by Richard_Steele
Watch your spelling. Blatantly not blatently, caressing not carressing, squeaks not squeeks, aisle not isle, definitely not definately.
Also, whena comma goes at the end of a quotation, not a period. For example "I am on the swim team. I have been thinking about trying out for cheerleading." She responds. It should be "I am on the swim team. I have been thinking about trying out for cheerleading," she responds.
Overall very hot story, but work on your spelling and grammar/punctuation.
What's going on with Joe's girlfriend having smaller tits than his sister?