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Author's Note: I hope you enjoyed the first part of the story. Chapter two featuring Ryan and Vicky's Taboo porn debut will be up sometimes next week. I won't give anything away, but will say that where this chapter wasn't too heavy on the taboo action, the next part will more than make up for it. As always, thank you for reading, voting and supporting my work. Lovecraft68
- COMMENTS
Very well done, didn't think I'd make it last the first page or two but glad I did. All of these types of stories are contrived, but I think you did a damn good job justifying it all. Makes for a better story too.
I love your work. And this was a super story. Lookin’ forward to the remainder as the son gets the mother!
An absolute masterpiece of erotica. Totally agree with all of the previous positive comments. See my comments after part 2. Can hardly wait.
No word i can write to describe how well written this story is. Erotica with character development are very rare and you naild it.
you are a magician.
Congratulations on the story. I recommend reading it.
However (Spoiler alert), and I apologize in advance in case I misinterpreted the words of the story, I would like to point out the fact that I was incredulous about the circumstance for which, in the country where the story is set, it is acceptable for a banal mother of a family accompanied by her inexperienced son to go to offices and sustain a heated business discussion concerning explicit sexual actions that they are to perform together.
Concur totally with the previous comment. Beautifully written with superlative character development. Bravo & kudos !! . . . .
Excellent story so far and extremely well told. I love the character build up and mental image of what they're going through as it reads so real. It's too bad the uncle is such an ass, but every good tale has to have its bad guy. It's too bad some of you're commenters can't seem to get past their own personal issues to give a real critique of the writing and plot development, but that's too be expected I suppose. 5/5 from me m and I'll keep my personal thoughts to myself on what I feel would have made it better up to this point.
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I gave this a 4. Preserve judgement. Pretty good writing, but he comes across as such a prick that I don’t care if he gets laid or not. He offers no support to his poor horny mother and her needs-sexual and getting out of the titty bar. In part 2 I hope she fucks the uncle (what she clearly wanted to do) and cucks her son while she fucks the uncle. It would serve the little prick right. Turning down pussy? My god! He should have resolved that issue or shot himself by page 2
This and the following chapter makeup the best story on the Internet. Without a doubt!
I do like how the son is portrayed as being a hard working person to help the family survive after the father's dead. It's also a believable background for making him more mature, respectful, caring and thoughtful than the usual twenty year old young man in most mom-son stories. The situation the family finds itself in seems to be realistic, as far as I can tell, knowing your country from media only.
So, all in all I had fun reading the first part, exept for a few bumps in the road, so to speak. The reasoning mom is giving to keep the house at all cost is not convincing. She has her memories, photos and probably a number of other memorabilia that she can take anywhere, and most of all she has her children.
Another disturbing event is her wanting to visit the brother in law alone, although he even proposes to bring her son along for the meeting. Considering everything about their background I got the impression she wants to fuck that guy, to get the money but also just for the fun of it, using the family's situation as an excuse to absolve herself for wanting to be used by that hunk of a man.
And to be willing to let him have a day with her underage daughters without supervision? NO WAY!
As always, a Lovecraft story is well worth reading. Thank you for this excellent tale of the love between a mother and her son. I am certainly looking forward to the revelations of part 2. If I was a gambling man, I’d have 50c that says the hot action won’t finish after the $60,000 deal. We’ll see. Well worth all of five stars, more if they were available.
Just in passing, this story also highlights the shortcomings of the US health “care” system.
First off, let me just say this story is exactly what Incest Erotica is ALL about.
However I do wish that the rare misspelled words and other errors weren’t there.
With that said, you definitely earn 5 stars on this one ☝️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️
Now, I’m getting ready to read part two. And if my hunch is correct, because of the great storyteller that I know you to be…it’s going to be fucking amazing!!! 😉
Don't let the haters get to you. They only can dream about having the imagination and the ability to write that you do. There are just too many mom-son stories that are so predictable, the same two plots over and over again. It is refreshing to see something different.
Looking forward to part two. I think it is very good. A lot of thought went into this.
I see many people forget that this is a site that has stories written by creative artists. Spelling errors are bound to happen unless proofread by multiple people, I assume that's how it's done. In my opinion that most guys have or had at one time a lustrous thought at one time of either a mother, sister or aunt, I'm sure many will say they haven't... really?
I very much enjoyed it, except for the many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors! You really should get on top of that, as it does tend to detract from the story line.
Excellent story. I'm usually more into the brother / sister angle but this was really good. Looking forward to reading part 2.
The pig of a mother will probably sell her daughters into child porn. If the son didn't have the maturity of a six year old, he would already have reported the cunt to CPS. One of your worst.
Is a disgusting whore. Odds are, she's already fucked around while her husband was still alive. She's not doing for her kids, or to save the house, she's doing because she wants the pornstar brother in laws dick, and will use her own kids as an excuse to get it. If I was her son, I'd slap the slut out of her, and disown her. When she offered to let the pervert take her young daughters out on his own, I stopped reading. Too creepy. This left a bad taste. Zero stars.
I don't think that I have ever read a mother-son story where the son truly didn't want to do it. I felt his resistance and lived his agony as he gave in to carnal desire. Another great story. I look forward to to the next one being more action oriented (please).
" Mom shook her head in disgust, but as she did my trousers tightened at the thought of where this might be going."
... was neither fat nor ugly when he started in the industry.
Comment,you made that kid look like a straight fucken pussy besides how could a grown young adult have never thought of having sex with his mom you said it yourself every kid has thought of his mother sexually growing up so him being already in college how the fuck could he not have ever thought about his mom especially watching all that porn like he did and to top it off all the porn actors he would watch are mom son incest porn stats so you really fucked that one off and not only that but you made him look like a complete bitch like a straight pussy no adult would ever put so much resistance to fuck their mother or anyone at that point.he practically might as well have said I'm gonna call the cops and tell them your forcing me to have sex .you just really exxagerated way too fucken much I was hating his character saying you fucken ponk kid you must be fucken gay everything else was good except the mentioned.
This story could run forever, it has it all. Now keep it going, but with shorter chapters. It was a very good read.......THANKS
Loved the start of this story.. enjoyed how mom came into her son's room and seduced him.. giving him a taste of what tomorrow brings
A beautiful, amazing mother in a beautiful, amazing story and both also happen to be very sexy! Thank you for sharing this Masterpiece! Five stars and two thumbs up!
I'm really enjoying this story. The plot feels more... grounded in realism, somehow. I was actually feeling anxious for your characters and their awful situation. What really did it for me is how both characters initially didn't have an attraction to each other, and had to work to flip the switch.
It's a refreshing change of pace; usually, one party or the other-- or both-- have some kind of hidden taboo desire. Having both characters build towards it was great. Thanks for the story, and I'm diving into part two now.
Shes becoming a whore so that she can keep the house that reminds her of her husband, by doing the exact thing he never wanted her to do. She is completely trashing his memory in order to keep a meaninless memory.
The truth is, she probably always wanted her brother in laws big cock, and now that her husband is dead, and cant stop her, she is going to get it, and to hell with her dead husbands wishes.
The son is just as bad. He made a promise to his father on his death bed, and is now pissing on that promise in order to get some pussy.
Whats next? Is she going to sell the girls to him too? After all, she just sold her son into prostitution against his wishes. Youll note that when the two little girls were mentioned, she didnt say no, only that Malcolm didnt want that. How reasuring.
This one isnt erotic, merely disturbing.
Great build-up! It's sort of like waiting for a hurricane or a blizzard to arrive.You know it's coming and each day the level of excitement rises until : BaBoom!
I simply must say the build up to the main event is extremly well crafted and the characters a very well done as well simply cant wait to read the next instalment FIVE STARS ~BRAVO !
Something about the combo of them both wanting it and yet him being so shy about it AND the dirty talk was an incredible turn on. Thank you. AND THANKS FOR POSTING THE SECOND CHAPTER! You definitely left me wanting more.
Beautiful story, great romance, love your characterization.
Definitively one of best story I've ever red here !
Thank you very much and keep writing please.
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I just happened on this story and it is excellent. I look forward to reading all of your submissions.
Featuring 'Hot Mommy' and 'Sonny Boy' getting his stick wet...and more in the next film.
... and kink to write something so absurd and wild within a realistic theme and setting. A lot of commenters got annoyed by the characters - which only shows how much they bought into the realism. It's the beauty of this, that I managed to jerk-off to even the relatively mundane handjob session - because the world was so immersive. Very good world building done mostly through dialogue. Kudos.
this is one of the most well developed mother-son incest stories I have read, almost believable! I also liked the time and space you have developed to the emotions and the angst and the doubts the characters felt, and the shades of gray in the uncle's character. The romance in your erotic stories is well developed too, makes them all the more enjoyable.
one comment about style: I have read several of your stories, and I love them all but couldn't help noticing that the sexual acts usually proceed in a pretty predictable sequence. The plots have interesting variations, but when we get to the action, it becomes extremely predictable. The woman comes first by being fingered ("she comes first" is a good policy, contributes to education of the male readers:), then the man is blown, and when it comes to the penetrative sex, she always screams "put a finger in my ass" right before she comes, etc. How about mixing it up a bit?
Lest you take the criticism in the wrong way, I want to end by saying Keep up the good work; your work is a real "pleasure" to read.
Couldn't even finish part one. Uncle Malcolm was so disgusting that I lost respect for the mom when she went to talk to him alone. As the kid I'd have been thinking about running away with my little sisters once I knew mom was such a tramp she'd let that scumbag fuck her for money.
The basic idea had potential, but the mom being a slutty waitress and the uncle being a major scumbag made the story about as much fun as having your face shoved into a public toilet...
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he is a selfish, director of personal interest (at the expense of all others) porn.
That he does not understand the consequences of his behaviour is far too simplistic for reality.
Having just discovered this story, and having read many an erotic story online over the years, I must say well done. You developed all the characters well, and with each page, it read like a mini novel. Slowly building a plot that was not truly completely revealed,until the last sentence was absorbed. A very few errors in grammar, but who is keeping score? 5 star effort for me.
Out of all the incest stories i like, it's ones where family members perform for porn studios or on webcams. There's just something about family members exposing themselves on camera for the world to see that really turns me on. With that said, I liked how the son was very protective and reluctant, but i think it was really overdone to the point where he was becoming a whiny little bitch. Please, please, please continue to make more incest stories involving family members filming themselves in a porno, whether it be private (like this story) or for public distribution, which is even hotter. There arent many incest stories involving them filming for porn studios, so it would be really awesome if you could make more of this type of category. Thank you.
All that angst...very real, and understandable...Heightens the plot, and moves the action...All good...
had to stop reading this too! mommy isn't a MILF she is a whore slut with diseases PERIOD