All Comments on 'Sweet Submission Ch. 02'

Great writing - makes me want to go tie someone up and tease her like that until she weeps with the agony of delayed release.

simply amazing. No words can describe how wonderful your stories are. You have a talent that I, for one, wish I had a drop of. Keep writing, keep teasing and keep tormenting in your own delicious way. ~squirms & whimpers~

that Alex had to get a woman to do his work. At least he could and should have been man enough to break her or boot her out. Now that she has had a taste for the other side, what is stopping her from seeing other women and letting Alex entertain himself with Miss Thumb and the Palmer sisters? The next think you know is she will be in the company of the Chinese Slave Girl and her Mistress. Then she will quit her job and become just another slave girl as the Chinese girl has.

Again, amazing. Thanks. Waiting with bated breath, hoping for more.

I love this story and have definitely read it a couple of times! My favorite part is the growing love between her and Alex. Although sharing really isn't my cup of tea, you pulled it off beautifully, though I'm not sure about the allusion to future meetings.

I really hope you continue the story and focus more on her and Alex's personal growth and love together.

Anyways love your work! Thank you for sharing it with us!

Though I do like this story a lot, I ended up skipping some parts, looking for when Alex will join the fun. I know you said that this would be the end of this story, but please write more & have more of Alex. He's an incredible character!! :)

Love your writing!

I know this was the conclusion, and it was so so hot...but I need more LOL. I really want to see more of Alex.

best story on this site ----where is part 3?

I'm weak with desire. Ch. 03, please oh please!

Typically I really hate men domination women, they turned me off of straight sex. But I make an exception for Alex, no pain, no humiliation, and he genuinely cares about her :)

The story is my every fantasy.... no pain or degradation. Just pure bliss in submission. Thank you

I love this. He’s so sweet and good to her.