wonderful imagery.
I'm divorced and going to find a new house and beagles!
it was a little slow at first but you warmed up nicely now let him nock her up;
keep on trucking tenbears43
that an otherwise good story was spoiled by the usual immature NA obsession with big tits.
So a four, not a five.
Good economizing while being very descriptive, no overkill to boredom and that is always great! This pair of characters could on for quite a few chapters without wearing out or getting tiresome. Neither is high maintenance or spineless and with the young woman assisting the older man to rise above the bitch ex-wife, the ties that bind them are there for the taking!
BRAVO!! Keep it going!!
Really enjoyed your story. Normaly I don't read 4 or 5 pagers. When I started this one I knew I liked your style & would finish it. Having been seduced by my present Lover, in the same way this lady seduced him, it seems very real, & believable. Yes My Lady is way younger than me.
Thank You for a very readable, Hot, story.
i like your work... but the hopeless romantic in me wants to see if they live happily ever after with lots of sex hahaha
Ive been reading at Literotica for years and this is one of the best ive ever read. Wonderfully written, great characters
I think you hit just about every emotional extreme one could have AND still have an amazing ending. I applaud your!! bravo!
Very good read & full of emotions,feelings & good fucking.Well done
I would love to see where this story goes. You've setup the characters well. Go ahead, you know you want to take it at least one more to see where they go. Can't wait. Thanks for a great read.
One of the VERY BEST stories here! Gave it a rare 5!!! Bet the old guy will sleep well for a long fucking time with a young babe like that.
Very real 'story'. Loved it.
Should there be more of this?
Silly question.
You done writing the next chapter yet?
Five star work, interesting characters and story.
I don't give many fives, however this story got one. Well written and easy to read.
They should have a great deal more fun! Very well composed and written; I hope to read more soon!
Good buildup and very well written. I can identify with the male character, having experienced a similar marital rift after twenty-five. The counseling was believable. [being a therapist] A great fantasy for us old farts, but my experience is that a successful coupling takes more work on the old guy's part. The confidence loss described is spot on in these situations,
Nice tale and chapter.
Well written and enjoyable story.
This chapter, is my opinion, can be in the romance section also.
5* for you.
I want to read the others chapters now.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
great job you have a extraordinary talent I can't wait to read another chapter
You're quickly turning into my favorite author on this site. Great story! Five plus stars and a favorite point! On to chapter two!
Talk about a left turn! I've read enough to become convinced you are either a child of the 60s or early 70s. How could you resist the overwhelming urge to name puppy de dos "Sherman"? The movie was terrible, but anyone who frequently watched Bullwinkle and friends (and suffers from any form of OCD) probably wouldn't be able to function with this little discrepancy!
Love the story so far and hope to read more of john and christie, I'd like to see what happens from there
I wish I had found this beautiful story earlier. I could have used someone asking me those questions.
I was able to break the hold on me depression on me. It has helped me in so many ways. If you are struggling with these issues, may I suggest Jim Donavan A rock Drummer who has published much work involving the vigus nerve
Loved it im Lucy and iv been getting amazing sex with an older man for about a year now and rate it way better than what iv gotten from guys my age except for one. How did it start well he is a friend of my dad and i had a crush on him since i guess i was to young and found out about boys and sex just sitting beside him gave me tingles between my legs and i wanted him to give me more so i tried teasing flirting and anything i thought of to get him to move on me even sitting opposite him and accidently giving him peeks at my pants but nothing worked. I had sex with a few guys and even with some of them i was imagining it was my crush that had his cock inside me. How did it change well i wanted him and when i became proper age i teased more sitting on him moving my bum discreetly and now finding his cock get hard so i knew he was getting hard as his cock was getting excited anyway. One night he and dad were watching tv a football thing and i said goodnight and went of to bed went to the bathroom and showered then back to my room and decided maybe if he sees me naked i might get him so i knew if either had to go to the toilet they would walk past my room plan hatched. Waiting took ages and my door just open i could just see them and had just a tshirt and shorts on. Finally i heard him say i need the toilet and he got up and headed to it i had butterflys and nerves as he walked past but just waited he walked past and went it now or never i took my tshirt and shorts off and stood listening until i heard the flush i open my door about quarter way enough he would see in on his way back and went to my wardrobe to make it look as i was getting something was i nervous yes a lot but felt myself get wet as well. The footsteps stopped its working he has seen me i turned towards the door to make sure he saw everything and his mouth was wide open i smiled and walked to the door as he just stood there gawking i took his hand put it on my wet kitty and whispered its you who has me this wet i need fucked he fiddled and put a finger way into me almost lifting me and said i have wanted to fuck you a long time but now you are old enough i will but not here or tonight come to my house tomorrow and i will love to give you the cock you have been making hard for years. I said i will and that was the start of the best sex iv ever had and learning how good trying new things like how good a cock in my bum is and outdoor sex !!!
I didn't notice anyone else speak up. Just FYI, Jeannie is a name of a woman. A genie lives in a lamp or bottle and grants wishes.
Too much emphasis on her huge boobs. We get it. She has giant knockers. Otherwise nice.
Beautiful Story. I hope that you will write more.
My wife of 56 years died last year. This story
brought back so many memories of our love.