All Comments on 'Intrigued Ch. 09'

it was very good but i was upset about it not being a little longer, ah well. you are still a very good author and i look forward to your next chapter

I'm loving this story. It does live up to its name. I really hope by some miracle Raven can actually give Keegan a kid, now that would make it really unexpected and surprising!!! Hope to get more chapters soon!

believe I missed this update! It was great, too. Loved that Raven got to meet his mom (they like each other!) and that she found out she could eat food after all these years, can't even imagine the bliss of that since I've never went without. What she told his mother almost brought tears to my eyes...so fucking sweet! I very much liked how you made her deny his proposal and they had a chance to discuss her apprehensions before she finally agreed. That was a hell of a lot better than her just saying yes and letting things hang loose till they ate away at her. I can really feel the love between these two and it just makes me smile so hard :D

I am so happy !!!! Its touching !!! Beautifully said !!!!

Light eater my ass had me cracking up I wonder why the subject of turning him has yet to come up. It would be a nice surprise if she could get pregnant