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Click hereHe snickered. "And your mom says I'm the bad influence."
"Come on. Run naked across the street with me, and I'll let you play with my tits again."
"Deal," he said instantly.
Before I could even react, he reached over and threw the door open. Wind blew into the car and I shrieked as rain splashed unexpectedly along my bare skin. Ashton grabbed my hand, tugging me out of the backseat as I giggled and clutched my clothes to my chest. He closed the door and stopped, pulling me in for a heated kiss as rain soaked our hair and bodies, then grabbed my hand as we rushed across the street for what I hoped was the beginning of a long frucking summer.
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Special thanks to norafares, chasten, and OneAuthor for proofreading and feedback, as well as the amazingly awesome people who beta read. KW, AG, Paul M, Kevin Matheny, KZ, AP, ED, centralsquareguy, AS, KJ, N, and PM - thank you all for your support. And a huge extra-special thanks to my fiance for being a huge frucking nerd and helping me with some of the more detailed references. Since I didn't manage to work this line into the story, I'll share with you all one of the insults he was most proud of:
"I bet you're someone who picks Oddjob in GoldenEye and calls it ~strategy~"
- COMMENTS
This was truly amazing. Lots of laughter, great teasing and emotional moments. Thank you
This reminds me of how my first girlfriend and I would enjoy each other and then have a Dynasty Warriors break before we got back to it.
I didn’t expect to have my nostalgia and heartstrings pulled like this.
How dare you, and also thank you.
Top 5 after 10 years of having read at least 2 or 3 stories every couple of weeks
Well, this was just so right.
The perfect first time story, incredibly sweet, incredibly hot, incredibly tender. Flawless.
Liked it so much I just read the last three pages again. I love these kids. Wish I'd had a girlfriend like that when I was 19, though I wouldn't have been the boyfriend he was.
This was an actual story and not just pornography. What an unusual feeling to read an actual story on here, and not just a flapping fantasy. What the fap? ;)
You are a terrific writer! Personality, emotion, setting are all vivid and fun. I find my self choosing sides immediately!
Thanks for the story.
Another phenomenal story. I read the prequel to this story and I kept waiting for Scott to reappear on his way in from Mallory. You are so good at what you do.
Congratulations on your engagement. I hope it all goes smoothly for you. Is he a writer we know?
See, the thing that happened is, I usually check new stories by category and not author. Which, granted, is a little dumb, and as a responsible user of this website I should absolutely know better, but anyway, the point is: I missed this one entirely and only discovered it on my most recent adventure in procrastination-land. And wow was that both funny and hot! Amazing job - your "When The Lights Go Out" universe is genuinely a brilliant invention (but, as you surely have been informed by the adoring public, does not lead to a good, catchy abbreviation like, say, Marvel Cinematic Universe or Blue Girl Universe, putting a serious dampener on the millions you are probably already raking in with these stories; although the BGU will leave the papyrology people seriously confused, so there is that). And it even has a hopeful message for people in countries with questionable power grids!
Seriously though: Awesome as always. Thank you so much for taking the time to write, edit, and publish this for us! It's always a pleasure reading - or rereading - your stories, and I am really grateful for the time and effort you clearly put into this.
Excellent all around. While it doesn’t need another chapter in the First Time category, a sequel with these character in the summer Romance category could also be really good.
If I could give you ten stars I would, hell have a billion stars, you deserve it.
Hi, MsCheryl, I saved this one to read later during the geek pride event but, geeky me, lost it in my list until now. It’s a delightful story with a lot of little Easter Eggs from so many different things that made me smile as well as the sweet adventure of having that first encounter one doesn’t forget if done right. Great job all around and 5*. Now I may have to pull out the Wii and Mario Kart…and the note at the end reminds me that Goldeneye should still be in there somewhere, too. ;-)
Indredible good writing. You even happened to bring a tear of happiness into an old man's eyes. Thank you so much - again and again, for all of your work!
Wow! The anticipation and sexual tension was off the charts!!!! I absolutely loved this!!!!
This is how sexual tension and banter *should* be done--full of nuance and surprise, as it ramps up the intensity step by step. Well done on this one; 5 stars.
My idea of gaming is ancient Papyrus auto racing sims, but that doesn’t matter. In spite of references that went way over my superannuated head, this is unquestionably the best First Time story here, and among the best in any category. Easy 5 stars, and would love to see the further adventures of these two.
Love this story. Any chance of a sequel to this and Lakeside Park? I’d love to see how Ramona, Ashton and Liz interact after this.
Absolutely incredible. Well written and erotic as hell although I’m a sucker for first love/first time stories.
This may be my new favourite story! I was enthralled and enchanted long before things turned sexy, and would love to read more about these characters. Definitely going to be checking out your other work!
Thank you for a great romantic story. And the thoughts of the rainstorm in a car were sexy as all hell. I use to love to make love in a car during a thunderstorm. I have not done so for years, but it was my favorite when young. Actually almost as much fun as under a fallen slab or rock on a mountain cliff while lightning struck nearby. But that last only happened only once and the thunderstorm in a car happened many times. Just something about sex and making love with the world going crazy around you. Tin roofs and thunderstorms are great too, but only because they are sort of like doing it in a car. Sex in the backseat of a car is just that, sex. But with lightning flashing, the wind rocking the car, and the beating of the rain it almost always becomes making love. :-) Thanks for taking an old man's memory back to being nineteen and in the backseat of a 64 Chevy with a special girl and a wild thunderstorm. If I had not gone back to a silly old Asian War and then come back to find her with a new love and pregnant I might have married that girl. Just because I fell in love during a rainstorm. But there were other rain storms and girls to dance with. We all need to learn to dance in the rain to the sound of the thunder. :-)
I think this is the best First Time story to appear here ever - the plot is perfect ... likewise the dialog ... the character development ... I learned more about gaming than I had in total before this - I almost didn't read the story when I saw the first reference to gaming, but I have read all of the author's stories that have appeared here - and reread most of them - so I could pass this by
Excellent story with great contextual gaming details. We loved Ramona and her competitive nature.
We sent some other comments directly.
-MM
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there were a lot of guys who thought I existed solely to teach them about life, the universe, and everything. Specifically, they seemed to think that the answer lay in my vagina.
Since I was fairly certain that nothing in my vagina added up to forty-two and would therefore disappoint those wannabe hitchhikers,
†*****"""""
Briliant. LMAO and all that
Very nice, thanks
Well,if this ain't the fuckingest erotic scene ever! Fuck you so much for such a great story,CT
excellent story, what can I say, we all remember our first time. mine was something less than climactic. Suffice it to say the one eyed guy doesn't see to well in the dark. I do love Nora Fares work also.
Dirty old man here, who hasn't played even one game in at least 20+ years, and I was laughing, when I wasn't simply smiling ear to ear, through the entire story. From the situations and characters it was a sheer joy to read. Thank you.
If I hadn't enjoyed several of your other stories I'd have turned off as I waded through the gaming nonsense but, as usual, the human relationship made it worth the read.
RE: Loved it and potentially gave it a 5
Oops... that was supposed to say "previously gave it a 5"!
Loved it and potentially gave it a 5. I just finished reading the contemporaneous "Lakeside Park", which gave me more insight into her mom's behavior and the reason for keeping her daughter away from the neighbor's son. Thanks, MsCheryl!
One of the very best stories even posted on Literotica. Humour, pathos, and sexy all in one concise story.
Congratulation
Yeah, OK I've heard of gamebox, thought you had moved into sci-fi territory.
I persevered & was rewarded when I found your familiar style.
Loved it, & you've left the door open for another series, can't wait.
What an amazing story! I'm not a gamer, but my lack of knowledge did not disttact from the story. Thank you!
Sofa king hot. May you be blessed with cock and/or cunt of your geekiest dreams. Thank and spank you (with love and only if they does it for you).
Some of the gaming references went right over my head, but it didn't matter. It was brilliant (that's from my generation). She knew what she wanted and he was courteous towards her, thoroughly enjoyed that interaction.
I thought it was brilliant and I'm to old for computer games. Although I do remember Mario. 5 stars of course.
Loved this story. I really admire your writing chops. Every story is stellar
So enjoyable
So much fun! And I am being greedy wondering what happens next if anything. If we never get a sequel it was still a great read. The gaming references were spot on.