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All Comments on 'Hall Pass Blues'
by CindyTV
- 177 Comments
Have to agree-lover needs some punishment. Wild bachelor parties are dangerous and someone should have been sober and making sure he didn't do anything stupid-they always find out...
I liked it; however, I felt like there was an opportunity to go further through the emotions that both of them were feeling. Billy certainly moved on, and the voicemail from Maggie would have burned the earth regardless.
Thanks for writing!
Another awesome story from Cindy. There are quite a few hall pass stories out there, but this might be my favorite.
No persoon, man or woman, could be stupid enough to leave that message. Never-the less it was an enjoyable read. thanks *****
Damn, how much weed and wine did she take that she thought that the cm would be a good idea?
It almost seems like sh was having cold feet about starting a family and decided to delay it by introducing something to muck up the works. If it wasn't his bachelor party bj then I feel like she would have picked any other excuse. Once Billy gave consent(albeit with rules and a time limit) all she needed was the yes to justify everything else.
Frankly it seems that Maggie was just a self centered partner, now she's on her own and has to deal with the fallout.
O_KAY, ... I can't say how stupid I think a hall pass would be in real life. It's just as stupid as GNO's, as in Girls Night Out, or girls only vacations, all are an invitation to a train wreck.
Also, I agree with others that said it should be oral only and only good for one orgasm. If he was that drunk, you know he wouldn't be able to get it up after the first pop. I would go a little farther than just limiting it too oral. She would have to be totally wasted, wasted to the point that she would probable not remember any of it the next day. And it would have to be witnessed by her bride's maids and closest girlfriends and he should have a video of the act. That would be the only way it would be tit for tat, and it would have to be before the wedding.
Nope she got what she sowed.... His accident was a drunken setup PRIOR to the 'vows'. She was a selfish princess and got what she earned - BTB. That VM was way over the top wanting to push Billy into cuckold or WALK-ABOUT. Glad Billy posted it for the family to enjoy!
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But I have to say that Billy must have harbored TRUST issued with her. As keeping all his wealth building a secret from his wife for 7yrs was a subconscious act of questioning TRUST. So there was more going on during the 7yrs than what was written.
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5*****, Hooyah, Salutes.... I wish I bought those cheap BIT coins.
WOW! What a powerful Story! Wow! His wife paid back 1000 times over for breaking her word and her promises. LOL Holy Moly! What a BTB story! If only real life worked that way! Cindy another big 5 blazing stars for you for a Really Great Story, Great Writing, and Fantastic Job really. I am completely blown away! Thank You so much Buster2U
First, Great story. This story proves that the human capacity for stupidity is unlimited. There is a huge difference between oral and vaginal and anal sex. The hall pass should have been only for oral sex. She went so far overboard there is no comparison. Considering Derek is just a horny 19 year old that will take sex whenever & wherever he can get it and doesn't use condoms - I'm surprised that 1) he doesn't have multiple STDs, and 2) he doesn't have several kids and is on his way to jail for being a deadbeat dad. Considering that Derek has no problems having sex with women that are already in a relationship, chances are something very painful and hopefully permanent will happen to him as a life lesson.
Wow. Nice part incorporating the old porn clip text as the phone call. Turns the whole thing into a FTDS on steroids!!!
5 stars and a place on my favorites list!!
She was already breaking rules and going far beyond the bounds of her pass. So then she decides to tell him that he could add up every orgasm he gave her over 7 years and that it wouldn't equal one from her douchey lover? Who would accept that type of disrespect,also that's fucking impossible so she's also a fucking liar and only wanted to be a bitch. So she can be a poor slutty,bitch while he gets to be wealthy with a new fam.
I wonder what she thinks of Sambo now? Too bad he didn't give her a checkered flag to carry inside hr for 9 months and give her a memory of her "special night". Good, the whore got hers, and even lost her car! Wonder if she ever saw long dong again? 10 stars!!
Really enjoyed the linkage to one of the hottest audio files in porn. The file is at least 20 years old and more recently was joined with some hot video and imbedded text to form the video story Phone Wife Cockold Husband With BBC by Serendipity_121. I thoroughly enjoyed how you wrapped your own story around this tale in the best FTDS tradition. Your tale is great as a stand alone but as a FTDS it rises to EPIC level.
5 stars
Nice.
She treated him like shit for a drunken blowjob he couldn't even remember. Maggie deserved to end up bitter and alone after her appalling behaviour.
His mistake was agreeing to the hall pass in the first place. He didn't cheat. He was drugged up. He could not consent. So physically he did cheat. With oral only. With his friends all there. If she really wanted even, then she gets skink drunk and has a stripper eat her out. Supervised. And that's it. Agreeing to anything more would be fuel to her delusion.
As usual, Cindy writes another great story. With what's been coming down the pike is this genre lately on here is disappointing. All anti-male cuck stories. Cindy does Not do that. This author follows in the trails of the greats, like Saddletramp. 👍 ⭐️5 all day
It would have been more believable if it had turned out that she really spent the night with some girlfriends watching movies and the voice mail was just a made-up story she left so he would feel the same pain she felt when she saw the photo of him and the stripper. But good story. Thanks for posting.
Technically well-written. But, what planet are these two on? What decade does this happen in? Come on, high school sweethearts again? They are still childrrn - and they act like it. He is going to “surprise” her with a new house? Really? awhat wife would not want input as to what kind of house they live in? And HE decides it is time to have children? Not at all realistic. And this story also passes along ALL the old racist tropes. I mean, really, you had to go there? This what happens when children marry.
Her hall pass actions were so over the top and then the silly ass attempt at justifying it with pot and wine. I don't think so.
He should have never agreed to the hall pass initially (weak beginning), and they never should have gotten married if that was her requirement. Then he should never have accepted it when she attempted to use the hall pass. Go for counseling or divorce. What she did was horrific. Another case of claiming to love someone and acting the exact opposite.
Then the silly ass claim that she was getting even???? After so many years of supposed happiness? Horsepucky.
Boy! Was she a special sort of stupid. I cannot believe ANYONE can be that stupid.
They have a place for cretins, and that’s where she belongs.
HaHaHa!!!!
4/5
This female is worse than Linda in GA's Feb Sucks.
At least she got what she deserved.
One question though, if Derek the barista was that good
how come she didn't went back to him??
Another stupid female who used her vagina as her brain.
Thanks CindyTV.
Not bad. A little longer would have been nice. I think you confused barrister with barista. If Derek was 19 and worked at starbucks, he was a barista. Seems to young to be a lawyer and if he was he'd have a lot more money.
Keep em coming.
centralsquareguy...because no one wants to read that pathetic story except you. Billy found a REAL woman. Maggie got what she deserved in the end...NOTHING! 4.5*
Trying too hard to write the perfect BTB story. This was over the top ridiculous. The BTB crowd probably will love it. Unrealistic. Then, of course, it is fiction!
I don't think anyone will say, he should have shared his wealth with his slut. I love reading CindyTV.
How is the only person from the bachelor party he is mad at is the guy who turns him in? His best man had to have been part of setting him up and he gets a truck out of it. Sounds like the MC only cares he got caught not that he did it. She should have left before the wedding.
That was hilarious! A great parody of the hall pass genre story. I’m sure CindyTV is laughing hysterically at all you LDM’s jerking yourselves off to her story.
Honestly he never should have married her
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him " I was sexually assaulted while passed out drunk "
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her " How could you, you need to agree to let me cheat on you to get revenge for your being raped if you still want me to marry you "
I've just finished 2 stories over the last few days from another well known Lit.com author. He had the husband falling all over himself in his weak, spineless inability to be a man. It's with great happiness you just posted this. While the husband in this story made a mistake, he explained he's both set up & too drunk to remember, but his future wife wouldn't hear it.
So, instead of following the agreements she had with her husband, in fact, not even following her returning after only 2 hours, she tore hubbie's heart out & totally screwed her marriage. After what I've previously read, it's so great having an author that won't allow one spouse to grossly betray & belittle (in action & words, at least) the other spouse. Only 1 thing: her parent's response was known, but not of her friends & other family members. She asked for it, wanted it, & now's paying for it. 4 stars. Love this author. Bob
Does getting a blowjob while blackout drunk even constitute a hall pass in the first place. If anything it seems like Billy was raped that night. Either way the hall pass should have been at most oral only and at that point why even bother going through with it?
Every situation is different and a person doesn't really know what they will actually do until they are in the same situation. I suggest stand your ground and don't make promises you can't accept.
They both entered a marriage they shouldn't have. Then he agreed to the cuckolding, just idiotic. Then she leaves that message... if she was really that much of a moron, then who cares about any of these people?
Built story as a FTDS to the 20 year old audio file of a cuckolding her husband with a picked up black guy. Loved this take it presents an interesting BTB add on ending
5 stars
This storyline is a bit old. Adding the wife who loses her head over BBC doesn't help much, nor does the discovery years later, by the now lonely and downwardly mobile wife, of the wealth and family that could have been hers. Your very great talent as a writer is squandered on such trivial material. 5 stars for the writing but please up your game when laying out story scenarios.
So much for Midwestern values that she wanted to do this. Either she is a slut or she was so incensed by him getting a bj when he was drunk she went for the kill. It wasn't booze and weed that made her turn off the phone, and how stupid is she to have sex with a guy and do it drunk&high?
The reality quotient on this is very low. Billy realized that she had 0 respect for him, that deep down she had to hate him the way she did this. No, her doing this wasn't the same thing as his BJ, he didht seek it out. I agree with someone else, Hal was his best friend, knew he was morally trying to stay a virgin,and let this happen? If he couldn't have stopped it, he should have taken out the ones responsible and also told her that it wasn't Billy's fault, it was his,he failed him.
The one big glaring problem is he couldn't walk away giving her nothing. She knew he had money&in a divorce he isn't hiding it, crypto or no crypto. If he had financial advisors they would be subpoenaed and he would be in deep shit for hiding assets..
It’s pretty obvious from the voice Mail she left that their relationship was different from what was portrayed by this story. When she says he would enjoy jerking off to her cum covered stockings it indicates they were living some type of cuckold life style. Her calm and informative tone of voice sounds like this was normal stuff for them. OR, the Martian slut Ray strikes again.
Sad ending but appropriate. Would have written the ending slightly different but still good.
Good story!!! 5 stars!!!
A bit strange the photo incident was never believed and demostrated it was a fake one...
Great story, I loved it. 5 stars. How can I get the link to hear the voice mail?
I liked your story very much...
Men or women who are self centered sooner or later show their true colors...
In this case the bitch got exactly what she deserved!!!
5🌟s
Fred
If the MC was passed out, then no, he didn’t “get a blowjob”, he was raped! Have the girl charged with sexual assault. Charge his so called friends with accessory and conspiracy. If his fiancée clings to the idea that a man is always willing and eager, and that somehow he consented while being blackout drunk, then dump her. She’s too stupid to breed with. You don’t want to have dumbass children!
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Cindy, here’s a suggestion that I hope will help you:
The next time the moderators of this site reject one of your stories for being too violent, refer them to edrider’s stories. As long as those are still posted on this site, they have no justification for blocking anything!
ZK
If this really happened as you claim, "even" would have been that she gets blackout drunk and then some dude gives her oral, which she doesn't remember. It really never happened, did it? 'Not your worst, but not your best either.
A tad extreme, but I kind of like it. A bit generous 4 stars.
His first mistake was getting married anyway when she demanded a hall pass. Should have said no, then found the exit. He didn't do anything. He had something done to him. Yet she believed she was the one violated.
His 2nd mistake, was not bailing out as soon as she verbalized that she would probably do it behind his back if he said no. Should have left right then, gotten a few days head start on dumping her. If she is willing to rub that bit of obvious logic in his face, then it is more than obvious that is exactly what she would do. No need to even ask yourself can I trust her or closely monitor her actions. Trust just left the building and he should have too.
I can't imagine purposely starting a family with that woman. In the end he couldn't either. Good for him.
Sorry Billy, agreed before the wedding. Hate to say all vows taken during the wedding trump the agreement before. Although still the same old shit black men are better? WTF Maggie hopefully got a STD.
Well done; 5 stars, easily
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I will say she must've really been hammered with that slut-ray, huh? The only thing she didn't do was have the guy's baby, dodged a bullet there, I guess. Everything bad a wife could do... she did. Then rubbed his nose in it. Then wanted to keep rubbing his nose in it. Confessed on tape, no less. Maximum stupidity, all the way around.
Decent story, but what is it with BBC"s? Been in locker rooms in gym class in school, locker rooms in commercial gyms. On average, whites are just the same as blacks. I have a decent sized one, always "bottomed" out with whomever I was with and pleased them all. Especially my wife of 37 years. And I am not s super stud. And no, I do NOT cheat on my wife.
Sorry about all the negative feedback by those that can't do as good (or they would). Still following along with you.
Another idiot wife giving up a wonderful life for a foolish hall pass and the stereotypical big black clown. Story not up to your usual high standards, but great when compared to its competition here in loving cuckolds. Keep them coming.
Great reading.I have been reading stories on this sight for years and you rank with the great writers on this sight👍👍👍
This looks very much like a clever parody of the “Hall Pass” meme. It’s just so silly that anyone who takes this seriously needs some help. Just some fun on Cindy’s part.
Another fantasy BTB story, where the guy is the best and innocent, the wife turns into a slut, and the guy becomes rich and lives happily ever after.
Note that the wife didn't even wait to see her lover and fuck him, but turned her phone off at the very moment she was supposed to be starting to get together with him at 8 PM. So: Martian Slut Ray, with some technical details. No offense intended, but although your writing is rather good, I consider that story line average for this genre.
I want to start by saying I thoroughly enjoyed the story. It was a well written tale of a woman who lost her mind and the husband who was not about to put up with her infidelity and her disrespect.
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I have one problem with the story and so many other similar stories. And that is the use of the BBC. Are there that many RACISTS here that think a wife cheating is not enough but it is worse or kinkier if the man is the stereotypical hung black man who is great at fucking but worthless as an individual. The woman always wants to fuck the black man and even is willing to bear his kids but she never wants him as a husband or daddy to his kids. Is it because so many here think of black men as exactly that?
Cucks find it kinkier if their girlfriends or wives are screwing a black man. Other men find the race of the man makes her cheating worse.
if she really wants get even, she should give a blowjob to a drunken man and get paid for it. HaHaHa
I Love It 5 Stars
There are too many crushing and discouraging violations at once for the first betrayal of a wife who was absolutely faithful before. Did she deliberately break her husband's rules by crossing out point by point?
5 stars, thank you.
Personally I would have had some consequences against Derrick also nothing over the top but he also was complicit.
I really liked the wake up call with the car, the bulls overall and of x course his life well lives as caught on TV.
That voice-mail you based it on that voice-mail that is real on p[=nhub ,wonder how many people will notice.
Okay you had your fun Cindy! now get back on the horse and behave you hear. I was laughing so hard when your Barrister worked at Starbucks, He must be the highest educated barista in the world of making a coffee, but stranger things have happened in LW world. {lots of stars btw}
After learning that his soon to be wife demanded a hall pass for some time in the future Billy should have taken the engagement ring back and told her to think about a future without him. Billy getting drunk at a bachelor party was just stupid but finding someone who turned her on was deliberate and needed to end any relationship.
Love the strong person being either man or woman of the cheated on that just leave’s because that’s what they deserve especially when it’s premeditated like this. If she really wanted to get even technically she should only get oral from the guy and be so high and drunk she could never remember just like her hubby. As far as not never seeing the guy again as a rule or talking to him not possible as he worked In her building. Always a entertaining story from Cindytv
He should've never married her in the first place🤷🏾♀️.. he certainly shouldn't of agreed to the hall pass in hopes she won't use it.. it's either she forgave him or didn't.. a hall pass is the stupidest thing I've ever heard of.. why would she think leaving him a voice-mail telling him her lover is bigger, better and the oragsms stronger.... would make any man want to be with her after that?😂😂😂.. did she think he was a little wimp cuck?.. I can't even imagine his dick getting hard after hearing that.. she completely annihilated his manhood and self esteem and really thought he'd be home waiting for he.. her lovers dick must've scrambled her brains a little
Loved the story as written and would have loved a scene of them meeting again for greater reactions. You do character so well. Thanks for sharing your efforts.
There are some interesting wrinkles here, although still some shortcuts in the plot that left the characters shallow and not totally believable. I have followed this author since I first discovered her, and she has improved tremendously. Keep on writing!
Cindy, your story is one of loss and then finding and learning of the loss but again. I do believe your story. It is like what i'm going to give you now.
I was dating the second richest woman in Texas and living in and out of her home. My mobile homes and land of 3 acres was nothing to her postage stamp lot in a CCR area of Tyler TX. where her home was about 650K. Her new car was 65K and she called to tell me she was sorry about how we broke up. She had never had a guy drop her, she had always dropped the guy so she told me to never call or contact her again.
I had her kids do a back ground on me with a FBI agent and then the FBI telling them I was after their mothers money. I had a nervous break down. I ended up in a VA hospital for 30 days. My Dr. Gary, told me to face down what she was told was a lying about every thing and not to fight any of what the FBI found in the one name they knew about me. I had worked under 5 names, been in the Army and Air Force under two different names and then had spent time in the Alphabet units as a chopper in the 80's and 90's. So Gary said to say, if I tell you every thing is a lie, would you still love me? If not then it is over, and if yes then Johnny and not John would could back to you. Her kids wanted to push it into the FBI for predication. They found out they didn't have a case and they closed it. She found out it was all true but under 5 names and the records show it to be true. I walked a way, I didn't want to see her again or her two daughters 39 and 35 and the girl friend of one and the husband of the others after pulling a back ground on them and sending that to their Mother. The female husband was living a double life with a lady at work and out of town lovers and the husband had a blonde GF with pictures at the gym and her home on a parabolic Mice. I didn't get even but learned that money was the root of her kids eval and I didn't need it. I'm now dating a Lady, that lost her breast to cancer and didn't have them replaced do to a 50% change that cancer will come back again then. She was shock to find a man that had lost a wife to stage 5 cancer and her body had been all cut up to remove most of her body parts before she died in 2021. I haven't seen her without clothes, we haven't had sex, but have held hands, kissed and she spends the weekend in my guest room, loves my life style and my dogs and cats. Some day soon I know we will end up in bed, but to me, I love the person, not the breast. I don't think sex is all people can make of it but it is what holds us together as a couple and bonds our hearts. Thank you for your story and I do wish you the best as we both grow in life. At my age I have about 20 years to go now if I'm caring for this body and keeping it up, Next month i'm 74 years young again and I hope your working on your life now too.
Immature and boring tale about two children who didn’t grow up. Interesting how it appealed to the huge ‘holier tha thou’ audience on Lit.
I don't get it. He got drunk and passed out. While out some woman bjed him. What does everyone call this when it's the woman who has passed out and a guy does the same.
They call it rape.
So his girlfriend wants a hall pass based off what was done to him.
Well she's a peach.
Liked the story a lot, even tho the ending's somewhat sad in that the forever would never come. Maggie's wrong in not believing her to-be boyfriend about the party & pictures. She wanted a hall pass that she doesn't expect to use- just to even things out. OK. But she then uses the pass years later, when everything's seemingly going well & the past forgotten. Why waiting so damned long?
He agreed on her used, tho he didn't like it & couldn't understand her need after all that time. They agreed on rules of conduct, which was then absolutely ignored when she did have sex with this guy. To make matters much worse, her voice mail's full of betrayal, insults, dismissing her husband & his manhood.
There's no man that'd listen to how she betrayed him, not sexually as she had the hall pass, but in action by having sex without a condom, giving him her ass, as well as belittling her husbands penis & abilities of pleasing her. To top it off, she said she'd be home after 2hrs, but stayed the night & part of the next day.
She wishes she didn't use her pass, but it wasn't that which caused her marriage to collapse. It's what she did with it, and betraying her agreements with her husband, that did it. I love CindyTV- always a good, well written & interesting story. 4 stars. Bob
Cindy, Thanks for posting the links to the Audio Voicemail, AND the link to the Story with Images. The story was even more enjoyable with the photos! 5 Stars and please keep writing. I love your stories, even with the errors :)
Your usual great story, but please... please... fix your dialogue quotes. That's like the 'broken window' of story writing: so visible but so easy to repair. Like Billy, the quotes just disappeared a few times. On that note, I detest the runaway, puking, crying, getting-drunk manchildren LW writers continually memorialize, but in this case, it worked. Billy's reactions were entirely believable and measured.
That stupid slut Deserved everything she got, Including not sharing in her ex-husband wealthwealth. The husband was Exactly right for what he did to her. The only think he made a mistake in doing, was not taking Revenge on her lower. The lover knew she was married, but she fucked her and their marriage. I know I didn't feel sorry for her and wouldn't have if she would have killed herself..
Hi Cindy, yet again another entertaining story. I still don't get why the cheating partner whether male or female are so stupid. She might have been high, but is that any excuse. She wasn't high when she decided to have sex with another man. One last point, since when does a drunken blow job equal full sex. Still a good read though.
I rated this originally 4 stars, which I'm keeping. However, I find some of the writing not up to your superb style. It starts with punctuation foulups. Then some questionable word usage. For example, you wrote: "You will sleep in the guest room for a week until I can get over this." Confusing: sleep in the guest room for a week, or until he get's over her pass usage. Might not be the same. This comes after accidently re-reading this story, but having enjoyed it, I kept on reading.
>>> I don't see my remarks shown, so I'll repeat. Maggie wanted a hall pass for what Billy presumably did. He said he was too drunk, & the fact that the guy who sent the photo to her was beaten & in the hospital should indicate something. If in doubt still, why not ask WTF happened? She waits 7yrs to spring the hall pass on her husband after constantly stating that it'll never be used, that it's just a way of making things "equal" between them.
>>> Once she's with the guy, the bitch forgets all about her agreements in total? I'd hope that most women aren't that scatter brained. Then she destroys her marriage further with that disastrous phone call. That wasn't love, but attempted humiliation along with belittlement & disrespect of her husband. He didn't really mention all this in the letter.
>>> Again, Billie was beyond drunk when this supposedly happened. He didn't want that. Maggie, on the other hand, Maggie wasn't when she "forced" him with the pass. That set up her disastrous phone message while both stoned & drunk. This, however, was only to be for sex & nothing more. At the end, Maggie blames the Hall Pass on her problems & it's use. That might be part, but her smashing her agreements with Billie was the over-riding thing. I wonder how many marriages became doomed by that bullshit pass.
>>> There's mention about his sending her messages via social medias, but nothing about responses. I believe he should've just filed the divorce papers, if not immediately, then within a month or so. However, I also understand his NOT doing that. In the end, Billie had little choice than to go nuclear.
>>> Again, despite the unfortunate errors listed above initially, this's still the usual good & interesting story by Cindy, I wonder if she was in a rush for this as those errors are generally not made by this fine author. Again once more, I'm keeping the 4 stars. Bob
I'm not sure if it was intended as a parody or genuine story - the writing quality was not quite same as this author's usual and felt slightly over-the-top cartoonish (or Anime-ish?). But either way, it was an entertaining BTB read, with karma working, so 5 easy stars for giving readers positive vibes in the cesspool of man-hating that LE site lately mostly turned into.