All Comments on 'A Game of Basketball Pt. 05'

The story is fine without all the super hero stuff.

But that's what the story is, a superhero origin story that's connected with all the other stories I've written so far.

Didn't think a superhero was actually coming, that's so exciting! Kinda looking forward to it.

Please don't add superheroes. The story is amazing the way it is.

I love the story. It has some depth to it. Please keep it coming

I guess sooner or later Nicole is going fess up that she used to be Kevin?

I'm loving the story so far. It will be interesting to see what Dave's reaction will be when he finds out Nicole is his former best friend.

The superhero stuff kind of detracts from the love Nicole and Dave have, but I can see where this is heading....

The superhero stuff came out of nowhere and is really dumb