All Comments on 'Luxury Accommodation Ch. 03'
by Whitesocks
- 19 Comments
Thank you very much, I am glad that you decided continue with the story and hope that there will be a Ch. 04. Before I finish, it's a great story.
This story is brilliant, just the right mix of humour, sex and life.I can't praise the writing enough. Please please write more and then some extra more. (yes I know it's bad english but please just do it) David
I hope you have several more chapters in mind. I enjoyed the humor that was thrown in here and there. Thanks!
Extremely good dialogue. Very witty. The author has professional-level talent. I could happily read dozens of chapters of this.
Good sex scenes too.
Warm sexy funny and engaging. Well done. A great read. Keep up the good work.
Professionally written! Loved the dialog, especially a lot the humor....several times I had to stop to laugh out loud. Sex was great also....reminded me of so many times with.my wife. Emma was very.similar to my Diane in that they were such ladies...who would fuck your brains out when turned on. This could turn to a novel.....keep up the good work!
I always read stories on this site and by far i think this is the best stories ever written on this site (my opinion). Thank you for a well done job.
I am a man. I have an older women and when i finished reading i was crying. The story was realy moving me inside. Thank you to bring up my emotions in full gear.
Truly enjoyed this story. Engaging and a very good read that was filled with emotions. Thanks for the great work!
Loved all three sequels, very well done. Especially all the hummer. Loved reading this, and will reread it several times. Five stars, wish it could be eight..
Thanks again. v
Great story,it was interesting that they were both so emotionally stunted that they required a child to recognise what they needed and wanted. It was luck that the daughter was so incredibly able, a bit of deus ex machina.
...that you are not a professional writer, because you are good enough to be one. Well, nearly: the plot is good, the writing literate, and it's funny; but you could do well to find how to describe the sex by saying more with less. This probably sounds a bit patronising (sorry about the English spelling), but then so does Chrissy, so there must be some of it deep in the author's psyche!
It is extremely rare that I get emotionally tied to a story. Its even more rare that I laugh out loud, by myself, when reading. I did both.
Very well written.
This is a fun and uncommonly articulate reed. Well done!
Sometimes, as I read, it is hard to believe that a human has the expansive knowledge and language skills to form words into such an amazing literary masterpiece.
But Mr. Whitesocks put it here.
So I have to believe.
Paul in Oklahoma
It’s May 2022 I just read your whole story and it was fantastic laughed out loud and cried a little. You’re a good writer I know you wrote it a long time ago but it was good you should write some more. The sex was fine which is why we found you but you don’t need sex to write well