All Comments on 'Sindys Undoing'
by SindySuxALot
- 18 Comments
What a real turn on, I am covered in cum as I write this......more, Please!!!!!!! And, as soon as you can!!!
Every sissy fantasy of 20-30 years ago rolled into one, even the lisping.
I call this "Story Sux A Lot."
Please lose the lisping in dialogue. There are conflicting opinions, but most writers agree that even too much slang in dialogue is very annoying. The constant lisping really was off putting, and I honestly don't see how failing to speak properly equals increased femininity. I would like to read more, but please drop the lisping.
This is not a big problem, but you have Bob double wrapping his cock. Putting on two condoms will very often cause them to break because they are rubbing against each other. DON'T DOUBLE WRAP!!
I agree with the others; get rid of the lisping. It is not only stupid sounding, it doesn't make any sense at all. Sissy's don't do it in the first place.
In your eagerness to write something hot and edgy, you have written a cartoon. The lisp is very irritating. Your mistress is not dominant. She is psychotic, as is the good doctor. You dropped us so far into the story the reader is distracted wondering how the heck did this happen. Your hints aren't enough to support the current action.
rosa-blanca.ru after the story are like a working cock on a sissy. This was not posted in noncon but relies heavily upon it. Future chapters or stories would benefit from an author's note at the start regarding noncon or fetish themes. Some authors take a too bad attitude about such notes, but I think they help you reach your target audience. They also help reduce flaming views from folks not into what you like.
I'm jealous of your sissy!! I wish someone would TRAIN me that way. I was leaking the entire time I was reading it.
Especially the description of sissy Sindy, her look and her watching porn.
Loved all verbal humiliation too
I really wish that I was Sindy because I have always wanted this to happen to me. I was as hard as the whole time I was reading the story.
Brilliant and I hope one day there will be a number 4.
Sindy is such a Lucky Sissy for having a Wonderful Mistress to care for her!
It's too bad somebody has to be degraded that way to make somebody feel important but that's where it is in the story hopefully it never happens in real life take care
First of all the lisp is irritating and just plain stupid. Lucy sounds more like a psychopathic bitch than a mistress. Doctor Bob needs to have his medical license revoked and undergo psychotherapy. The characters and the situations you placed them in lost all eroticism and tended to make the read comical rather than sexual.