All Comments on 'Queen Yavara Ch. 13'

While I'm really torn on the rape. Halfcon is my dread kink.

maybe I'm not imaginative but you have written several of my most heinous fantasies. and that's not even your best writing! Using quick and dirty sex to build quick and dirty personalities that write themselves thru post coitus is masterful. I always thought leaving as much of the environment to the mind and only detailing scene progression (I call that strobe scene) has always been my favorite writing style. And you do that with skill

Loved it!