All Comments on 'Daddy and Little One Ch. 19'
by bronzeage
- 9 Comments
This ia an extremely powerful chapter, Bronze, very intense and chock full of emotions, descriptions, discoveries and what-ifs?
Your description of Marcus is priceless, as is Saleslady's reaction to him.
Each chapter your characters become more real and the sex gets hotter. A delicious spanking scene, complete with a touch of the sacreligious to make it that much more tittilating.
Very well done.
Intensely erotic and hot...I can't believe how good this chapter is! I love the powerful emotions and dominance/submission between the two. Him marking her as his was oh so good!!!
I really love your Little One stories. The spanking was intense and evocative. Mmmm, well done!! Thank you!!!
You can see and feel it all. You make them seem more and more real with each passing chapter. It's oh so very hot! Please don't stop!
Truly a great chapter to a very wonderful story. I stumbled upon the series via you link on the boards and must say I had to go back and start at the begining. Excellent work, can't wait for more.
While I've loved every chapter...this one is incredible. The relationship you've created between Daddy and Little One is amazing. Completely appealing, even to those who aren't necessarily drawn to a Daddy/little one dynamic.
Hot...hot, hot. Very, very erotic.
I really liked this chapter because there is more of a storyline now.
I discovered your story ... Friday I believe? I've become addicted to it so quickly...
This chapter was -amazing-... It describes the type of relationship I would LOVE to have with my fiance perfectly. Especially at the end with the spanking? THat was amazing... Fantastic. Truly erotic and sexy and yummy. <3
my Daddy and i have been together for about a year and a half but could never quite get past the taboo of "Daddy" and His "little one". W/we have kept that part of our relationship very separate from O/our intimacies until now. Your stories have helped U/us past this. This chapter sparked some very intriguing conversation and emotion for both of U/us. Thank you. W/we love these two, truly.