He was Rough with Me

I think your voice is very sexy and the narrative is awesome. The quality of the audio drops off a bit when you move away from the microphone a few times. The added sound effects of what you 'might be doing' when you made the audio are very arousing, but you have to be aware that vocals are affected if your microphone is elsewhere. It might be possible to use two audio sources and blend them.

I like the slow delivery and the way you enunciate your words, although I think it would be interesting to vary the speed of your dialogue for emphasis in some locations. There are times that we move a little too slow. I suspect you are gathering your thoughts about what to say.

This feels like ad lib narration as opposed to scripted dialogue. I think it's admirable work, but your vocal talents might be better demonstrated with a specifically elaborated format which you read or memorize. Second person narrative is similar to phone sex and particularly effective, so I like your choice there.

I think it would be fun for you to narrate a longer more detailed and unique segment which is thoroughly scripted so that you know exactly where you're going and can concentrate solely on delivery. That's not to say you couldn't elaborate even more as you go, but scripting will help you maximize the quality of your piece. Obviously, it shouldn't sound like you're reading. This should be more like an audition.

I really enjoyed this!

You are so good! So hot!

Thank you both so very much! :)

You bring the kink so well

My wife and I listen to your audios whilst having sex. Love it how how wet the wife gets and starts thrusting against me when she gets turned on