All Comments on 'Penal Slavery Pt. 04'

"Many thanks to ZZchromosome for his insightful comments and edits that helped make this a better story." My first editor's credit on Lit! :-)

My first editing credit on Lit! Thx for the opportunity to read your story and make suggestions, it was fun.

Great story, keep it up!

Hope to read you again soon.

I can't wait to learn about Red, Nympho and Poseidon's future at the Lodge and eventually once they've served their time maybe?

Wonder where Red and Jack are going? Will it work?

Love-ly chapter!

Great story!