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Click hereNate pistoned his cock up and down hard, as if he was trying to throw her off him. It was exactly what she wanted. Her hips gyrated wildly like a madwoman, creating enormous friction. Suddenly and without warning, Nate lost control and his cum exploded into his daughter's welcoming cunt. He hadn't cum that quickly in over twenty years. Nora was already hot before they started and feeling her father's cum pulsing inside her triggered her own quick, intense orgasm. She collapsed against him with a deep, satisfied sigh.
"Oh, Daddy... you always know exactly how I need to be fucked. Thank you, baby! Hmmmmmm. That was soooo good."
"I don't know what brought that on, but you're welcome, princess. So I'm guessing it went okay with Darby?"
"Oh yeah. Girlfriend is on a mission!"
Later that same evening, Jake pulled into the garage, late, tired, and feeling as miserable as he'd ever felt in his life. He'd driven across the state to see a client who met with him for less than two minutes before some emergency took him away. At least the guy rescheduled for the next week. And all those hours on the open highway had given his mind plenty of time to torment him. 'She never loved you! You were never enough for her! She's probably been screwing around on you for YEARS!' He shut off the car, plugged in its charger, and dragged himself into what was probably a cold, empty house. Except...
Something was cooking, and it smelled amazing. Steak? He walked in, and Darby was in the kitchen, apparently cooking up a storm. There were two steaks sizzling in a grill pan, and a pot of what looked like rice next to it. There was a plate of raw scallops waiting on deck. Something was in the oven, and it smelled like a cake. She was peering at a tablet, looking at what looked like a recipe. She looked up.
"Daddy! You're home! I wanted to surprise you and have it all ready, but I guess I need to work on my timing." She ran over and hugged him tight. Jake was still hurting, but she felt so good in his arms... he forced himself to let go of her.
"That's fine. Wow, baby, what are you wearing?" She had on a red skirt and a white knit sleeveless top. She was apparently braless, since he could see her hard little nipples threatening to tear through the blouse. She was wearing flat sandals that showed off her pedicure nicely. She was breathtaking! "Sweetie, you look amazing!"
"Thank you, daddy! Now go change. Dinner will be ready in 20."
*****
Jake said, "So you all knew? And no one thought to tell me?"
Nate opened his mouth to answer, but Darby cut him off. "Daddy, what was the first thing you did this morning when you got up?"
"I went for a run," he answered.
"Why?"
Jake and Darby held gaze for several seconds. "Okay, you're right. That was probably the best way to do it.
Nate asked, "What happened this morning?"
Jake looked sheepish, and Darby answered. "He still had doubts as of this morning. I had to suck them out of him one last time!"
Nora laughed and said, "My girl!"
Nate said, "We should all spend New Years at Disney. I heard that Epcot throws a hell of a party. It'll be crowded with people who won't notice two good-looking older brothas all wrapped up with two smokin' hot sistas young enough to be their daughters."
Nora and Darby yelled at the same time, "Let's do that, Daddy!"
"I'll set it up," said Nate. He and Jake nodded to each other... they both knew that their lives were already immensely better and their futures looked exciting.
: WTH are you rambling about? Harem? 2 fathers, 2 daughters, each in a monogamous committed relationship... Doesn't get more wholesome than that! (Ok, except for the fact they're both with their *own* kin, making it incest, but that's a small detail!)
Loved reading the origin of Nate and Nora when I was introduced to them by Solomon and Jadzia...
So this is how Nate and Nora came to be. Saw them in a bunch of other stories and wondered. I guess I should have checked the dates and read them in order. Oh well, I guess it doesn't matter in the end. They're all good stories. It's nice to see how they got started.
That whole "I love you, my king" and "long live my king" was so sweet and romantic. I could really feel the depth of their love. So beautiful.
Now as for Janie, she was being a total bitch, and my immediate thoughts were she's doin' the dirty and she wants rid of them (usually a safe bet). But for once it didn't appear to be like that - colour me surprised. I wonder what her deal was. She says she was unhappy but they never seemed to talk about it. An explanation would have been nice but I guess we're just left to wonder. I think a jump into the past from her perspective would have served this story well so we could understand her better and see how it all led up to this point for her. As far as the story goes at this point, she didn't seem like the typical "cheating bitch wife" (she was faithful as far as we know); just really unhappy and fell out of love for some reason. But the burning question remains: why? How did she get to this point?
have to disagree, the time jumps were very jarring. And bringing Nora into it? Typical first-time I/T writer mistake, turning a hot, taboo relationship, into a harem mode thing. Blech.
Without a doubt, the best line in this story...
"It felt like his dick would respond to the right shade of paint."
I loved this look into how Nate and Nora started. 5/5*
Excellent with amazing little variations that keep the fire burning in the hearts. 5*
BJ
"Ask Me If I'm Ready Pt. 02:" - Part 02 Characters: Early Forties Year Old Divorced Father Nathaniel (Nate) Rochester and Twenty-two Year Old Minimal Sexual Active Daughter, Nora Rochester. Nate and Nora are introduced in this Part 02, and are best of friends with, Early Forties Year Old Divorced Jacob (Jake) Steele and Twenty-two Year Old Virgin Daughter, Darby Steele. Jake and Nora are introduced in Part 01.
This chapter's introduction of Father Nathaniel (Nate) and Daughter Nora Rochester (both of Part 02) is somewhat very unique in that their sexual, incest father and daughter activities are kept entirely separate from the sexual, incest activities of Father Jake and Daughter Darby Steele (both introduced in Part 01. Each father AND each daughter are as if they are sisters, bosom-buddies, twins, confidants and very adept, swearing, at keeping their most deepest, delicate of secrets; similarly, so are the fathers, Jake and Nate have just as close buddies, "My Man" trusting souls as their daughters. The uniqueness is that the father and daughter couples are not into combining their relationships nor sexual relations. They are characters of understanding and partnerships, their character roles are written in depth and understanding. Their dialogues, as each couple or as two couples visiting, is great banter, smooth and spoken with confidence!! I'm not into anal sexual activities, but the activity do not play any significance in the foreplay of either couple' what little detail there is, the act plays only a small part of any sexual performances. Since the anal written content is short, i can briefly, within several or so seconds, scan through those parts, which has no effect on my opinion of the story or the characters roles. Now, graciously moving on to Part 03 of this well written work.
If my memory serves me correctly, in Part 01, Jake had thoughts of fucking his virgin unprotected daughter bareback. If so, we soon should have an announcement of a couples pregnancy. Both couples have expressed such enduring love and devotion--Darby has even told her father Jake that he will be the only lover her pussy will ever know--for the extent of their lives. It could not happen to, any two more deserving couples!
DAMNIT MAN!!! YOU DINE DID IT AGAIN!!! 5 Stars!!! For the love of GOD...PLEASE KEEP THIS UP!!!!