All Comments on 'When We Were Young Ch. 04'
by flyingbluejay
- 7 Comments
What??? All you get is negative feedback? Argghhh.... my apologies that I haven't commented earlier. Well, here goes:
What a great story and so well done. It's got warmth and soul, and takes me back to a time, well a long time ago, when I was that age. The "naughtiness" in the church just made me smile, recalling what I wished I had done at church back then. So much seems very genuine, like a true-to-life story. If it's a true account, thank you for sharing. If it's fictitious, great job in making it so real. If it's somewhere in between, again great job.
I'm sorry you are getting negative feedback. It's quite good as far as I'm concerned. Even though it may be an uncomfortable situation, it happens. And this all feels pretty real and raw to me.
Love the story, both present and past. Characters are believable and likeable. I'm looking forward to the next installment!!! 5 stars
Don’t be discouraged! This website has diverse readers that look for different things, and sometimes they’ll comment about how a story isn’t the particular kind of thing they like. It doesn’t need to be! I think you’ve presented a clear vision in the four chapters you’ve released so far, and it’s been fun, sexy, and cozy.
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