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Curious Girls Ch. 24-25

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I just wanted to take a moment to thank everyone once again for your patience as I worked through chapters 24 and 25 of the Curious Girls saga. It took a lot longer than usual for a few reasons. The first was that while I initially had plans for how I wanted the story to go at this point, I had not put as much effort into fleshing out all the details as earlier sections of the story. It took a significant amount of time for me to decide all the details of how I wanted the story to end based on ideas/suggestions that I'd had and others had offered as well as incorporating small changes in the direction of the story that I hadn't planned.

At that point, I wrote chapter 24 based on some new thoughts I had that I thought would make for an interesting twist in the story. I wrote the entire chapter based on my ideas which did not hold up to scrutiny. I then spent a significant amount of time trying to make my ideas work, but I finally had to face the fact that there was no way to make the story believable the way it was written. There were too many inconsistencies to try to explain away and I'd made the chapter overly complex. For the good of the story, I was forced to abandon much of my original ideas and re-write the outline and the chapter.

In the process of re-writing, I also ended up writing much more than I'd originally written for chapter 24 which forced me to expand my writing to include chapter 25 as well. After getting both chapters written, I had to take some additional time to revise my outline yet another time. All of the above, coupled with the difficulties I already have finding time in my life to dedicate to writing meant very slow progress for the story. However, rest assured that I remain dedicated to sticking with this story until the end.

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precipiceofoblivionprecipiceofoblivionalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Still Alive!

I have absolutely not given up in this story! I wake up every day planning to find time to work on it. However, that hasn't happened very often.

As I mentioned before, I started a new job a few months ago. It's kept me very busy with learning the ropes and trying to establish a good reputation from the beginning. I'm sincerely hoping that I will be able to slow down soon and actually make progress again on my story. Even tonight, it was close to 9:00 PM before I made it home, and I'm already ready to pass out in my bed.

Unfortunately, due to the chaos of life, I don't even want to hazard a guess right now. Just know that I'm definitely dedicated to this story, and determined to find time soon! The chapter is mostly written, it just needs a lot of TLC before is ready to be published. I was even hoping to work on it this weekend, but now it looks like I'm working part of the weekend too.

I appreciate your continued patience!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Given up

Unfortunately, it feels very much as if you've given up on this story. That's not how you want your readers to feel if you ever plan on returning. Obstacles and delays are a natural part of life, but if you tell your readers nothing about your progress or plans, the hype will die down fast.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good story

This is definitely the best story on here, but this part was a little light on action (Although I understand why you had to do this), I'd love to see Sara realise what's going on and try and make a break for it only to be trapped in by Tamara who has had months to set up to stop Sara escaping (not to mention Sara isn't exactly particularly quick or strong right now).

How far away is the next chapter?

wof2wof2almost 8 years ago

Any idea when the next chapter might be posted? Even just a rough time frame like which month would work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
NEXT CHAPTER!

WHEN?? :)

precipiceofoblivionprecipiceofoblivionabout 8 years agoAuthor
Delays, etc.

I'd like to apologize to everyone for the lack of updates recently. I'm very appreciative of your continued support. I started a new job recently, and it's been taking a significant portion of my time. I've managed to get most of a chapter written, but I still need to find the time to clean it up before I can post it. I'm skeptical it will make it out this month, but I will try to make some good headway this weekend.

Thanks again! I hope you all continue to enjoy the Curious Girls saga as we move into the final leg of the journey together (on this story). I'm excited to see where the story goes from here. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sara's amnesia

I was wondering when we can expect to see a continuation of this story? Additionally I feel that you should choose how you want the plot to go as its your story but I am just feeling as though it will become like all other stories on here if Tamara continues to exploit Sara's memory loss and convince Sara that they really were together etc... Also I really liked how Sara and Krista were before all this and think it would be good for the story if we could see more of that again, such as from chapters 10-18, though I did enjoy this double chapter and have enjoyed the story since early on and have loved every chapter of it (admittedly some more than others as stated above but loved all nonetheless). I hope you will continue writing and not let the lower rating of this story put you off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
where is krista

i think it would help the storie if you would tell us more obout krista.

(but nothing from her perspective because it is more interesting if we in the moment don't know what she is really thinking)

for example as she was drunk or as they practice kissing was so hot and my favorite chapters

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