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I just wanted to take a moment to thank everyone once again for your patience as I worked through chapters 24 and 25 of the Curious Girls saga. It took a lot longer than usual for a few reasons. The first was that while I initially had plans for how I wanted the story to go at this point, I had not put as much effort into fleshing out all the details as earlier sections of the story. It took a significant amount of time for me to decide all the details of how I wanted the story to end based on ideas/suggestions that I'd had and others had offered as well as incorporating small changes in the direction of the story that I hadn't planned.
At that point, I wrote chapter 24 based on some new thoughts I had that I thought would make for an interesting twist in the story. I wrote the entire chapter based on my ideas which did not hold up to scrutiny. I then spent a significant amount of time trying to make my ideas work, but I finally had to face the fact that there was no way to make the story believable the way it was written. There were too many inconsistencies to try to explain away and I'd made the chapter overly complex. For the good of the story, I was forced to abandon much of my original ideas and re-write the outline and the chapter.
In the process of re-writing, I also ended up writing much more than I'd originally written for chapter 24 which forced me to expand my writing to include chapter 25 as well. After getting both chapters written, I had to take some additional time to revise my outline yet another time. All of the above, coupled with the difficulties I already have finding time in my life to dedicate to writing meant very slow progress for the story. However, rest assured that I remain dedicated to sticking with this story until the end.
- COMMENTS
I have absolutely not given up in this story! I wake up every day planning to find time to work on it. However, that hasn't happened very often.
As I mentioned before, I started a new job a few months ago. It's kept me very busy with learning the ropes and trying to establish a good reputation from the beginning. I'm sincerely hoping that I will be able to slow down soon and actually make progress again on my story. Even tonight, it was close to 9:00 PM before I made it home, and I'm already ready to pass out in my bed.
Unfortunately, due to the chaos of life, I don't even want to hazard a guess right now. Just know that I'm definitely dedicated to this story, and determined to find time soon! The chapter is mostly written, it just needs a lot of TLC before is ready to be published. I was even hoping to work on it this weekend, but now it looks like I'm working part of the weekend too.
I appreciate your continued patience!
Unfortunately, it feels very much as if you've given up on this story. That's not how you want your readers to feel if you ever plan on returning. Obstacles and delays are a natural part of life, but if you tell your readers nothing about your progress or plans, the hype will die down fast.
This is definitely the best story on here, but this part was a little light on action (Although I understand why you had to do this), I'd love to see Sara realise what's going on and try and make a break for it only to be trapped in by Tamara who has had months to set up to stop Sara escaping (not to mention Sara isn't exactly particularly quick or strong right now).
How far away is the next chapter?
Any idea when the next chapter might be posted? Even just a rough time frame like which month would work.
I'd like to apologize to everyone for the lack of updates recently. I'm very appreciative of your continued support. I started a new job recently, and it's been taking a significant portion of my time. I've managed to get most of a chapter written, but I still need to find the time to clean it up before I can post it. I'm skeptical it will make it out this month, but I will try to make some good headway this weekend.
Thanks again! I hope you all continue to enjoy the Curious Girls saga as we move into the final leg of the journey together (on this story). I'm excited to see where the story goes from here. ;-)
I was wondering when we can expect to see a continuation of this story? Additionally I feel that you should choose how you want the plot to go as its your story but I am just feeling as though it will become like all other stories on here if Tamara continues to exploit Sara's memory loss and convince Sara that they really were together etc... Also I really liked how Sara and Krista were before all this and think it would be good for the story if we could see more of that again, such as from chapters 10-18, though I did enjoy this double chapter and have enjoyed the story since early on and have loved every chapter of it (admittedly some more than others as stated above but loved all nonetheless). I hope you will continue writing and not let the lower rating of this story put you off.
i think it would help the storie if you would tell us more obout krista.
(but nothing from her perspective because it is more interesting if we in the moment don't know what she is really thinking)
for example as she was drunk or as they practice kissing was so hot and my favorite chapters
Looking forward to the continuation of this story. Thanks for taking the time to write.
I have no problem with Tamara never facing any repercussions. After all, Sara has no one to blame but herself for being in this situation. Her never getting a true victory over Tamara shows that she truly fucked up for bullying Tamara all those years ago and that actions can have lifelong consequences. In reality "good" does not always win. Besides it's clear Sara has an attraction towards Tamara that she is in denial about. Her getting a victory over Tamara in a dream is a good fantasy and highly erotic. But allow that to be her only measure of ever achieving any type of victory. Tamara is such a dominant and sexual character who justifiably made Sara her bitch. I want her to be the last one standing at the end dominant over all. I do say let Sara make a play for a victory and have her come close only to be denied in the end further showcasing the intellect and cunning Tamara possesses to always be one step ahead. More of a fantasy on my part my its your story and I'm sure I'll enjoy the ending either way when it comes
hope that krista plays a more important role in the future chapters because she was the most interesting and mysterius character (hope that she has some feelings for sara because even a sex story becomes better with feelings) g
i think that would help because i think specially the last chapters were to sara tamara centric and it becomes a bit boring (i would prefer if you would use krista but if you don't like your krista characterization anymore than you should introduce a new character to stop this tamara sara fixation h
do you already know which month the neyt chapter will come out e
Sonya is an interesting addition. And I can't help but feel like that red head might get her hands on the chip of all their videos and stuff.
I wonder how far Tamara will be able to take it before she realizes what the game is?
The way i see it, the story can end in about 3 different ways. Krista is a lesbian and clearly so is Tamara, and the reason i feel Krista is so ridiculously upset even at her sisters hospital bed is because either she is in lover with Sara or more likely Tamara. So i think the first ending can be one where Krista and Tamara fall in love and live happily every after while Sara is free to live her life and she and krista have mended their relationship.
The second is with Krista learning the truth getting revenge on Tamara and the two sisters making up and living their lives like it used to be where they were best friends.
The last option I see is one where Krista and Tamara fall in love but Tamara turns Krista against Sara or convinces Sara with her amnesia that she really is a submissive lesbian slut and the two of them dominate her, possibly with Krista being even more harsh than Tamara, and Tamara becomes the more caring one towards Sara. Or Krista and Sara mend their relationship because Krista isn't jealous anymore now that she and Tamara are together, but she thinks Sara wants the humiliation/domination.
Being erotic fiction I personally like the last theory even if it is the craziest one. If you can find a way to make that plausible I think it could make one hell of an erotic scene to end off the series (even though i hope the end is far away). Anyway those are just my possible endings, what do you guys think?
I just wanted to let you know as a fan of this series for a very long time, that you consistently put out great chapters, that are entertaining and well written. It seems that as time goes by the series is becoming a lot more work for you, or you are getting less time and so i just wanted to say remember to have fun and not stress out about the story too much. Make sure your enjoying it. From how good your chapters have been i think you are but i just wanted to remind you to have fun with it. Let your imagination do most of the work and don't worry about what us fans will think. No matter what the ending is, we have all been happy to be part of this awesome journey. Your doing an amazing job.