All Comments on 'Arrested for Public Exposure'

I don't think there is an editor alive who could help this RAPE story. There were so many mistakes it was a good thing that it only took about a minute and a half to read. Giving it 1* because we can't score it zero.

It's a fictional story, don't be so triggered. And the girl in the fictional story didn't try to resist. The girl in the fictional story gained pleasure from her encounter, not just in the present but afterwards as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Are you mad for a girl in a fictional story story because she doesn't feel the same way as you about her experience? Lol cry yourself a river. I'm also not sorry about any typos I may have overlooked due to simple human nature may have bothered you, It must be a disappointing life you lead always looking for flaws before anything you might find beneficial.

Cheers and thanks for your time and feedback.

Interesting, because I cannot get a story published with ONE typo, and it's obvious you are not hampered by administrators who overlook errors written by authors from certain countries. Fairness is NOT alive or well here.

Believe me I was! I couldn't get a story posted initially untill Kenji Sato edited for me, I reccomend him highly, once he edited my first two stories I left a note saying it had been edited, and once the first few got through, I started using Grammarly, It pisses me off to see typos as well and the fact I get lazy from time to time to proof read so carefully. It does spoil a story. I'm only beginning to get better at punctuation and grammar.

I understand where you're coming from and suggest you contact Kenji and get him to edit.

After that , Admin must assume all are edited, once you get the first one through you will be fine so don't give up I know how frustrated I was at the beginning but I'm glad it was difficult now because it taught me how to write better as I was forced to.

Good luck and hope to see you posted soon, Lit is a great hobby once you're published, it makes it all worth it.