All Comments on 'My Wife the Unaware Model'
by shadow_aspects
- 18 Comments
This is my first attempt at erotic fiction, so I wanted to put this out there to see if anybody would want to read on and if they had any thoughts. If you could take a minute to leave a comment that would be so appreciated.
I'm 100% sure you are right :-)
That comment must be appearing, not sure David is ready for that though... His arousal might begin to be tainted by guilt and fear.
Thank you SO much for commenting though. I have been a reader here for years and years so it is a big step to publish my first writing.
Good start. Next I expect David will try some shower shots and then fit hidden cameras. But at some stage, to move the story forward, I assume Heather will find out. I'll be interested to see her reaction, mine would 'kill me' ok, probably divorce me.
As I say, good quality start, however why would you share her real name?
Yes please continue this tale, but please let her in on what is happening or you might be creating a very difficult time in their marriage, assuming this is fiction, even worst if it is not fiction.
This is a whole new area for me. Creepshots? Haven't heard of that before. I noticed I was a little conflicted as I read the story. Well written IMHO. David is going down a path that hopefully turns out to be fun but the potential negative consequences could be devastating for him. It feels like a betrayal to post a pic of his wife w/o her knowledge. She'll be pissed when she finds out.
Once embarked on this kind of behavior, it is inevitable that it will become compulsive for David and he will need bigger kicks in order to be satisfied so that things escalate. That would tend to overcome any latent feelings of guilt or fear, fear especially being part of the kick. You have sown the seed that Heather can be a bit of a bitch at work, somewhere along the line someone from work should stumble over the site ?
Thank you again for the comments everybody. I've just submitted Chapter 2 and hope you enjoy it.
Great start and very true to how things start. And yes it does become addictive. I, like many other husbands love exposing my wife's pictures, and not just candid nudes about poses full on frontal nudes. We've attended some wild adult parties over the years, some.of which allowed cameras. I've share d pics of her being pretty slutty with others, both men and women.
This is so similar to my true life story as my wife is a primary school teacher. She is on the web in both sexy underwear and naked, and completely unaware.