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Click hereAs Claire began to come down she took me back into her mouth and did some magic with her tongue.
"I'm going to come," I panted shortly after.
She didn't lift her mouth off. She just moved a bit and let me come in her mouth. She began swallowing and when they were both finished she quickly turned and began kissing me. It was the first time I'd tasted myself or any man. I recalled saying to myself,I taste good.
Claire abruptly turned, sat up and reached for the opened wine bottle. She poured two glasses then asked, "Are you going to drink this lying down?"
"No," I said as I turned to sit next to her.
"Well, that was a surprise. A very pleasant surprise," she smiled before taking a sip.
"Yup, it was. What's next?" I remarked
"How long will it take you to recover?" Claire asked.
"Thirty minutes or so, why?" I'd asked looking in her beautiful green eyes.
"Good, we'll drink the bottle, pick up our clothes and go to bed."
"Oh," I quietly said.
"We'll go to the same bed, silly," she smiled. "We've got a couple of days together before we leave. Mom and Dad are gone to the Lake with the Hunters and the Ericsons. Does that sound like a plan?"
"Drink slowly. I want to savor our first time together. By the way what was that guy's name. The one who missed your beautiful pussy then ran through the gate?" I asked.
"He never said and didn't tell him mine when I when he picked me up at the bar," replied Claire. "Why?"
"I need to thank him for disappointing you," I laughed.
"I'm no slut. Before tonight I'd only picked up a guy like that twice before for sex. I felt terribly horny and wanted a no-strings fuck," she explained.
The wine bottle was only half empty as we carried our clothes, glasses and expectations upstairs to Claire's bedroom.
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After they finished recalling that early summer day, his wife said, "Let's retire for the night and make love." With that both women stood in the cold air, Jack offered each his hand to help them out of the water. In seconds the two women were running into the house while Jack paused to quickly cover the hot tub.
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Veronica walked to Carol, put her arm around her waist after she'd removed her coat and kissed her. saying, "Let's go upstairs, I've missed you."
Mary Claire had been sitting in my desk chair looking at some recipes on the 'net when she looked up and said, "Dinner in an hour Mom."
"I'll help you," I replied.
"Thanks, Dad, I appreciate that," smiled Mary Claire. "All the workmen are gone."
We left Ashley and Katrina snuggling together at the end of the couch as they read their text books. I followed Mary Claire into the kitchen. As we were walking I noticed she'd begun to unbutton her blouse. As soon as we reached the kitchen she slipped it off her shoulders and let it drop to her waist. She unfastened her bra, slid it down her arms then pulled the blouse back onto her shoulders. "Thought I'd add a little bit of interest to dinner prep," she grinned turning around with just the inside edges of her breasts exposed. "Would you like me to put on stockings?"
"Of course," I smiled.
She took me by the hand and led me down the short hallway in the rear of the kitchen to her bedroom, unzipping her skirt as we walked. She rummaged in a dresser drawer and produced a beige garter belt and a pair of dark brown sheer stockings. As I leaned against the door jamb, after fastening the garter belt around her waist she sat on the bed and began pulling her hose on. "Will you fuck me tonight? I really want to feel you inside me," she asked fastening a stocking.
"Mary Claire, you already know the answer to that, of course I will," I grinned as I took a step toward her. She stood and melted into my arms and in between kisses said, "I love you, Dad, I really, really do. I love Mom and Carol and both your daughters. I want to live with your family forever. Can I?"
"Same answer, of course you can sweetheart, and we all love you too. You can live with us as long as you wish," I affirmed as my hand grasped one of her bare breasts.
"Pumps, strappy sandals, or slides," asked Mary Claire.
"How about beige pumps?" I offered.
"How was your study session with Gloria, was it? And her sisters?" I asked
"A very productive ninety minutes, we'll do it again Thursday," smiled Mary Claire. "I think all I really need to learn is the techniques behind each type of question and strategies to use for each section of the test. Several of the sample questions I answered seemed obvious to me but Sam and Abi struggled a bit."
After taking my hands out of her open blouse we got somewhat serious about fixing dinner, but it was a good thing that no one was starving because it didn't get into the oven until well after six. In fact it was six thirty when Carol and Veronica came down obviously satiated judging from the dreamy expressions on their faces. "Have fun?" I asked.
"Ohh, yes," replied Carol throwing her arms around my neck. As we broke the kiss she noticed Mary Claire's blouse which was tucked in but open by four inches or so all the way down to her waistband and said, "So have you two, I see."
They were both wearing short robes that didn't begin to cover their stocking tops. After kissing both Mary Claire and me, Carol took her lover's hand and led our wife into the den where they cuddled together on the second sofa. Their kissing and cuddling evidently had an effect on our daughters. As I entered the den to call them to dinner Katrina and Ashley had let the books fall to the floor and were engaged in a heavy dose of kissing and petting.
Dinner was an excellent culinary experience as well as a lot of fun for the six of us. By the time dinner was over, the coffee consumed, both Katrina and Ashley were topless and Carol and Veronica couldn't keep their hands off each other. Mary Claire and I cleaned up the kitchen then we spent an hour in the den watching a recorded comedy. Mary Claire had noticed the nylons on my ankles and had asked me to take off my khakis while we were in the kitchen and was gently running her hand up and down my now nylon covered legs. It had just ended when Lauren walked in the front door. She looked toward the kitchen first, then into the den, remarking, "I need a shower, then are we still on?" she asked looking expectantly at Katrina.
"Gee, I don't know?" said Ashley feigning disinterest.
Seeing Lauren's face drop, Katrina laughed, saying "Of course come to bed in heels and thigh highs, and we'll decide if we want to keep you."
Before going upstairs Lauren looked at me and stepped a bit nearer to confirm what she was seeing. "Light tan, eh, nice color for you," she smiled before turning to go up.
Before going upstairs, Mary Claire and I took a few minutes to turn off all the lights on the first floor.
When Mary Claire and I got to the bedroom the camera was on and Carol and Veronica were in garter hose and heels their arms wrapped around one another, grinding their pussies into each other as they kissed, cooed and petted.
Mary Claire finished undressing me and I returned the favor but left on her hose and heels. I stood behind her pulling her luscious ass against me as I kneaded her breasts, kissing the back of her neck. She turned and climbed on the bed, pulling me with her.
We were facing each other on our sides mutually holding and touching pleasure points as we kissed, when Veronica asked, "Handsome will you and Mary Claire try something for me?"
Mary Claire turned and looked at my wives and said, "Anything, as long as he makes love to me."
"Mary Claire, turn onto your side with your back to Scott and let me hold your leg up. Handsome, enter her from behind," I found those instructions easy to follow and with as wet as Mary Claire's pussy was I was soon deeply inside her.
Holding onto her breasts as I fucked her gently and slowly stroking in and out, I heard Veronica ask, "Mary Claire, can you come in that position?"
"I don't know why not," she gasped.
I continued moving in and out as Veronica held her leg up. I glanced down toward her raised leg and seeing her stocking and heels started to stroke her harder and deeper. Looking across her at Veronica kneeling with her legs spread and Carol's hand caressing her pussy also made me more energetic. "Harder, Dad, I'm almost there, almost ... there. Oh, God, Fuck me harder Dad, Harder."
She came with such force that she almost bent in half and my cock wasn't in her more than two inches or so as I spurted my release. As she began to relax I pushed my still erect cock in her as deeply as I could while holding her breasts and kissing her neck.
As I rolled away from Mary Claire to lie on my back she cuddled next to me with her leg across mine and her arm across my chest and her face snuggled into my neck, my wife said, "Nice work you two, thanks."
I asked, "Thanks? Thanks for what."
"Next time I fuck Max I want to do it in that position with you holding my leg up so you can watch him pulling and pushing in and out of my cunt. My cunt lips should kinda follow his cock and I'll bet you'd like to see that," she grinned.
"I'd like that too," smiled Carol.
"Which part?" I asked.
"Max fucking, you watching," she replied looking at me with a broad grin.
"Mary Claire, stay where you are against my husband," said Veronica before she got up and walked around the bed turning off the lights and the camera then climbed in on my other side. As Carol moved against Mary Claire she covered all four of us. All three women kissed me and both kissed Mary Claire. As I was falling asleep someone's hand was wrapped around my flaccid cock and again I thought,There cannot be a more blessed man than me.
I hope you're continuing to enjoy this tale of a family and their lovers. I've a long way to go before I finish but the chapters may sometimes be published further apart because of my day job. I'd appreciate comments and if you have some ideas you'd like me to incorporate, please tell me and I'll consider them. Your continued high votes keep me encouraged that this has been time well spent. I try to respond to all emails unless they're cranky. I'd like especially to hear from any female readers. Any thoughts on the flashback to 2001?
- COMMENTS
i agree with the other comments. you should focus on the main story. and you should finish this - its a great tale - and completed it would be one of the best on this site.
Agree with fickfrosch
I’m more interested in Lauren and Hazel than more, new peripheral characters. Let’s buy the houses and cars and get to the wedding.
... sidestory, to many acting people. Would be better to stay more focused on the main characters. The story develops to something like a phonebook.
In your defense, I'm constantly interrupted in my reading. I honestly had no idea who Jack and Elise were.
Since you asked: The content of the story-within-a-story was erotic and very much in your usual style in terms of personal preferences (lingerie, hosiery, heels, etc.), male-female balance (or imbalance if you want to see it that way) and progression of attraction and action and it worked as an interesting start to what will presumably be a longer and more involved narrative.
That said, it came as a distracting and seemingly unconnected intrusion into the long and continuing flow of the main storyline. Having now read all the way from the beginning of this extended saga/fantasy over the last few days, I have every expectation that the past and the present will all tie together with, at some point, a very crowded bed with a lot of sex going on but it would still have been nice to have had some substantial idea of what the connection between the two storylines might be. The closest to a hint of that might be that one of the two sisters is working in a construction-related capacity and there's certainly a batch of characters in the present-day story who are connected to that business. Still, one can only speculate and read ahead patiently.
I'm looking forward to catching up in my sequential reading to the most recently posted installment in this epic-length story but after that I probably won't enjoy waiting for the next one between postings. Such is life.
Overall, I have to say that you write a wonderful, ideal-world, sex fantasy and I'm really looking forward to reading what you write about the time that our main protagonist fucks his daughters, both natural and adoptive.
The series is going on simply superb
.. nice stories
.. keep going
arvee
I've finally caught up to you. I found this series about a month ago and have not been able to stop reading. It's great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I love the series, but I admit I am a bit confused about who some of the characters are. I also hope that we get to read about Lauren, Ashley and Katrina's encounter in the next installment!! I love your descriptions of lesbian sex, they are so hot!!!
Anyone who wants to see where these new characters come from needs to read Summer At Home, chapters 1 - 5
I still love the story, but this chapter was a bit confusing because of the addition of the new characters and the way you introduced them. You really need to show a connection between new characters and the existing ones. Especially considering how you jump from the main characters to the new group for almost half of the new chapter it made me feel almost like you had accidentally edited a new story into the one I had been reading. Since you are the writer of the story and know at least roughly where everything is going introducing these characters the way you did probably seemed natural.
I also feel you can ask people what they think, but I don't think you need to ask the readers what they want to see. Yes they can make suggestions, but don't let them think you will just write any of them into the story letting the reader take control of where the story will go. That would quickly ruin everything you have done so far in telling one of the absolute best stories on literotica.com and none of us want that. I would suggest next time if you do a jump in the story like you did in chapter 44 that you do the switch to the new characters after one of the main characters mentions one of their names or mentions wanting a service one of them provides professionally so the reader gets immediately why you jumped there and a basic idea of why they are now part of the story.
Anyway just wanted to let you know as long as you keep writing this story I will keep reading it and enjoying it.
NJRinglord
Where did the new characters come from, and what do they have to do with Scot and Veronica?
I've been following this story since the beginning and I have mostly enjoyed your efforts. That said, I haven't liked them as much since about ch.39. It seems as though you've lost focus and the story is kind of writing itself. I'm wondering if you have an outline for where you want to go and how to get there or if you're just filling in spaces until you actually do get a resolution. Each time you add new 'major' characters the tale just gets more confusing and takes away from the people you've already introduced. I began to enjoy this for the finding of his 'soulmate' and his reconnection with Katrina. I went along with the addition of Carol as she had history with Veronica and Ashley.I disliked the re-introduction of Cathleen as an influential character and the seeming abandonment of the Jacobson storyline. I'll continue to follow this series in the hopes that you can tighten things up and allow me to enjoy the episodes as much as I did with the first 38 or so.
An enjoyable story continues. Your story has multiple dimensions and it's diverse plot lines is a strength that provides energy and keeps it from being stale. A story of this length needs surprises, little side plots and diverse characters, including flaws and doubts. I will read with interest to see how you weave in the Jack plot into the primary story. I suspect that he and his wife are connected in some way to one or more of your primary characters.
I may be off in my thinking but I think Emerson and Hazel will continue to be part of the story and a significant part of it too. Given Hazel's baggage and conflicting desires, Hazel needs time to work through her issues. Rushing her to an epiphany would not be unlike life. Still, when the epiphany comes I suspect she will rush happily along a road of self discovery.
Thank you for this story and for putting yourself out there for the readers enjoyment. I am not paying you a penny for the story and hope that my gratitude and congratulations is satisfactory payment.
Another family to keep track of. I hadn't read the previous story, but now that others have mentioned it, I definitely won't if you are going to continue here.
I thought we would see the morning after in the Hawk nest.
I also miss the Jacobsons.
New cars tomorrow.