by Margin Walker
Very erotic story and not what one has come to expect will happen. Good work and hope to read more like it.
Great story a few minor mistakes, over all very very hot!
way, way, way too much talking.
So so and so said "hi" and I said "hi" and he said "turn on the game" and I said "ok" and he said this and I said that and he said this and I said.... blah, blah blah blah blah blah blah.
we don't need to read every single syllable of a conversation, especially when it doesn't add anything to the story.
My wife and I love when we get together with friends and this happens. It's easier for us because we never wear clothes in our house and sometimes one thing leads to another because we and our friends are like minded and don't hesitate to fuck or 69 with an audience. Anything goes as long as it's consensual and no one is offended. BARE469
Your storytelling is superb. The way you create atmosphere and develop characters is impressive. Your story has become a guilty pleasure of mine, providing more than a few moments of, shall we say, personal enjoyment. Keep up the great work!
This is easily the best story I have read on here. You should be selling your stories, my friend. Thanks for a fantastic read. So hot.
Really enjoyed this. It stayed in the context of exhib and voyeur too, which I find very sexy cos its generally more believable
I bet your friends took turns with your wife in front of you rest of the night doing her bareback