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Click hereIt took the group about 3 minutes to notice we were standing there watching them.
Holly was the first to speak saying (what every cheating whore says when they get caught) "Oh my god Bubba you were never to find out about this. I'm so sorry."
"Sorry for the interruption folks, I'll only stay for a few minutes then you can get back to your fuck fest." These people were frozen in place I don't know if it's the shock of seeing me, the security guards or both.
"Holly, don't bring your cheating whore ass back to my house. Your stuff will be in the driveway tomorrow between the hours of 7pm and 9pm. At 9:01pm what you don't take will be stored in the garage until I take it to the city dump on Thursday. From this moment on you're not welcome in my house. Don't try to get in; I'm changing the locks tonight when I get home."
"Bubba please let me come home so I can explain."
"What is there to explain? Let me see you love me right."
"Yes I do love you!"
"You stupid cunt you don't have the slightest idea what love is. Maybe you think you love me but I don't ever want your kind of love."
"Please don't say that."
"Shut up you whore and listen. I don't care what you have to say. Nothing you say will change the fact you're sitting there with Mr. Johnson's cock up your ass, or that Harry was fucking your pussy or you sucked off my father. There'll never be a way to explain the fact you can deep throat someone else's cock but not your husbands. You can swallow a load of cum from my fathers cock but you won't swallow my load. You can take RJ's cock up your ass but you won't let your husband touch your ass much less fuck it. No, I don't care for your kind of love and if you were on fire I wouldn't piss on you to put the fire out."
My Dad got brave and said "Bubba you need time to cool off. Why don't we stop by your house tomorrow and talk about this."
"I don't need time to cool off. You and your whore are not welcome in my home either."
"You can't talk to me or your mother like that! I'm your father and I won't allow it in my home."
"You don't deserve my respect and I'll talk to you anyway I see fit. Not to worry I'll never set foot in this house again. Now sit down before I beat the shit out of you. George I'll never respect you or Barbara enough to call you Mom and Dad again. I don't care if you are swingers. If you're both happy with being swingers then more power to you. But you ceased being my parents the moment you fucked my wife. How in the hell can you look at yourself in the mirror? How could you fuck my wife and still look me in the eyes? No as far as I'm concerned you both died today."
Taking a moment to look around the room, I discovered all dicks were soft and not a condom in sight, the women were looking down at the floor covering their tits with their hands and the only person crying was Debbie. I'm not sure if she was crying for me, because the guy that was fucking her ass stopped or because she was strapped to a table.
"Holly. Look at me bitch! I must say you've really fucked me over by fucking my boss (Harry), my best friend (RJ), your boss (Steve), your bosses boss (Mr. Johnson), my father, if I'm not mistaken I see your old boyfriend David back there. I'll review the video later and identify everyone so my attorney will know who to name in my petition for divorce on grounds of adultery. Jim and Derrick are my independent witnesses to your adultery."
At this point everyone seemed to get their voice back. I won't bore you with there threats and pleas.
"Folks I want you to listen to me very carefully now. I never want to see any of you ever again. If you should find yourself walking toward me I strongly advise you to turn and go as far away from me as possible. Take this warning seriously. I'll beat the shit out of you if you get within my reach. This goes for you too George I'm no longer your son I'll be your worst nightmare if you ever approach me. Now I want each one of you to look at me and tell me you understand what I just said. You'll be on tape stating I've warned you and you understand. Mr. Johnson we'll start with you."
"Now you listen here young man I'll destroy you in this town if you mess with me."
"Shut up you pompous ass. It seems to me I've every right to talk to you any way I want to. What gives you the right to fuck my wife? Consider this your one an only get out of jail free card, because if you want your ass kicked just bring it on. You've been warned, I have you on tape fucking my soon to be ex-wife, I have witnesses not to mention you're on video. Now do you understand my warning?"
"Bubba you'll hear from my attorney in the morning you dumb ass."
"Mr. Johnson have you been through a divorce before?"
"Yes, I have."
"Good does the name Ben Simmons or Brian Anderson mean anything to you?"
"Yes they are divorce attorneys."
"Are they any good?"
"Yes they were my ex-wife's attorneys. I'm still paying my ex-wife because of them."
"Great they happen to be my attorneys. I'm sure they'll enjoy watching you on video fucking my wife, threatening to ruin me, and getting your ass on the witness stand where you will be named as an adulterer. Once again, do you understand my warning?"
"Yes I understand your warning."
"That wasn't hard was it Mr. Johnson. Now it's your turn RJ."
"Yes I understand."
"Not so fast. RJ you need to know I'm very serious about you not approaching me. I thought you were my best friend, someone I could always count on the have my back. Fucking my wife was more important to you than our friendship. You didn't stop fucking my wife when you found out I suspected Holly of having an affair. No...you kept everyone informed about the status of our surveillance. Hear me and hear me good. If you ever get within my reach I'll beat you so bad they'll have to take you to the hospital. You've been warned so if you forget and I beat the shit out of you don't go charging me with assault. This also goes for the rest of you. RJ, do you understand what I just said?"
"Yes I understand and I'm sorry."
"Bull shit...you're not sorry you're a sorry piece of shit."
I then turned my attention to Jason asking "Jason is your wife here with you today?"
"Yes she's the redhead sitting next to your mother."
"Never refer to Barbara as my mother ever again. My mother is dead!"
"So it was your idea for Jason's grandfather to follow Holly?" I asked.
"No. We as a group came up with the idea. This was the best way we could think of for us to control the investigation. I'm sorry we didn't mean to hurt you."
"Bull shit! I know all of you are sorry...assholes. You're sorry you got caught. If you really felt sorry for me you'd never have fucked my wife not to mention that ya'll continue to fuck her after I suspected she was having an affair. Ya'll looked for ways to control the investigation and convince me that Holly was a faithful wife, but ya'll never planned to stop fucking her." Pausing a moment to catch my breath and control my anger.
"So it was the group's idea and not yours?"
"Yes that's correct."
"Were the grandparents aware they were being used? Do they know Holly is a fucking whore?"
"Oh...no. None of them were aware they were, as you put it, being used. We were all surprised at how many wanted to help."
"Jason, do you understand what I'll do if you get where I can reach you?"
"Yes, Bubba I understand."
"Harry, I'm taking tomorrow off as a personal day to get the whores stuff out of my house. On Thursday after I get back from the dump I'll stop by the office and give Bob my letter of resignation. I strongly advise you not be in the office Thursday. I don't see your wife here so I'll assume she doesn't know about this fuck fest. Have no fear she will know before the end of the week. Harry do you understand and believe everything I've said?"
"Yes I understand. Please don't tell my wife."
"I can't believe what a stupid group of assholes ya'll are. From now on I suggest you only accept couples into your group that agree to share their partners. Holly knew I'd never agree to this life style and she should've been honest with me before we got married."
At this point Holly spoke up "Bubba I couldn't tell you. You...you...you wouldn't have married me."
"You got that right...I'd told you to go to hell in a heartbeat. You knew this and you continued to fuck behind my back. I've wasted 4 years of my life loving a cheating whore, but I'll not waste another minute of my time giving a shit about you. Now keep your fucking mouth shut and don't interrupt me again."
"Harry your wife deserves to know she is married to a lying cheating asshole and I promise you she'll know before the end of this week. Anything she needs from me to help her I'll gladly provide her and any other spouse wanting my help. Ok...let's continue."
About half way through this process a man, I didn't know, started cussing me. He was about my size so I guess he thought he'd whip my ass. So as he came toward me, I stood my ground, ducked his wild left hook, hit him in the balls with the pipe, stood him up with a left uppercut then kneed him in the balls. He fell to the floor holding his balls. As one of the women ran to his aid she looks at me saying "I thought that big guy was here to stop a fight."
"You're correct he's here to stop me from going after you. If you attack me they are to stand and watch me beat your ass. I'd like to thank this dumb ass for allowing me to show you what will happen if you ever get close to me in the future. Let me remind you I'll not track you down and physically hurt you but if you get within my reach I promise I'll hurt you. Now I hope everyone understands I'll do what I say I'll do."
It took a few more minutes but I finally got everyone on tape stating they understood my warning.
"OK before I go I want to remind you not to ever contact me. I don't want to hear from any of you. Holly you are only allowed on the driveway. Don't walk around the house, don't knock on the door, don't stand in the driveway and don't call out me name. You have 2 hours to load you stuff and leave."
I turned to walk out the door when I spotted a video recorder mounted on a tripod. I removed the camera and turned once again to the group and said "Great I'll take this with me. This should be very interesting to watch and listen to. Don't worry I'll return the camera after I make a copy for my attorney."
Jim and Derrick stood outside the door while I got on my motorcycle and rode home. Jim, Derrick and Connie were to wait outside another 30 minutes before they came to my house with the evidence.
At home I changed the locks, I'd already bought, and the message on the answering machine, before grabbing a beer and waited on Jim, Derrick and Connie.
Derrick told me Holly and her fuck buddies were quietly getting dressed and leaving within minutes of my exit. It seemed no one wanted to talk all they wanted to do was to get the hell out of there as soon as possible.
Jim handed me the memory cards. I thanked them and they left wishing me luck.
Epilogue
A lot's happened in the past six weeks, so grab another beer and I'll do my best to bring you up to date.
Review of the nanny cam video showed Holly slowly enter and look where the nanny cams had been. When she didn't see them she actually went through the entire cabinet as well as checking behind the cabinet looking for the cables. The nanny cam in the garage showed Holly looking under her car seat. You could see a smile on her face knowing for a fact the digital recorder wasn't in her car.
Mr. Johnson's attorney did call my attorney, Brian Anderson, the next day. Seems Mr. Johnson wanted to make a deal to keep his name out of the papers. It also turns out that Mr. Johnson wasn't the only one wanting to keep their names out of the paper. When Brian Anderson called wanting to know what I wanted to do. I responded "tell them to make me their best offer by tomorrow and I'll let them know. The offer has to be in writing. I will not accept anything verbal."
Holly followed my instructions and spent a little over an hour loading her stuff into a truck. When I went outside at 9:01pm everything was gone.
Thursday morning I met with Bob and gave him my letter of resignation. When he asked why I was leaving without working out a two week notice. My response shocked him when I said "because I caught Harry and RJ fucking my wife Tuesday." I paused and handed him a couple pictures to prove it. Friday Harry and RJ were fired.
On Thursday Holly's dad left a message on my voice mail wanting to know what in the hell was going on. His message pissed my off so I emailed him some great pictures of his daughter. He hasn't called back.
Karen, my sister, called me Thursday night wanting to know what was going on. I asked "do you know your parents are swingers?"
She paused then softly she said "Yes."
"Did you know they were fucking Holly?"
A longer pause this time before I heard "Oh my god you found out!"
"So you knew and didn't tell me! Not only did I find out I've got pictures. Now I'll tell you the same thing I told your parents. You just died!" I paused to get control then in a loud clear voice I said "Never ever try to contact me again! May you and your parents rot in hell!" Slowly I hung up the phone. The next morning I called the phone company and got a new unlisted phone number.
Because most of the people I caught Holly fucking were my friends I made some life changing decisions. First I didn't do anything wrong so I'd continue living my life with my head held high. Second I started running on Monday and Wednesdays and do my weight training by myself.
Deep down in my gut I knew there'd be at least one dumb son-of-a-bitch wanting to talk with me. It took a little over a week before RJ thought it was safe. As I was leaving the Y RJ got out of his car and walked toward me. I stood there with my hands in my pocket waiting on him. About the time he reached me I took my hands out of my pocket. Then...Let's just say I'm a man of my word. He only spent one night in the hospital.
I met with the wives of the men wanting to buy there way out of trouble yesterday in Brian Anderson's office. I provided them with copies of all my evidence including their cash offer. The money offer made me feel like Holly's pimp. Someone should've told me Holly was a whore—I should've been told. Cheating on your spouse isn't acceptable to me and these women needed to know what kind of men they were married too. They'd have to decide how it would affect their marriages not me, but they deserved to know.
Brian Anderson met with Holly and her attorney and played them a video from me with my settlement offer. Holly agreed to my terms. After the meeting Brian handed me a letter from Holly which I immediately tossed in the trash without opening.
Oh, I forgot to mention my house is just that "my house". My grandfather (the football coach) left me one of his rental houses in his will. He died before I ever met Holly. Let me tell you it is great to have a house without having to make mortgage payments.
Every day until I changed phone numbers Barbara called and left a message. Her message was always the same. "Bubba I'm so very sorry and I'll always love you."
What I don't understand is how she possible can love me. I don't know about you but I don't think that's the kind of love a mother should have for her son.
Will I ever forgive Holly? You can safely bet your last dollar that'll never happen in my lifetime. I'm a one woman man and I'll never share my wife with anyone.
The video tape from their fuck fest wasn't any fun to watch but I did learn a few things. Such as, Holly thanking Mr. Johnson for the race tickets and she thanked RJ and Jason for keeping her and the rest of the group informed. Next she said "I'm going off the pill January 1st so Bubba and I can start our family. So the only person I'll have sex with will be Bubba."
Someone I didn't know asked "will you come to our parties and give blow jobs?"
"No, if I do that you know I'll end up getting fucked."
Good old Mr. Johnson "Holly what about my lunch time blow job?"
"I mean no sex with anyone until I'm pregnant. I'm going to make sure Bubba is the father of our children. The day after I find out I'm pregnant we'll have a big party to make up for lost time. Speaking of lost time enough talk I need to get fucked."
Holly was really serious about having my baby, but she was looking forward to fucking someone else as soon as she got pregnant. This is the way I'll always remember Holly...a whore that's ready to fuck someone else.
- COMMENTS
Good, intense story, but summarizing the aftermath is disappointing. That’s what make LW stories so compelling.
It took a while to build up steam but shit got crazy when it did. I liked it. Outrageous fun.
Perhaps the author's least believable story. Not ossible for so many people close to the MC, including the wife, to do this for so long and him not be suspecious. Also, the story needs more exploration of the wife - Holly's- motivation. How to be a longterm serial adulteress into a deceitful swinger lifestyle and yet want his baby? Simply makes no sense. Weak story. Sorry.
fun story about some really stupid people in a crazy scenario.
I would have enjoyed a little more of Holly and the group's future. how many got divorced, did the ex-parents gravesite get desecrated with feces, where did Holly end up, did he get money out of holly's employer or did they get ruined, did he get the hell out of dodge and find happiness.
He escaped a special kind of mentally deranged hell with those people. Running away is not always a retreat, or rather a retreat is not always a defeat.
Very good, but a little hard to believe.
Talking about stupid, the wife portrayed as Holly would have given away her sexual needs a long time ago. She's just not that smart!!!!!!! Five Stars, good effort.
He divorced the slut, but he got no real revenge on anyone, and in South Carolina, revenge porn is still legal.
Without any insight into how they all just became massive orgy sluts, including his mom and dad who would fuck his wife, it's just too hard to believe. I could see them doing it if they somehow hated the MC's guts and this was some way of getting revenge on him for something, but as it stands it just makes no sense. No point saying they're crazy, delusional, etc because even that just doesn't make much sense either and is the usual go-to for stories with cheating slut wives. Even his sister who didn't seem to partake in the orgies was aware of what was going on. Man what a fucked up family and situation.
It's quite inexplicable that a woman that wants her husband's children would whore herself like this, and this story provides zero insight into her thinking and how this could have come about.
Equally inexplicable is the idea that both parents would do this.
So much so that I can only imagine what kind of Alabama family they really are and what else we haven't been told.
Bubba is a pig fkn rapists name, so there's that explanation.
Wow, Just wow!
My Apple Watch just informed me that my heart rate was way up & I hadn’t moved. I guess I need to limit even more my “Loving Wives” stories. I get too upset at their cheating.
5 full stars.
Bill S.
extremely weak payback Should have been max embarressment and suffering.
He was very slow to react when things started going wrong like finding the new lingerie.
A total over the top story, but nicely done, it has put a smile on my face just when I needed one,
Really, really unbelievable and not the least bit sexy. Just a dumb story.
Recorded on tape?! Hanging up the phone?! When was this written? 2001?
Aside from that I thought it was an interesting read.
Damn dude. The word is THEIR.
I am usually very forgiving, even with terrible grammar and punctuation, like what is shown here, but that one in particular was like bam bam bam in rapid succession. Consider an editor.
Oh sure, parents always fuck over their children. This was horseshit * 50.
Idiot
great story would have liked to hear her try and explain her way out of it though?
Really a sad commentary on life. Her comment to Bubba about not telling him because he wouldn’t marry him was so pathetic. Keep up the good work.
At the confrontation, it became a very bad Woody Allen piece. People simply don't act like that.
So where's the after math? Who got divorced? What about his family. Too much was left out of the ending of this story.
Bravo, there are few writers who can write a story in which a man makes his morals and values clear and unequivocal. 5*!!!
I am confused. How is there no hesitation or ndless anguish by the Mc. Why is there no cuckold in this story? Still only three stars because Mc needs to get after each of those folks,individually.
Great story glad someone can write a story of a man who can act like a man not a dumb cuckold. More stories please.
OUCH! You have a good imagination. A really screwed up family. Mom and Dad too?? Plus sis? Wow.
Like your writings. Keep going.
Nice fucked up family, including sister, I guess she was too busy with something else to be there. Anyway, this works as a comedy, it is way over the top for anything more.
The problem with the aftermath of your stories is that it doesn't really show how the perps (emotionally) suffer for what they did.
just wtf? that's all he does? seriously? how disappointingly wimpy, but then i've seen quite a lot of that here on literotica. there would have been so many better ways to get revenge or even or even just mess with them a bit, instead he goes for this boring mess.
Could of been great but just felt unfinished, especially how nothing happened to the family.
What The Fuck
Beermaker is one of my favorite authors but here he did not provide enough retribution on the whole cheating lot of them. Tough way to lose your entire family.
Mum, dad, RJ and sis got off way too lightly, I would have buried them all⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Not good enough revenge. These people, including his parents and sister, ruined his whole life! Why is he not having them followed and fired from every job they find? He should be leaving them homeless and on the street.
A great story in all respects except one. He should have used that steel pipe on a lot more people, including Holly.
Don’t get me wrong I loved this story it was fantastic. But I just felt I was short changed it felt very rushed at the end like you just wanted to end this story fast . There was bits missing in the story I needed that little bit more. Yes the divorce was probably a 50/50 split but will never know or what did he get offered to keep them people out of the press etc . Yes there was more things that I wanted to know about but HEY will never know now and even if I DRAGGED it out of you you would probably not give me a straight answer. So yes there was also some little mistakes but HEY I didn’t care it was a fantastic story at the end of the day so well done can’t wait for your next story. Ok so stop wasting time and start writing again.
All of beermaker's 4 stories are essentially rewrites of the same bitter unbalanced diatribe against cheating slut wives.
They are not balanced. They are not sympathetic to the history between the couple. They do not dwell on anything but the hurt.
I can't help but wonder what some cheating slut wife did to beermaker
All those people definitely need std testing
All that fucking she must do a lot of exercise otherwise pussy definitely loose
Don't matter warning unless threatened can't respond with physical force
And if live in minimum force state like Indiana really screwed
That is one reason I'm moving
But enough realism
Go guy go
Great story. His family are a bunch of arseholes. I hope he’d expose his parents to the entire town for what they are. The deserved nothing less.
This was a combination of ridiculous, wildly far-fetched, stupid, cumbersome, overly long and lame.
This poor guy was in a damned Hitchcock conspiracy movie!!! EVERYONE he knew and LOVED was conspiring against him. I would be very paranoid if I were him...
My first thought was "this guy has a lot of anger at the world" to hate his parents enough to make this up. Throw in betrayal by his best friend and wow. Also, I was confused by how distrustful he was of Holly from the beginning of the story onward. To me, naive guy that I was, I'd have said something to her about the lingerie box. Also i would have accepted several stories she might have told such as: "a friend had it sent to me because she didn't have anywhere to send it (not all workers can be sure of receiving a "private" package safely) or my friend didn't have a credit card in her maiden name and she didn't want her husband to see the bill, she reimbursed me in cash. or I was waiting to wear it for you at a later time. or I got embarrassed so haven't shown you, and so on......" To launch his investigation and involve all those strangers - telling all of them that he didn't trust his wife and wanted to spy on her for several weeks" seemed to make him as much of a slimeball as she was. All a REAL loving husband had to do was ask her about the box! That being said, it was refreshing to see a husband react with outrage when his wife cheated and disclosed a completely dishonest past. That she lied about her past might be understandable - in half the relationships out there, the woman has had more experiences than the man, from number of partners to wildness of the behavior. What is not right is that Holly deceived him but then did not TRY TO BECOME THE WIFE SHE BELIEVED SHE NEEDED TO BE to be married to him. Yes, the timeline was not perfect but that was a drop in the ocean compared to the outlandish events comprising the rest of the story.
I thought i had issues to deal with. Wife sister father mother best friend, fuck me i would be catatonic. My mind would be jello. I can't even fathom how i would deal with some of that shit.
I liked it but: All beerman stories are the same. Come up with the most outlandish betrayal you can, so you can justify hell and damnation in retribution. There is little suspense in beerman's stories, you know what will happen and how it will end. A good author can tell a story well, a great author can tell any story well. Beerman is a good author.....but only tells one story. I liked "cantbuymy" a lot (before he got banned) he could write a nasty BTB story then turn around and write a completely different story like "Goldilocks" and "The Korean Bride".
A friend of his from childhood told him years ago that he came home early one day to find his wife of 18 months in bed with both of his parents. Apparently it was going on since before they married.
His father is still in a wheelchair, never to walk again. His friend got 8 years in jail, my work colleague regularly visited him. He was stabbed to death after 2 years. His mother committed suicide 6 months later.
Fucked up.
Holly was a truly nasty whore. It would have been nice to have a little backstory on the parents, Holly, and the friends. But, I'll take what I can get. Another BTB, with roasting parents, friends, and assorted bastards. What a BBQ!
Your story went in to many directions, To many grandpa's and grandma's, I guess I kind of got lost somewhere. Let's see, Jr and Jason told Holly what had aroused your suspicions. Right? Knowing this. Why didn't she surprise you with the undies? At least to allay your suspicions? Or to shut you up. She could have always ordered new ones for the guys. Why did she take the box home? Or at least, Why didn't she slow down a bit just while you settled down? I mean, this was no 15 year old wide eyed dummy. Was she? No. She was a college educated proffesional and so were her bosses and your boss. Also , Why was Debbie walking outside naked? No neighbors? And nobody heard a motorcycle driving up? There were just to many inconsistensis in this story to make it belivable. I could point out a lot more if you would like to hear them. Like making threats of physical violence against all of them. I think you should have gone back and read this story before you printed it.
who gives a shit if it took him 5 minutes to have 10 lawyers and 100 people at his disposal
the important thing in this story is that he got rid of the cheating bitch and her consorts
i would have liked for him to fuck up his dad just a little and make his so called mom and sister pay somewhat for their betrayal
but still a good job beermaker i loved it
to timriv she did fuck the family dog but beermaker didn t want the dog to catch a disease and die
He really worked fast.He was able to talk to five attorneys and a security firm and set it all up in an hour .Who are you kidding?.
Would have liked some back story, such as how this all began prior to the marriage. But God enough as is.
Over the top the only one "beer Maker" had not fucking Holly was the family dog, 😂
are you people for real it was his mom and dad in this club like they gonna say hey son I wanna fuck your wife care to take mom for a spin or do you want to watch me and your best friend fuck your wife get your heads out of your asses and come to the real world
Hi there it's me again! This story is so annoying, I can't get over WHY WASN'T HE ASKED TO JOIN IN?
Also if he was a real square? So go figure?
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR THIS STORY BUGS ME BIG TIME!
Yes I know a lot of people would love their wives to get fucked by big bad John
BUT FUCK ME MAN! -WHY WASN'T HE THERE WITH THEM
LOVE YOU ALL! GREG! OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
Someone should have died. That would have made the story more real. So many people working to make his life miserable, someone should have paid the ultimate price and left the rest wondering when their time would come.
These comments give me the willies man! This is LITEROTICA expect the unexpected! What I don't understand why they never invited him in the first place. ? Oh well shit happens! Maybe you clowns that write shite comments (I BET YOU WISH YOUR WIFE WAS GETTING FUCKED BY ALL OR YOU WERE ONE OF THEM FUCKEN HER) LOVE YOU ALL! GREG OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
was poorly written drivel, it shows the IQ of a retarded third grade student with down syndrome. The comment was written by someone with no understand of what manhood is. It is my belief that it's a transgender wannabe left it. I hope that beermaker gets it the same consideration, that you would get to a burnt out crack addict, although doing so would be an insult to the addicted.
Garbage. Poorly written. Formulaic. Boring. You need an editor. Waste of time. Sorry. I wanted to give you 1*, but my mouse slipped, and I gave you 2* by mistake.
It seems BTB stories do generate an awful lot of heated comments.
Which means to me the author has tapped into a sub culture attitude on this site.
I did enjoy reading the story and I must agree with some of the comments on here.
Why is the wife not a slut with husband why act prudish ,! ?
Is it a cover to hind her slut nature or did she just marry a simple man so she could easily fool to carry on her swinging lifestyle.
Also did she swing husband's psrents before she knew her husband and then married him. Which means his parents were in on the whole charade from the very beginning !
What a fucked up family ! Lol
I'm no expert, but just because he warned them, doesn't get him out of assault and battery charges if he beats someone up just because they approach him, as long as they don't ATTACK him.
The name of the sequel is 'Following up on Holly the slut wife' however you wont find it here anymore because it's by an author that has been banned, Cantbuymy.
I found it again on storiesonline.net but I know I read it here first.
Why wasn't this bitch just a whore with her husband? It just doesn't make sense, did she get off on cheating?
I've had my encounters with redheads any they are always whores. I don't think they can help it it's in their genes. But if this story is true your a fucking God do get done what needed to get done.
deserves more of a physical response than just beating down the one SOB who decided to challenge him. This is betrayal of a magnitude that equates with treason against a country. His parents? His bosses? Her bosses? His best friends and their wives? And half of the Shag community it seems. His wife went way beyond cheating. Who cares if she didn't let him fuck her ass? Not every man lives to stick his dick in shit. But the fact that she was so plain vanilla with him and actually acted prudish is bullshit and just part of the cover up. I think that since he had the pipe in his hand already and the one guy had gotten him warmed up he should have bashed in every skull he could reach and he should have especially fucked up his mother and father and wife. Then he should have set fire to the basement and just let the fire do the rest. Gosh that felt good to get out. Well written story, fuck the English Nazis on here. This was a well written and well played out conspiracy where everyone but him knew what was going on. If the parents knew that he wouldn't accept that kind of lifestyle for himself and his wife they shouldn't have hooked him up with someone they were already fucking. I know it was just a story and my response was just part of a different kind of story. Hooty-hoo
There is a sequel to this story, but it does not have a believable plot.
Beermaker, you need to check out the differences among there, their, and they're.
I could have sworn there was a sequel to this floating around but I can't find it. After reading this again I now really want to read the next one again.
It went over the group trying to kill him and them going to prison... him taking in his other, younger sister, that was still living at parents house.... reason his grandfather left him the house not his mother... him not being his father's bio kid.... younger sister not being mom or dad's daughter but child of one of the rest of the group (sister in this one I think)... younger not actually sister helping with the group's downfall with her own video evidence...etc.
I know this existed... I'm not creative enough to have imagined it. Please help me find it.
Epilog should have been what happened 5 years later or more. Not just what happened next as this was expected. Otherwise not a bad story. Maybe a short discription of what happened after his parents died or how holidays were. I dont know i wanted more dirt or some fallout.
still five stars. Very engaging. Because her behavior is so inexplicable, especially in light of how the author portrays her when she is alone with hubby, I feel like this story is missing the explanation that hubby would not allow her to give. The behavior of the wife, and parents for that matter, is so extreme. The beginning of an explanation is there, with her obviously being involved with mom and dad prior to these two marrying. But I would love to know why she is willing to do things with others that she does not do with her husband. She seems genuinely loving when just around him. She doesn't display any of the tell tale signs at home that would coincide with the level of disrespect she is showing behind his back.
In this case consequences and no revenge is acceptable because Bubba had only invested 4 years in the relationship, and the cheaters were all exposed. His family lost him as much as if they had killed him themselves. Even cheaters might feel that pain. Odd thing though, why didn't his parents bring him into their lifestyle long ago or at least let him know what they were about? If Holly had been upfront, a lot of pain could have been avoided.
I like your style beermaker.
I'm also an amateur beer maker, and take pride in the beer I make, I think it would piss me off more if someone was drinking my beer as to fucking my wife.
As you know, you can't wear a pussy out by fucking it, but once the beer is gone, it can't be replaced, since every batch I brew is a little different in taste. Beer is a living organism and has it's own little life.
Thanks for the good read
and a whole bunch of new friends. TK U MLJ LV NV
I'm guessing you have some serious issues with a woman from your past. And probably a lot of anger. Pretty good story of revenge. Like a previous commentator said, an editor would help make this a little more readable. But it was certainly entertaining
Why ask why?
This is cheating porn. No...not the kind where a man has a sloppy semen covered grin on his face as he finishes his creampie like a good little boy.
No, this is 'I want to write a story where some cheating bitch gets really hurt...and so do her cheating partners, so I have to force write the most egregious cheating scenario I can imagine so I can justify the violence with clean hands.'
If SOS was spending too much time at the Y, the gym, work, dancing, helping troubled youths, making beer, doing overtime to the point where Holly was feeling neglected...well...that would add nuance. That would give her a scintilla of an excuse. Can't have that so instead we have MOM eating out a guy's wife.
I think I threw up in my mouth a little from that thought alone.
This is five times a fantasy.
No explanation of why everyone in his life hated and betrayed him.
His parents, his sister, his "friends".
He would be better to have enemies, at least he would expect them to work at harming him.
Without that this is only a fragment of a story.
This story just stretched out to the totally unbelievable and pathetic. Made no sense what so ever. Ya it's a story but a really fucked up one. Didn't care for all the hatered for one clueless guy by FUCKING EVERYONE! And no reason given for all the hate.
Clearly, Holly wasn't a whore because she gave it away for free. She probably didn't think of herself as a slut either; just a woman who loved intense sex.
I would like to challenge Beermaker (or any other author) to follow this story up, re-telling the story from Holly's point of view. (I know it's been 7 years, and he has certainly gone on to other things...)
Holly certainly knew that she was leading a double life, but was comfortable with it. Her comment that "you were never to find out about this" indicated that she felt she could go through her life along two paths. She wasn't schizophrenic, not knowing what the "other Holly" was doing.
In some way she loved her husband, but love and faithfulness were different issues for her. What was her definition of love for her husband, from her point of view? Did she love him like a brother?
In her mind, why did she have sex prudishly with her husband, but no holds (holes?) barred with her fuck buddies? Why did she avoid intense sex with him?
Maybe a few sessions with a marriage counselor would be interesting, with her trying to figure out why her husband reacted so strongly, and how she could win him back?
Did she have the female equivalent of a "madonna/whore" view of him? Did she not want to sully him? Did she idealize him as a loving father to her child, and not expect sex from him after parenthood?
What did she see in him before they were married that made her know he wouldn't be into group activities? Had they had casual discussions about other spouses cheating?
Did it occur to her that she might bring STDs home to her husband?
I'm sure she would have liked to go the rest of her life living "two lives" without her husband knowing about it.
Let's look at the story through Holly's eyes.
I have never read a story before, of such complete betrayal, by everyone of importance to the protagonist.
Thank goodness he learned the truth before Holly got pregnant!
Robert
Not the story - it was well written. Just the actions of the people involved. All the cheaters deserved so much more revenge to alight atop there heads. I can't imagine being betrayed in that manner by every single person I loved. His Parents???? That has to be the worst. Time to get the gun......
please give a sequel to this, it really needs one, as i want to know if she really loved bubba or if anyone did for that matter!
Cantbuymay I read some interesting comments at the comment part of stories.
For example I read a JustPlainBob's comment at a story of other Author about 2004-2005.
JPB wrote a complain that THE AUTHOR DID NOT WRITE LONGER EPILOG TO HIS/HER STORY. This is not joke...............
It's a great story that needs an ending. I'm sure there are a couple of authors out there who could do it. The sad part would be one would write a reconciliation and Bubba joins the group......NOT!!! But then another could really heap more misery on the whole group. The best part, Bubba hired sharks that don't work for free. As a consequence, Bubba lives happily and very wealthy ever after. Maybe "Finishthedamstory" would take up the project. He seems to like doing that and so far his work has been pretty decent.
"f you cant then quit writing"
Heed thy own advice wanna-be-cuck, any author who doesn't allow anon comments is a fucking wimp, a pussy, a cocksmoking, thin-skinned, cries to mommy, limp-wristed, salad-tossing little bitch.
cantbuy or beermaker, which one is the cornholed queer?
Here is a hint, which one doesn't allow anon comments. canttaketheheat, get out of the kitchen.
I read a comment from Beermaker, that he wrote he got a lot of injuring feedback and he stopped to write on Lit and SOL alike.
please write a sequel, i want to know what happenned to all the characters please write a sequel.
Do it. I've been waiting for your take on this tale. The whore needs more retribution. So do all of the participating parties, including the parents. CBM, do it.
i wish beermaker was still around but there was not even the slightest amount of real payback in this story. i wrote "they deserved to be punished" for one of his now maybe these people should get some of mine too?
Anon For arrestation from the Police is important either the denunciation from the victim or from witnesses (security video file). If the victim and witnesses admited the injury was right in that case the Police would omit from everything. Except for long Hospital treatment or murder................
The old Hungarian way of saying : "The bussines dependes on two parts".
You know I prefer at least an attempt at realism in my BTB stories. I know with laws being the way they are that can be hard but this story didn't even make the attempt. This guy broke so many laws it's not even funny. He even had himself taped threatening them with physical violence then preceded to beat the crap out of a guy who just walked up to him.
In the real world the guy would be in jail now and there's really no doubt about that so that really doesn't give me any real satisfaction with this story.
i wrote it before and i will write it again.
those pics and movies should go up to everyone at the parent's churches, neighbors, co-workers - when the sister gets married a copy should go the groom and his family, everyone involved should have everyone they know get copies and lets not forget putting copies in the newspapers for links with everyones names. when you want to burn the bitch down burn them all down!
but I think the son should have walked up to his mother and slapped her face and have walk over to his father and punch once in the gut and a second to the side of his head. This to be a reminder as to what great parents they are to have fucked up their son's life and if he ran into his sister she should get a slap as well. Nothing more just so they can share in his pain and cost of betrayal before he cut them off, having this little reminder would definitely help when they chose to make contact down the road.
I loved the story but felt the parents and sister and the wife got away too easily. This is what he should have said. :" Barbara your my mother and you made my sex life suffer because you wanted my wife to have a better one? If your truly sorry then show it, compensate for it by using your credit card and buying me the best pussy money can buy. I cant believe a son is having this kind of conversation with his mother but a mother who has a hand in ensuring his son's sex life sucks (no variety from holly) deserves nothing less. Make sure to pass the message to your husband, i am not sure if he is my father because your a swinger and i would not be surprised if someone else knocked you up. Anyway's pass the same message to your husband and if you'll are truly sorry start compensating for my sex life, make sure i get nothing but the very best that money can buy." He should also sue everyone and extract as much money as he can for damages rendered. He should ask holly to sleep with his top clients to ensure that he gets some good business deals, she owes it to him. She loves extya cock anyways so why not turn it into an advantage for the poor husband whose a victim? If holly does not agree, he should ask his parents to convince her since they were a part of this mess too. Next comes his sister karen, No treatment like holly for her but she needs to be punished never the less. He has to give her a dressing and wait for a situation to arise where he can take advantage of, if not try to create a situation where he can do so and humiliate her.
This is the ultimate betrayal by parents to a son so i feel they should not go unpunished.
A tale so twisted that I absolutely loved it. I was giddy reading this.
Only if you have more guns and Amo than I do. Putting your cock in my private pussy is a killing offense. They should be thankful if they are left alive.
a pick up truck - a ride to the hills - a sack - 20 large starved rats dosed up on ecstasy - a long slow lingering fun agonizing few days for the nonce.
at least once a year he should send the tapes, disks, cd's, to every neighbor of each person involved. he should also send it when his sister wants to get married to the new family so they can know exactly where she comes from. EVERY YEAR for the rest of their lives - their church group, neighbors, schools where their children go, to their employers, to every company that sells to them and every company that buys from them, EVERYWHERE everyone gets a copy and a special web site with a public notice where to find it. keep doing it - the cost of cd's is going down. and if you can break into their e-mail accounts be sure to send it to everyone in there too.
Anonymous 04/13/12
1. Who are interested in other life in a medium town??? In a little town or in village I think where everybody knows everybody, it may be, but in medium city.
2. His exwife was swinger before her marriage and she followed it after marriage. The story tells everything she lied him not to tell her lifestyle before marriage and after marriage. Majority of the people are not swinger, so the majority of the city dwellers would not injure him, moreover they would sympatetize to him after knowing his story.
3. Why should he have struggled for her????? A lying wife.......................He could get better woman, only the Author stopped write the story with the future of the characters.
Love how anonymous dis a writer. Too much of a chickenshit to even be a user. He(?) certainly doesn't know jack shit about women. A lot of men give their wife all they can handle and some of them will still cheat anyway. A lot of women cheat not because of the sex but they want more romance, adventure, etc. A lover doesn't have to cut the grass, work on the car, take care of the kids or thousands of other things hubby's do when their wife is around. A lover can give 100% of their time to the lady. I thought it was a very good story.
We do not know if this Author would have written any sequel chapter for this story?
The offenders chased him to write more stories here. I think the story is a round first chapter of a longer story, in which the main character gets his second chance (for injuring poster fellows second chance = the right woman). Unfortunately we will not know it............I think this sexual group is a closed circular swinging group and the main character is not interested in this LYFESTYLE only. The part of the liberty that we are not be obledge to such sexual behavior which is not our taste at all. The main character as the majority of the inhabitans on our planet the Earth are not interested in this lifestyle and when he got the information about it, he abandoned his relatives, friends and he divorced his wife. I know such married pair who were wives swap connected and their (it is not joke) son became Roman Cattolic priest!
To send the video to friend, collegues and on the Net is an interesting revenge thing, but I think he did well, because his parents and sister involved in this circular group and he stopped at cutting off his connection to everybody instead offending his near relatives.
I am revenge story fan, but I prefer the exact level revenge and cutting off the connection to his near relatives the exact level, if it lasts long time......................forever.
he gulped hot jizz, took a fat cock in his cornhole, betrayed!
Damn, I don't think it can get any worse than that. This guy lost everything with the possible exception of his self-respect.
The story left me feeling very empty and unsatisfied. Obviously the situation was over the top. There needed to be a lot more information about the aftermath to overcome the sorrow one had to feel for this guy. I needed to hear about his Mother pleading with him to forgive them and let them back into his life, to no avail of course.
I needed to hear about his wife begging him for forgiveness. I really needed to hear her explanation as to why she would not perform sexual acts with him that she performed with the group. I would have liked to have him read the letter. I don't understand why all of you authors always have the guys throw them away without reading them. What is that about? Do you think it makes them look weak or something? He might not give a shit about what she said but wouldn't he be curious enough to want to know? How could he not want to know how she got involved with his parents in the first place?
I would have liked to have seen the retribution go further. As someone suggested, copies of the video should have been sent to everyone even remotely familiar with those in attendance. A cover letter should have been included to introduce the players.
I needed to see how shitty Holly's life was after the divorce. I needed to see her and her boss get fired and her ending up working as a waitress in a Denny's.
I would have liked to have heard about the uninvolved spouses ruining their husband's lives.
I wanted to see the whole town shunning all who were involved. This guy really lost everything but a rental house he was so damn proud of for some reason. Everyone else should have lost everything as well to ease their betrayal in the reader's mind.
Finally I needed to see him get a better job and meet someone nice. As it is, he just seems like the ultimate loser through no fault of his own.
Someone commented that he could not take care of business and keep his wife at home. Did you read the story??? He tried and she pushed back. She was a player before they met. His only possible fault was that he did not recognize it before they married.
Although I liked the fact he stood up for himself and threw the bitch out he still ended up as a massive loser without his wife, his parents, his sister or many of his best friends he is basically alone in this world and although he can rebuild his life why would he want to do it in the house and town he lived with his wife with? Everone will know that he wasn't man enough to keep his woman from not only fucking his boss and friends but also his mum and dad. How could he walk around the streets with his head up when everone that sees him will be pointing and laughing at him. Last point what's the whole thing with the warning people on tape that he'd beat the shit out of them if he sees them? Is that going to work in a court of law? "Oh sorry your honour I know I crushed his skull but I did tell him I'd fuck him up if we crossed paths." "Fair enough case dismissed.". Very unlikely
I haven't read a story where it was everyone against one.
Bubba against everyone. His wife, friends, parents, co-workers, sibling and superiors at work. Complete and utter betrayal. Incredible.
FUCK