Barb Cheated

Lousy in bed, and sex with my ex boyfriend is fantastic? Wow, thanks for the great confidence boost babe......

3 stars - the plot was so thin it was a waste of time halfway down the first page.

Would have been an okay story without the last chapter.

This is actually a good realistic tale ,i enjoyed it well done

JPB, the "King" of spoiler last words!

The most stories submitted on this site, and also the most to be "gutted" in their closing paragraphs. Even when the MC simply can't allow himself to be a wimp, he usually manages to let us know at the end that he "wishes" he could have been one.

(Happens so often it HAS to be intentional -- just jerking our chains, right Bob?)

I usually like your stories, but your MC is a jackass and pussy. Overwrought, overdone, overly dramatic male drama Queen. She shouldn’t have cheated, but seems he spent energy doing his silly spec. Ops mission. Perjury on in obtaining the restraining order is a problem, the system has a few better things to do than to make Mr. sensitive feel

Comfy rather than just confronting his wife and asking her to go. What a wuss. She can do better. One and done twice a week. She shouldn’t have to tell him he needs to do better.

it's finished people.....THEIR DIVORCED!

Seems unfinished. What happened to him? What about her? The ex-boyfriend, did she resume fucking him?

Why don't you EVER finish a story??

Cheating bitch gets the door.

I can and have fucked for over 2 hours. And as a man, that takes skill. Not just lying there. Women don't need to inflate a sex organ with blood and hold off orgasms. Most men are calling bullshit. But you just make your dick go numb, and take small breaks with your fingers or tongue.

But someday I'm TIRED. I'm a five minute chump some days. And other days I'm too tired. Because I work HARD. Earning cash can drain a man. Especially good men that cook, clean, pay bills, pet care, child care, etc... if my wife would use that excuse, I'd have 5 old girlfriends to call up that are still willing for a roll in the hay with me. And hey! If work made me too tired, I'll just take a few weeks vacation. She can do all the heavy lifting, and I'll play with old flames. And best believe some of them are better in bed. I don't marry for mind blowing six. That helps, but most people are average at best. Especially hard working people. It takes a lot of free time to be a great lover.

From the NONY 7 entries below:

"First of all, a active restraining order requires an arrest by the officers NOT a warning to move."

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There's ALOT of guys like him on this site: stone cold experts in police protocol and procedure. There's a lot in rl, too. Some get shot in the back. Some get shot 17 times for reaching for their wallet when ordered to show id. Some are shot in their car with their toddler son sitting next to them. Some get dragged behind cop cars. Some get tased to death, choked to death, beaten to a pulp. They all had one thing in common and in common with the NONY: they all knew what cops would and wouldn't do.

Wow, Another story with a decent ending.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

Barb loves her husband so much she's fucking her ex. Actually, stated then dropped, she was fucking 2 guys. Why was this dropped? Her activities with Jeff cost hubby nothing? Betrayal, trust, disrespect, chance of disease, to start. Short story but good. 4 stars Bob

Your stories are always brief and to the point, no unnecessary verbiage, I really like your style.

Have drug the other guy out the car and kicked him in his balls a few times. Not enough retribution for him he had to know she was married.

Boo hoo, bitch is a whore. Quit being a 🐓.

First of all, a active restraining order requires an arrest by the officers NOT a warning to move.

Where's the payback on ex and he BF? Terrible ending!

3 stars. Needs a better ending. Short endings are fine but the continual leaving the reader hanging wears over time.

I'm rating this - barely - 3 stars, largely because the story caught my interest somehow. However:

: Runon sentences: too much use of the word "and" or commas.

: Punctuation: Seriously, I'm wondering if the author's reading sports magss or just cut English class. Commas misplaced, moreso not there. Many quotation marks missing (one sided), leading me to think the same person's talking instead of another. Some spelling mistakes or words missing; though not use, it told me JPB wrote this story & didn't bother proof reading it or having another a proof reader. Having said all that, I've read other of JPB's stories & were written much better all around - even the few that I didn't like.

: Repetition: "I'm out of the house & I see no reason to go back there." This runs throughout. Once the person speaking, etc., is noted, no sense of repetition like in the example.

: With the lawyer: Rob wants a restraining order against Barbara, saying he fears for his life. Almost the next sentence, he says after he leaves, he'll drop it & there won't be any hearing. The lawyer just seems to accept that without question. I know this's fiction, but the better fiction has the element of believability to it.

: Barb & Jeff - OK, she knew him before her hubby who's lacking in bed. As Rob pointed out, why the fuck didn't she say something so he could hopefully do something? Probable reason: she's a slut for Jeff & didn't, in reality, want to give him up. The bitch wanted both men, so she kept quiet. Didn't want to hurt Rob? Didn't affect him? In what world, unless you're married to a wimp or cuck, would a husband be OK with his wife fucking anybody else? Her betrayal & yes, disrespect, won't create an emotional disturbance in her husband?

: Due to the above, what could've been a solid 4 star story is only 2; as I wrote above, my interest in this story & the storyline prompts my 3 star rating. Overall, Just Plain Bob, not your finest & I'm disappointed. Bob

What a loser. She did the right thing. She is much better off.

I don't know how many girls I have kicked to the curb because they are craap shags. I would kick her out a lot faster for being shit in the sack than I would for he snagging around. She did the right thing

...or just stopped her when you saw her get in the car with Jeff. Sometimes, a MAN just gotta take charge.

Very well written and told. By the way, grabbing the guy by the ankles and dragging him face down naked from the car is assault. I learned that the hard way, it cost me 5 days in jail. Yes we divorced but years later I beat the hall out of him for hitting her, I still don't want her back. Remember, if she cheats with you, she will cheat on you. And she did. Damned double X chromosomes.

BACK OFF FELLAS!!!!! she is all mine. lol dirtball

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This is supposed to be the way. Confront the cheaters and proceed to throw her to the curb. No retreat no compromise. Definitely a 5 star 🌟🌠🌟🌠🌟🌠🌟🌠🌟

Great story, confront the bitch, then divorce the bitch and move on. 5 stars

5 Stars .. I can relate to this one as my first wife was a size queen . The pussy hound that knocked her up twice never married her . She married some other guy . I did find out 1 thing Money doesn't talk it screams . His family had money so the Police always kept an eye on Me . I filed a complaint and it never went anywhere

Last comment is totally correct.

Bob.... Don't play with both sides.

Your writing tells your mentality.

And why everybody is Afraid to be Alone??

Such pathetic human beings

I generally don't, but feel the need to respond to "widowedidiot". If I was brash & totally rude, I'd play on the last 5 letters in your name. But I won't & would like to know: what planet are you from? Or are you that stoned? His "so-called" friend was actually a good friend indeed in alerting Rob to his wife's activities. Stay with her? Only a moron or a cuck would. Maybe widowedidiot is such a one these days, IDK. Stay with a cheating wife that fucks an old boyfriend-- for now 3 months?!?

Rob asked the right questions. She sunk herself telling him he's a failure in bed as the reason without even talking to her husband. Saying she'd chose him with bad sex to Jeff with great sex was another totally mean thing to say. Both statements are not what somebody says when trying to keep a marriage. And the "it's only sex", whether implied or said directly is another. widowedidiot: maybe you would stay with such a slut, but no real self-respecting man would. (BTW, as I reread your comments, you seem to be playing both sides of the coin, wanting his to stay but how does a man go on with that knowledge. And yes, there IS life, I would hope, after divorcing a cheating slut & meeting a good woman.)

Lastly, it's great to know she said she wouldn't disrespect Rob by being with him after Jeff. That she only let him fuck her on nights when her hard working husband was away on business. (I say very sarcastically)

Loved the story, well written (unlike most other authors I've read here) & thought out. You suck in bed & he's so good: that's the one huge line you don't say when trying to avoid a divorce. Especially!!! when you didn't say anything at all to your husband. It was a believable story & like previously stated, well told.

Good story. Rob asks a good question. Why did she not talk to him about her sexual dissatisfaction?

Great story, great ending. He did exactly what he should have.

Seems accurate. She over-wrote all of his good memories with an ugly one.

Funny, not a bad story. What would be in a had of any woman that wants reconciliation to tell the man that he is not good in sex? LOL, that would surely work to get back together. Granted, maybe some woman could be that stupid but my guess most would be smart enough to avoid such an unforced error.

By the way, I am not an expert, but my experience tells me that women experience sex just by looking at the man and if the man is irresistible to them from the point of looks then he will be a good sex partner regardless of how "lousy" he is in bed, as long as he is not impotent. Most men do not understand that. If you have body and face that a woman finds attractive you will be "good in the sack" no matter what. If you don't then you won't.

By the way, 90% of sex is just imagination anyway, both for men and even more for women.

Didn't like his recriminations that even hinted at continued feelings for this whore. What he saw on that back seat should have burned out any love. And why didn't he ask her if it was OK for him to have sex with some of his ex's because of some quirky thing they did with him?

My first wife did the same thing .. I then found out she was a size queen . I have 7 inches but she found a guy with 9 inches . So She left Me for him .. Funniest thing was He had No Job and no desire to look for one .

Don't get me wrong, I enjoy DG Hear as well - he is / was a very good writer as well - love to see more. Bob has been around even longer, a very good writer - on Lit for right at 18 years! I can't think off the top of my head of anyone who can top that or is more prolific.

somewhere east of Omaha

Thanks for the story, perhaps this is an "old" one but so what - so do I ! Its good, even the second time through. Five stars!

And that he just joined!

If we are lucky, it’s the same writer and he will soon start contributing again!

"You are lousy in bed." - Gee, I bet THAT makes him want to get back with her! As he said, if she had a problem she should have come to him.

How do the wives in these stories think so long as there's no love involved, it's okay for them to fuck a past boyfriend or another man? "It was only sex", says the wife on getting caught, "I love only you and want to grow old with you"!! This, after dining with the man, drinking and dirty dancing with him, sharing passionate kisses and fondling and caressing him and allowing him other liberties! If she loved her husband, she wouldn't be out being entertained by another man. Also, invariably the husband totally refuses to believe what is staring him in the face and even doubts the evidence of his own eyes! Are there really men like that?? It's hard to believe that there are men and women who have so little control of themselves and also lack self respect to such a degree, that they fall prey to the obvious moves of a seducer. A lot of this is unbelievable but makes for some entertaining reading. Do keep going.

Can't see it going any other way

DG Hear

I realize Bob’s stories tend to be a little cucky as a rule. But this isn’t just a comment on him, it’s more a generalization of all the stories on “ loving wives” . The one thing that is consistent, and unbelievable in my opinion, is the wives of 15-25 years, who somehow believe they can just explain why they cheated, and how it does not have to change anything in the marriage. How you could be married to someone for two decades or more, and honestly expect hubby to take this, is beyond me. The other common denominator and double standard, in these stories, is the wife is appalled or sickened by the hubby stepping out, and forbids it. I think a normal reaction is the wife would agree to stop all contact with her lover’s, and be apologetic and contrite. OR, a less likely scenario is she divorces him, takes what she can get, and moves on. Let’s face it. Life is tough. Raising a family, going to work every day to make ends meet. Allowing your wife to cuchold you, while you continue to support the family, is like a Salmon having a lamprey attracted to it. The salmon slowly dies, while being drained of its resources. I don’t believe women are stupid. I also believe, most start out in marriage loving their husbands. That’s why I don’t accept the literotica scenarios as being normal. You would not treat someone like this, if you had a shred of decency or any feelings left for them. And if you believe Literotica, all 45-55 year old married women, turn into sluts when the kids leave home. And they all have perfect bodies, and have time to go to the gym every day... Here is a newsflash. Divorced women between the ages of 45-55 , are in great supply. They do not look like they are 30 anymore, ( sorry literotica)

Wouldn´t it have been better if he had stayed with her? I mean twice a week? and he turns over and falls asleep after he cums once? How does a man recover from being told that he does not satisfy his wife? Especially the way she put it. Stay with you and no sex or him and great sex? Will he be able to move on and find someone else? I doubt it. And now, the so called friend. If not for him, the hubby would still be ignorant of his wifes transgressions and still be living in wedded bliss. So was it worth it? telling the friend and breaking up a marriage? I think I would have given them a chance and told her. You stop it or I tell him. What do you think?

Sometimes Bob's heroes stay with the cheating whore, and sometimes they leave. This is one of the better stories.

I can basically recite word-for-word every storyline that JPB puts out, that's how cliche, boring and cookie cutter they are.

real man thrown the whore to the curb

I would find me a source for mexican whore houses and get this stupid bitch drunk and when she woke up she would now have a new home, a room at a mexican whore house and since she likes to fuck, now she can fuck 30 times a day. Women badmouth men for this cheating shit, but women fuck around more than men. Then when caught, oh but honey its not love its just sex. Bullshit. And i know there are those who disagree with me. I guess you havent been shit on yet. Just give it time.

Just a bit too long for a flash story , and not long enough to be a truly satisfying read .

Plenty of detail leading up to their 15 minute chat . . . And then the story was done .

Could have been a little longer , drawing out the divorce , maybe try and make us think he was seriously considering reconciliation .

You have the talent and write well when you have a mind to .

When you have a good story line , run with it , don't waste it on a flash read .

That was quick. It took him longer to catch her than it did to get a divorce. What I think broke the camels back was finding out that he was no good in bed therefore making the wife go seek satisfaction elsewhere. I felt cheated with the ending.

She's a parking lot slut...Divorce her...End of story...

Good story.

Disappointing ending. Was building up nicely but just ended. No details on her regrets or feelings. Sadly it felt like the ending was rushed. Shame, was great until then.

Pretty civilized ending to a marriage. Except for the heartbreak. Nothing civilized about breaking someone's heart.