All Comments on 'Working For My Pimp Ch. 01'

Good girl.

c xx

Good story. That last line had me going - the thought of you fucking father and son, too much! We need some more on this please.

pease add more to this

Interesting start, needs background set up and character development. looking forward to more.

Which is rather a pity because it just might be a good story.

Signed in blood

Moog McMoog.

very very good girl ;)

Damien

Very appealing start. I'm anxious to read the next chapter.

Really enjoyed your unusual style.