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Click here"Um," I said, possibilities flashing through my mind. "Maybe you three could line up on the edge of the bed with your asses in the air, and I could fuck each of you over and over until one of you makes me come?"
The three girls all grinned and Lauren slapped my ass before stepping onto the bed on her knees. "Now that sounds very hot."
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- COMMENTS
I'm enjoying the story, but there's one little thing that feels like running over a speed bump at full throttle. Please people, learn the difference between "me" and "I," particularly when there's a second person in the sentence. The easiest thing to try is to leave out the other person, then decide whether me or I applies. For example, you would never say, "give the cake to I," you say "give the cake to me." That doesn't change just because you add another person: "Give the cake to Lauren and me."
Okay, I'm putting my soap box away now.
This Jer guy is almost too stupid to believe. Many derp moments...why doesn't he use some of his magic to give himself a working brain? Then he can talk to the fairy to figure things out, use magic to improve himself and gain money. This guy is fucking most things up and really fucked up with Annalise. Just talk to the fairy and learn shit, like he's so stupid he doesn't even realize how critically important learning/knowledge is.
It's sad that his sister is basically an afterthought in the story. He didn't even get to be alone with her their first time together. He told her nothing even after Lauren's sister was brought in and wouldn't have sex with her until Lauren gave permission.
I found this story while waiting for the author to return from hiatus on a different one. Mostly I've been pretty happy with it, but this chapter was not enjoyable. The torture of Annalise just should not be interspersed with fun times at the baxley grant house. Each could be good on its own but the mood whiplash the reader receives from the tonal shift blindsided me. I was unable to do more than skim the last 3 pages because I couldn't mentally distance myself from what I had just read about Annalise to get back to fun sexy times.
I fu ked 8 different girls for years daily and never got as tired as this kid. What's his problem. Go eat and drink and come back and fuck. Simple
Ok, dude. Tag-team butt-fucking three chicks is mind bending But enough of the cliff-hanging teasers on Annalise. I’ve tapped her as my fav mage, but you’re losing my interest as I’m an ADOF.
So the proclamation he made a few days is already broken.
He either fucked his spell and set no consequences for going after his word, but let'sbe honest he wasn't told he could or should. Or if he had his fairy around maybe he would know his proclamation has been broken. But since he's a horny with 3 beautiful girls on his mind all of his responsibilities just went under his radar. I just hope no one gets permanently harmed for his oversight, or worse.
I must admit I skimmed through the second half of the chapter hoping for more about the plot.
Going through this ch I got caught up on the father broke the proclamation what is the consequence?
So magic proclamations mean literally nothing, like there is no magic to inherently holding it or anything?
Backlash or hit from breaking a proclamation in the magic world... I honestly started skipping to see what the inherent consequences were to breaking a rule or law set by magic...apparently nothing?
Like at the very minimum the magic should have informed him to the rule being broken
This is a great story or series but what the hell was that insert about dad and pruning shears cutting her neck about that was so random it doesn’t need to be there
I have to agree with the comments of wolfbeckett.
He has the power, but doesn't care one bit about it. He is supposed to be in charge, but Laura has all the power. He needs her approval or involvement in every act.
Okay I've really liked the story thus far. However. This chapter was a serious downgrade for me. The author writes the erotic scenes really well and I enjoy reading them, but the problem is that it's impossible for me to enjoy them because of my concern about Annalise being tormented literally in real time as all the sex is happening. Also, the fact that Jeremiah keeps on putting off speaking to his advisor over and over and over again is pissing me off. He comes across as way, way, WAY too unconcerned about this new magical world he's discovered. What should be the biggest revelation of a mind screw in his life he puts off learning about because "lol I'm tired some other time". For these reasons the story is causing me more anxiety than enjoyment.
It's been 7 years since a new chapter has been posted. Maybe one of the other authors, who helps finish incomplete stories, can take this where it should go. I really hope that happens, since this is a great story.
It's been a long time (seven years!?!) but I am back to writing Erotica!
FoF Ch. 8 has been submitted to Literotica - you should expect it in about 3 days to a week from this comment if things work at the usual speed. If you want it faster, and want to read my other stories, you can also check out my Patreon, where Chapter 9 is also posted to Patrons.
Love the story but this is not a place to end it. To many loose ends and future possibilities.
Great story, I really hope your coming back to finish or continue it. Tis cruel to leave us hanging
This is a great story with a very good setup and some worldbuilding that could spawn far more then we see right now. I remember reading this a few years ago and decided to read it again. When I saw the little notes about being updated just months ago I was really happy. Do you have any plans on continuing this story in the near future? I think you could really wrap this up (without closing the book completely so to say) with just one more chapter. But leaving us hanging with Annaliese is just mean.
OMG! We need more! What happens after this? You left us hanging!
I did vote 5 stars for each chapter.
Honestly, I thought it was great. I've enjoyed the series. Wish there were more, feel like you left us hanging.
Love this series...you have spent a great deal of story time fleshing out some great characters plus you have given us a great beginning for a magic culture framework that just begs for an extended group of follow ons. You literally have the framework for a really great novel here with a little reworking. I suggest you get to firming up your metastory outline and GET TO IT!!! This one has the potential to be a really epic fantasy roleplaying novel worthy of the best like Michael Anderle or Judith Berens best magical sagas.
I look forward to the continuation of this great series!!!!
Of Course...5 stars
Sorry but you have so much unanswered. What happened to Annalise? What happened to his seat meeting, the girl at the mall?etc,etc,etc!!
I think someone stole the story and put it on amazon as the life bringer's harem
Hoping the author is actually planning to post the chapter 8 he said he'd posted on his Patreon. This story was enjoyable...I just remember hating that it ended without resolution. I'll have to reread it now.
Still fun to read but getting to end of life.
Authors seem to all be caught up in the same parts of a tale.
Anal has to be included in all Literotica stories & everyone seems to be in a contest to see who can write the raunchiest story.
Not necessary. Write to make your characters real. A great story is one where. A few days later I can’t remember if I read it, watched it, or lived it, & I think I actually know the characters.
There are some out there!
Bill S.
Damn totally enjoyed this story was disappointed that there was not another chapter to address the Botanist
I hope you know that people are still reading and loving your stories even now.
It was wonderful! Though I am curious to see how that 'Plant $+>|}' is going to get his come uppin's. HE-HE-HE
On dec 2020 the author updated his bio saying he was thinking of coming back but now it's 2022 .........
This is a great story, but its a dam shame you could leave us hanging on the storyline for 10 years. Please help out your readers and continue the chapters.
So... It's 2021. Please post what you have if you have anything so we can give you motivation to keep going.
28 days later from the last comment, I'm lost, abandoned, starving to hear about the a-hole dad!
2 Questions: Has anyone successfully reached out to the author, BreakTheBar? It has been 5 years since he has released a story, feels like he may need some motivation. Also, after 5 years, it feels like we may have to Game of Thrones this and pick up the ball for George RR Martin. Not sure what policy is here, but I’m sure the community would be open to it if we stuck to the writers style and don’t go rogue. Very tempted to do this myself.
What a waste. I mistakenly thought this story was completed. Another potential Lit gem left abandoned.
Please tell me you will finish this. I actually skipped the the last sex scene hoping there was more with Anna. Its such a great story and I want the Dad to get his god complex shoved up his ass and lose all he has ever made. Maybe let Anna become the curse he feared so much, it would serve him right.
I absolutely loved this series and want to read more! I just hope you don't go any darker than you already have with the conflict your are building with Anna and her dad. I hate stories that are wonderfully fantastical and full of rich world building only to see them ruin it all by making a horrid villian that does things that really take you out of the story. I really hope Anna's dad gets his and bad!
I wonder what happened to the Author BreakThe Bear, for there has been nothing written/released since 2016, the last chapter in this series was released in 11/2015.
Will Jerry find out about Abigail's situation and rescue her in time and what will he do to her father for defying him ? These are things people want to know...
Oh damn.
Six years now?
Gotta find out what happens with Annalise, at least.
Don't need to be the best story/line but finish it.
Nothing's more dissapointing than unfinnished business.
(Also for the writer/creator)
All other is said from the previous comments.
I really have loved the story so far and see where you posted 5 years ago that you had a lot of ideas on the rest of the series. so why haven't you finished it yet ? you haven't even finished this story and I really want to know why he didn't know that that girls father violated his proclamation for him not to be able to harm his family you would think that he would be alerted immediately. also how did he kill them when he is supposed to be blocked magically from doing it. I would think he needs to cast a spell so he knows if someone he cares about is in danger and one so he will know if when gives a judgment it's not followed he will know. It might also be helpful if magical families are tracked and kept an eye on so that situations like that girls don't happen and mentors not from their family are set up for any magically gifted child so they can learn and control their powers. please finish the story I think 5 years is long enough to finish writing it don't you.
I really enjoyed this ☺! Hope to read more! What happened to Annlise? More please 🙏!
Since this story was written back in 2015 (today is 2021) I suspect the author has moved on and doesn't care about all of the loose ends they left. I really liked the story and would like to know what they were thinking of the Council of the Seats.
There are too many things left hanging at the end of Chapter 7. We do NOT have closure on important characters like Annalise, her sister, her mother and father, on Odama, on the council of the Seats, etc. or on issues. like the magazine The magazine cover with Lauren on it and the story supporting the photos of Lauren was a major turn off. It destroys the power/magic that are at the base of the story and the desire to keep the dick power secret. It kills the story. Since the Jerry proclamation is not enforced, it ruins the idea of the power of the magic and it has a major impact on the effectiveness of the council of Seats. Somehow, it feels like the author has given up on the story and wants out of this plot altogether. It sounds like story suicide.
Please ask someone with deeper knowledge of English to reread and correct the numerous mistakes included in this story. It would be nice to have a story where the author and proofreader know the difference between there, their and they're.
BJD
Very disappointed and I certainly agree with tiercenpts comments. Like he stated five years is a long time since the last chapter and you better be dead and fucking buried, that’s the only excuse I’ll accept for not continuing on with this amazing story. it’s a shame really it’s one of the best stories I’ve every read.... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Just read your story and it was great. Would have been great without the sex just implying what had happened. Do want to find out about what’s happening in Arizona. She was and is a great character.
I was kind of put off now in the last Chapter.
Yes, it is a very good story also because Jeremiah was written as a throughout good guy in most all of his decisions.
but there was out of 6 pages written maybe 1 1/2 of story within everything else was "just" sex.
Especially with a Plot like with Annelise, so her mom got killed, what about her Sister??
I thought there'd be more about him discovering his magic powers and preparing for the Council meeting etc. etc.
kinda disappointed...
& now we've been waiting for 5+ years
In Literotica terms, the Story is dead and very likely not to get continued..that leaves a bad taste in my mouth tbh.
They are worthy of your attention, as you are a very good author and storyteller.
Gotta say, I am LOVING this series and it's not just for the erotica of it. The overall story, the conflicts in the background, and the Lord that is yet to be fully explained all manage to flow together to keep people hooked. Looking forward to the next chapter
This is absolutely one of the best series on Lit! I have loved every single chapter! I think the thing i love best about this whole series is that the protagonist is genuinely a good man. Jeremiah is finding his way as best he can and mistakes are of course a part of that, but he never hides anything from his girls. He is up-front and truly is trying to take his duties as The Seat seriously.
My favorite stories on this site are ones where the good guys truly do win, and where wholesome and kink don't have to be mutually exclusive. This series checks all the boxes.
Authors and artists are entitled to and have earned the right to tell the stories the put out into the world how they want and when they want. If this is all of this wonderful series we ever get, I will be happy I got to appreciate the art we did get. However, I truly hope that you choose to continue this narrative. There are so many interesting and thrilling avenues this story could go down merely to tie up any loose ends already written, let alone all the new craziness inherent with being a Seat. Wonderful story, you have a gift, don't ever stop!
I Truly hope you are near complete as it is now 6 years since we got a piece of FoF and there is a major fix needed for the Ass that calls himself a God and his daughter satan, He needs a good ass kicking soon. He is a minor magi not a God and what he has done requires a BIG HARD fix.
Wow! Please please do not stop this, I am really anxious to read what happens with Annaliese (sp?). So many other things, important ones, need to be addressed!
Even more members in his harem for strength
Punishment of Annaliese's father
Information, learning from his mentor
Meeting with the councilors
College-living together
And more of course, all of which you are aware of naturally. Do you publish/write anywhere else? Wish you the best in your future writing, you are really good!
THIS has absolutely been one of my favorite reads on Literotica!! I was not sure about the sci-do bit when I first saw the story come up, but it has turned out to be exciting...even more, though, IT HAS BEEN FFFUUUNNNNNN TO READ!!
Please, bring us more, at your "leisure", so you take time to edit it a bit more (enough said about that!) Looking forward to seeing more, sooner than later...CHEERS!!
I don't usually read stories in this category, but for some reason I clicked and I'm glad I did. This is hands down one of the best series I've read here and I can't wait for the rest!!
Annalise's mother has been murdered, her sister is in mortal danger, and you've left her hanging like that well into a sixth year now. Not cool. Why did you start a big subplot at all, when it seems like you've lost interest in this? Maybe just edit it out. Please.
So you're "thinking of coming back?"
Wonderful! I hope you come back to this - it's one of my favorites on the site!
And I think I can speak for a lot of people when I say "I would love for you to continue this story". I don't want to push you into anything, or seem demanding, but I've been hoping you would continue this story for years. I first read it just as this last chapter came out, and I've never given up hope it would continue one day. I'm glad to see you haven't forgotten about your fantastic stories, or the audience would enjoys them, and I'm excited to see what you do in the future. Welcome back, and Happy New Year!
Saw your update! Has my Christmas wish possibly come true? Truly, you’re my all time favorite author on lit. Here’s to hoping for a continuation to Font of Fertility
Stories this compelling are few and far between. I sincerely hope that we will one day see the continuation of it.
And while I'm sad to have run out of your work here, I would definitely consider following your endeavours elsewhere. If you have any published work or a Patreon page, please let us know. I'm sure I'm not alone in wanting to support your work.
Absolutely great story loved the dialogue, and the story telling. Really needs more though. Great work.
The story is really nice and all but the fact that the seats just speak words is legit laughable.
Even funnier is that those words are just empty with no meaning, just empty threats. Our mc would never check if the father really abode by the judgment or not. It feels redundant. And that the story will never be finished is even worse.
All I can say is I am very disappointed! Great story line and character development...but it’s been 5 years since your last chapter submission. I hope you are not ill or having medical issues. Maybe writer’s block? Whatever the issue, I hope you finish this series...but I doubt that will happen.
So sorry I ever started this non-fertility novella. No logical conclusion when one key character is in mortal peril, is frustrating. Cliffhangers are not cute. Zero stars.
So, this is my second time reading through this story, and there is so much promise in it. The last post to the story is from 5 years ago, will there be more coming or has the writer stoped posting here on Lit? Does anyone know??
Thank you for such a well crafted, enchanting story. I join the others who hope to learn what becomes of the foursome, and Annalise.
I hope you get a chance to come back to this story. I could read this forever.
It is likely incomplete because he has been busy. He modified his profile or a story October 9, 2019, 8 months ago. While I don't know details, I've talked with him a bit and trust he wouldn't just leave us hanging like this without good reason
know I know not to read any more of your stories after seeing how you left this one -feel sorry for you -such talent gone to waste
If you don't want to write any more in this series, can you please just edit this last one, and take out the scenes with Annalise? It's a lot better if future readers can just imagine that she's okay and that her father complied with your proclamation. But this cliff you left her dangling from ...
Dick move, dude.
I love how this is written, are you still working on other chapters or have you given up publishing stories? It’s been 5 years since the last instalment and 4 since you last published on literotica. Just wondering if your still out there.
Having been a long time lit reader, I usually will go to the last chapter in a long series and check the comments to see if it actually is finished. Sadly i did not do that this time and am super salty
Great story but I hated Lauren the entire time I was reading this story
add another disappointed sigh about the story being left undone. BTB, you've got genuine talent, your dialogue is real and engaging, you've delineated a fascinating world remarkably quickly, and I hope you write more someday.
And that CLIFFHANGER, god damn!
I've enjoyed your other offerings, but Really look forward to your continuing this one. Thanks for your words and blood, so far.
Need to know what happens to Annalise, and what happens when the 4 go to college.
Oh my, the young girl being held by her father!
Please publish more
Jim
Does anyone have any updates? If the author abandoned it, I would love for someone else to pick this up and run with it! <3
But needs more! This series has soooo much potential, I hope you will eventually get back to it.
What a fun story, but you have to rescue Annalise !
Thank you for sharing your stories.
Just like the rest of your commentators I hope that you continue writing this series It is fantastic and is quite enthralling hope that any health problems resolve themselves soon and that you're able to continue writing
This was a great series. So are your other works. I hope you are well and hope to discover you writing again.
I REALLY hope you finish this story! God complex dad needs an ass kicking if ever one was needed, and Annalise's mom is dead? NO!
Almost 3 years. Have you quit writing altogether or gone on to a different site? Your story lines are great and I would very much like to see more. Please continue.
Joel
Let’s go!!!! That last chapter was fucking hot!!! Made me wish I had a magic dick! Well done, I’m waiting for more!
Cant wait for the next chapter. Really want to know how he handles Annalise's evil Dad.
Thanks for the fun story.
Hope you have some time to publish more.
I'd buy a completed version for 7.99 or so if it was released on amazon or some other format. I bet many other fans would do.
I read all 7 chapters you have up here..... Fuuuuck! I need to know what happens next!! I know you said you weren't going to post any more until you had the entire thing finished but it's been nearly two and a half years! That's a hell of a cliff hanger.
Anyway, I liked the story so far. Like a Harry Potter for grown up Perverts. There are simple mistakes peppered here and there, duplicate words, wrong words, words missing and the odd misspelling but it's not too bad and again could be solved with a good proof reader before publishing.
I hope you're still carrying on with this story and it gets published at some point because the story deserves to be continued.
I really enjoy the characters you set up for your stories, from My eyes are closed, through Technically we are estranged to now the Font.
I am really hoping we can get more of this, as I am really looking to know more of how the story goes. Especially once Jeremiah finds out about the result of his Judgement.
Like everyone else said, more chapters! This is just leaving us hanging.....
This is a great series. And I'm bummed there hasn't been a new chapter in years. When will get the new chapters you mentioned, it's really sad when a great series like this doesn't end but keeps fans wanting more.
That's all we ask, just a little bit, maybe a chapter a year? That's all we're asking for, it's not much, right?
So I would like to see some more chapters...
I suspect that though the "proclamation" didn't stop our fire mage's father from killing his wife (technically, she could be considered as NOT being part of his "family"), there SHOULD be some effect given for his having hurt Annalise... maybe at the least there should have been the equivalent of a page to Jeremiah kind of thing...
After all, can't have people going around thumbing their noses at proclamations, can we now...?
Course, it's been more than a year since you last posted a story... not looking good for the likelihood of another chapter...
I'll just have to let myself know the murdersome father dies soon, and Annalise and her sister end up OK... likely the sister ends up with one of the older brothers and Annalise some how ends up with Jeremiah.
More please..... I read something somewhere of him baling with the gardener?
I neeeeeed more, I got all the foreplay and no orgasm
Really enjoyed them so far, but need completion!