All Comments on 'A New Life Pt. 01'

This story was so sexy, and so beautifully written. Highly erotic and definately very sensual which eventually turns dirty and slutty..... and fabulously horny.

I read the story on a summers day parked in a car park wanking myself silly, not caring by the end who was watching, as any exhibitionist will know

I hope there will be more to follow.

I have exposed myself in changing rooms to men and got excited whe they saw my pussy. I have shopped for shoes without panties or bra on and let the girls have a good look whe I lifted my leg. I n the park a young guy was looking at me so I went in the ladies toilet and went in a cubical he came in and the was not locked he found me naked I let him fuck me

love Jan

Enjoyed your story, and found the art works that you referred to. The Egon Schiele work that you called "the dream look" is also known by other names: "girl seen in a dream" or "observed in a dream". Methinks some things lost in translation. It can be viewed if you search the NY Met art museum site. Well written!!

is the title Schiele gave it in his native language, German. Like many German words there isn't an exact English equivalent, so there have been several different versions of the title in English...

This is an excellent story which aroused me much more than I expected. I’m looking forward to reading other parts, which I cannot wait for. Thank you, I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.

T

Brilliant story line really well told and fantastically erotic.