All Comments on 'Juliette's Surprise'
by bindme
- 6 Comments
Hey BindMe! If this is the best you can write, this half-assed, pathetic procedural of a story, and not even very well thought out, then you really ought to quit because after reading this I've concluded the only real dildo is you.
That guy is a Dick. Your work is a little rough but don't quit. Just keep practicing. Oh and congrats this is the first FTM story I've seen here as opposed to the Standard MTF
I didn't think the other reviewer was "a dick." I thought he told the truth. The story was half assed and not ready for Literotica or anywhere else. It was just slapped together crap but some people are so wussy they would rather say something is good than say it stinks. How will an author do better?
I don't mind that people don't like my stories. I don't write for anyone else, really. These are ideas, fantasies, just thoughts I have. I post them here because I don't see these fantasies otherwise addressed. I may not be the best writer, and no I don't consider this work worth much more than a little bit of editing, but I'm not bad. And given that I have written for a living I really think I've got this down.
Thing is, just because you don't like someone's work doesn't mean you should ever tell them to stop. Being mean, insulting them, telling them to never write again is the worst thing you can do. I don't mind criticism, I wish I got more constructive feedback actually, but just telling someone to stop writing because it's not to your taste...you are the one who should stop.
However, thank you all for your feedback. I do this for fun, honestly, and I just want to see my brand of fantasy out there. I am always looking to improve, and I am constantly doing so.
Thanks for putting this out there-it was great. I couldn't quite figure out how he used one hand to rub her clit and fuck her with the dildo...but that was the only thing that I saw worth critiquing. Otherwise, I felt like I was right there watching them.