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Click hereMy strategy of "lie back and wait, see what happens" had not exactly paid off. It was time to look right at what Julie had done—and make her look at it.
When Julie found me in the living room Friday evening there was a surprised look on her face.
"Honey, is everything OK? I saw your car when I got home, and wondered if anything had ...."
She broke off when she saw my face. I was sitting up straight on the sofa, looking at her with a face that must have conveyed the icy anger I was feeling.
"Hello, Julie," I said quietly. Then, "anything go on yesterday that you neglected to tell me about?"
She stood very still, just looking at me. She looked too terrified to speak.
After a minute of waiting I reached over to the side table and picked up the tape recorder I'd brought down from the bedroom. Without speaking I pressed "Play".
In the quiet room we heard Bobby's voice say "C'mon, Julie, suck it."
Then Julie: "I ... I've never ... Bobby, I don't know how!"
Bobby: "You've never sucked a cock? ... Okay, babe, it's not so difficult. Just take it gently in your mouth... just the head, that's it. Ooh, good! Now use your tongue all around it—just keep your teeth from scraping me..."
The tape stopped suddenly. With a sob, Julie had lunged forward to press "Stop". Now she was sitting on the edge of the sofa, crying, her face buried in her hands.
I listened to her cry for a few minutes. Then I got up and walked to the door.
"I'll be back in half an hour. In case it's not already obvious to you, we have some talking to do."
With that, I left her and climbed the stairs to the bedroom.
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When I returned to the living room Julie was sitting on the sofa, gazing out the window. She turned to look at me, and I saw her red eyes and the make-up that had streamed down her cheeks along with her tears.
I sat down without a word and looked at her, waiting.
Finally she said, "Alan, I ... I know you ... you must be expecting me to explain what I've done ....
"But I can't! I've done a terrible thing, I've cheated on you, I've broken our marriage vows, and I can't ... I don't even know what happened. I know I've hurt you, and ..."
"Do you love him?" I interrupted her, my voice quiet but harsh.
Her head swung towards me, a shocked expression on her face. "Of course not! It was just ... just a stupid flirtation that got out of hand. I'm so sorry, sweetheart!" She started to tear up again.
Quietly but relentlessly, I made her tell me all of it. The meaningful glances at works, the kissing in the stock room, the first time at his apartment, and then their tryst in our bedroom. Her voice flat and toneless, she answered all of my questions. I even asked her about the positions they fucked in; looking at me shamefacedly, she told me about the doggy-style and the time she sat straddling him in a chair. Her expression made clear that she remembered just as well as I did that she'd refused to try things like that with me.
"And was he a good fuck?" I asked, still in a quiet voice. "Did he make you come? Is he better than I am?"
For the first time she hesitated, crying harder—but she must have felt she had no choice but to answer me.
"It was ... exciting, Alan. Because it was somebody new and different. And he's only 26, so he can ... he can do it again pretty quickly."
She saw the pain deepen in my face, and turned away.
"And you were cheating on me, right Julie? You were fucking him behind my back, and it was a turn-on, wasn't it?"
She looked back at me, distraught. I could tell she wanted to cry, "no, Alan, no it wasn't like that"—but she couldn't deny it.
"And then there were all the new tricks," I went on. "Sucking your first cock, after 22 years, and it wasn't even your husband's! Getting your pussy licked, and not by your husband's tongue! Fucked from behind, fucked on a chair, fucked all afternoon in your own bed, your husband's bed—but not by your husband!"
"Stop, Alan, stop!" Julie was weeping, looking at me beseechingly.
"Oh I will, Julie, I'm all done." I went to the hall and returned with the suitcase I'd packed upstairs in the bedroom. When she saw it Julie jumped up and came towards me. "Please, Alan, please don't leave!"
"Oh, I'm not leaving," I said. "You are! I've packed some of your things—and I want you out of this house. Now!"
She looked at me in utter shock, and I went on.
"I don't want to see you this weekend. You can come back during the day on Monday and get the rest of your things. That will be your last chance—after that I'm changing the locks."
"But Alan, please, you can't throw me out!"
"On the contrary, I most certainly can. Go to your sister's, go to your parents, find a hotel, I don't give a shit. Just don't plan on coming back here.
"This is how it is Julie. I don't want to see you, talk to you, or hear from you for two months. Don't call me, don't email me, don't send me a fucking carrier pigeon."
"But honey..." she was wailing. I ignored her cries. Taking her firmly by the arm and the suitcase in the other hand, I walked her down the hall to the front door.
Getting more and more hysterical, she cried, "Alan, don't do this! I'm your wife!"
"You WERE my wife, you silly bitch. But right now you aren't anything to me but a slut who fucked another man in my bed! And you're getting the hell out of my house!"
Turning to the hall table, I put her purse in her hand and the suitcase on the front step. Then I moved Julie, still sobbing, out the door and closed it firmly behind her.
[End of Part 1—This story will continue in two months.]
- COMMENTS
I couldn't imagine the pain I'd feel if betrayed like this. Giving away "firsts" to a lover after refusing your husband is so severe, even if you didn't truly care about them. It's a mark that can't be erased.
What a loser, as if he didn't push her to experiment. Still, the locking her out is like saying I don't want you and I expect you to make other plans, which she will. Then he'll get all salty again.
Divorce her and grow some, maybe get back with her in a couple of years. But don't be a wait and see simpster.
All the sex acts she did first with Bobby wiukd basically blow reconciliation out yhr windows in the real world. Especially the oral sex blowjobs. Seriously? It is simply a very big issues for husbands. Don't get me wrong. After their discussion this chapter Julie is practically perfect in what she does and says in order to forster reconciliation. But still the experimentation? Wtf? Gah!¡
The stupidist thing you authers have a husband ask a cheating wife is "do you love him?"Like if she did it made it acceptiable?Give us readers a breaker..Who /what husband would give a shit.she cheated thats all that matters..divorce,thats it...3 stars..Jzk
3..divorce..thats it....
I would not have bothered reading this knowing I have to wait so long for the follow up..
There may be some men that tuned in to their wives. Very few. But it works for the story and given it is three parts, the circumstances of his discovery aren't going to be the focus.
This is real life. People cheat. They get excited, they get selfish, they don't think they will get caught, and they usually don't get caught. They get away with it because their spouse trusts them. It seemed a bit strange that the wife went after boy toy. A more realistic scenario would be that he flirts hard, and she doesn't shut him down. He keeps working her and over time she starts entertaining the fantasy until she gives in. Again, it could happen this way. Just seems a little less likely.
There can be no reconciliation here. A woman who does every sexual act for another man while denying her husband even a blow job is an evil, disgusting woman
See no way back for them. Her refusal to do anything different with her husband and then do much of it with Bobby is a bridge too far. Especially when she went back a second time and refused to confess when confronted. Yeah that is a big betrayal. Author will probably have then reconcile but will need to pull a rabbit out of a hat. Betrayal is too large. Not sure why commenters are upset that Alan asked about if sheblived him or not. It is a standard question for a reason. We are all human. Not Alan didn't bother with any other questions of significance. Just his condemnation thatbshebgot off going behind his back, thinly veiled as a question.
"He's always wanted me to, but ..." - So she won't do it for her husband, who has ALWAYS wanted her to, but does it for Lover Boy?
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"I was more aroused than I'd ever been in my entire life." - So she NEVER got that aroused by her husband> Sad!
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"if I had come on to him too strongly he might have wondered what was going on." - Couldn't she come on to him at ALL?
The cheater will say anything, save the truth, but only to get control back. So, why ask? If she did love her lover or wanted to use him to create a divorce, SHE would’ve arranged for her cuck to find out.
These writers that always have the mc ask do you love him are just completely stupid. That does not matter and of course the answer will always be no. Just totally overdone and trite.
It will be interesting to read the next part, but when a guy asks "Do you love him?" and "Is he better than I am?" your first assumption is that the guy is a beta-boy and will act the part.
Great, so far Alan has handled it perfectly. If they go to counseling this marriage can possibly be saved. But on the other hand he may not want the marriage to continue, so throwing her ass out was the right thing to do. It gives him and her time to think. I kinda believe if she stops her foolishness he will take her back. And as always, he needs to introduce Bobby to an aluminum baseball bat.
Good start, it is amazing how a person can get wrapped up in the comment. On to the next chapter.
Thanks for your writing.
I know it’s realistic. I can remember when I was 23, happily married, but I had work colleagues that liked to play. They would tell me when their wife ( if they were married) or if they were single that when they when out to a night club that that only approached married women that had on wedding rings. After several drinks and dancing they would often get lucky and leave with her. They would indicate these women went wild and would do things with them they never did I with their husband. The reasoning was if I do that with my husband he will lose respect for me and thinkI a slut ???
Even anonymous commentators sometimes make idiotic comments! Who cares whether she's now giving blow jobs or whether she is being satisfied orally now? Only idiots! She denied it to her husband for 22 years and immediately granted it to her lover.
Imagine you are sitting in a beautiful beer garden and drinking your beloved beer when someone comes by, takes your glass, drinks your beer and pukes it back into the glass. Would you still drink your beer then? I thought to myself, no of course not! Then why do you want your wife back after someone defiles her? Because you're a pervert, or why?
You anonymous BTB fans need to calm the fuck down and look at the scenario from an optimistic viewpoint. Before Julie cheated on Alan with the handsome hunk Bobby she never gave Alan any blowjob neither did she allow him to go down on her. Now that she's been found out cheating on her hubby dearest, her guilty conscience (and Alan's vengeful conscience too) will make her want to make it up to her cuckold hubby and therefore she will let Alan go down on her cheating pussy(a pussy is a pussy and that's what men want, innit?) and even suck his dick! Alan has much to gain from here. Go Alan! Go cuck! Take your cheating wife back!
5 stars from a recovering misogynist BTB-addict
The first part is alright but the rest is pretty boring tbh. There is nothing original and certainly no new ground. It's just meh
Maybe she would have realized how hard her husband's cock was if she ever paid it as much attention as she did to Bobby's!
Again. Apparently I read this first chapter a while back, but didn't finish it. I like this first chapter.
So far so good. Hubby appears to have some self respect in this chapter. Lets see if Ohio makes him a spineless CUCK by the end!!!
Why do married women always have invite their lovers to the house and even bed shared with their husband. Are they not aware of the law, "you don't shit where you eat"? Any women care to respond to this question?
It would be tough enough if not impossible to get past the cheating. But the act of doing all of the things she denied her husband for 22 years then gives them all up in a heartbeat shows the absolute total disrespect for her marriage. She always refused any oral sex with her husband but gave in to Bobby without a moments hesitation and then swallows? Batshit, in any normal world there would be no coming back... He should have let the sister in and played the full version of the one he played for Julie, not for the kids though. That would have simply dragged them into it and would have been simply a cruel thing to do to them. Maybe young Bobby will take her in, then she can finish learning the tricks of the trade. In the world of Ohio I smell a RAAC 'blowing' in the wind. Signed: BTW
I love your work. However, I find it really hard to believe that a woman who has been happily married for 20 years and does not allow oral sex in either direction is going to ask a co-worker "Why do you never flirt with me, I've seen you looking and know you are interested."
Reading his stories, there are quite a number that don't end that way. There's even a few for the BTB crowd. Unfortunately it seems like even one reconciliation story is somehow being a "cuck apologist" for many of those that comment. ohio does do reconciliation stories well (one of the best IMHO), but he definitely mixes it up.
Ohio is extremely talented. His talent might only be eclipsed by his utter devotion to RAAC.
I certainly hope this isn't headed in that direction.
He can't throw her out and if he does a call to the police will likely end him in jail. No way a mother leaves her kids. Using force does land him in jail. So this story is screwed up right from the get go.
He is suspicious wife is cheating with younger co-worker she has often described as a hunk.
He hears phone message his wife is taking Thursday off and she denies message's existence and deletes it.
Instead of taking day off and watching house he simply sets up recorders.
He could have prevented second get together if he wanted to do so. Following Bobby into house fifteen minutes later would have been way to go.
Ohio will save marriage but will have to force it. Just what ohio does but I will grant ohio is gifted writer.
Where story is headed. Reconciliation but he won't exactly level playing field. Being the aggressor and doing things you have for 22 years refused husband and in marital bed is as reprehensible as it gets
this fag fool has sucked more cum from her cunt than a gay man would from a cock
A CHEATING FUCK SLUT WHORE THE RIGHT WAY BY KICKING HER ASS OUT.....
"it was never as stiff and hard as this one" - Not even when HE was 26?
Still five stars and still love it. She got exactly what she deserved.
Been there, left, lost everything in the CA divorce except my sanity, I.e. good deal. Still, sad that it went so wrong...
"That didn't mean I let women walk all over me—just that I tried hard not to get upset about little things, or challenge Julie about small issues that didn't matter very much. "
Which issues would those be, sex? From the look of it one would have to conclude that this effeminate man thinks sex is no big deal. So he puts up with with the garden variety "modesty" routine that young inexperienced wives have.
No woman is to be blamed for this type of thing. The man really deserves most every bit of the responsibility
Not sure which is worse, a guy who isn't hungry enough to get at his wife's pussy for a serious taste, or a guy who will put up with his wife not licking his dick once in a while. That is a real marital problem of communication.
This man is not able to communicate his sexual passion for his own wife (I am assuming he isn't gay). No wonder she fell into some dick sucking! It really does make perfect sense.
The author has portrayed this wife as flighty and out of control. It is nothing else but the biological vacuum left in the wake of the non-existent sex life in her marriage. It is a law of sexual economy that a derangement of one or both partners will likely ensue if they hold a torch for modesty in the boudoir.
A woman will never ever tell you what she needs. Ever. Men need to understand that. Women find it extremely offputting to tell a man, do this do that, I need this, bang me hard bang me slow, etc. Half the time, of course, she doesn't even know. So that is understandable.
It is also a distinct possibility in a situation such as this that the husband either has homosexual tendencies or he is constrained in some way by abstract ideas or some type of pathology - extremely passive, etc.
Fathers really should tell their young adult sons to listen to the wife if she is making any sense, but absolutely fuck her every which way until you find things that work. A woman will be amazed and look up to a man like that who leads the sexual relationship.
In any case, men court disaster for their marriages if they allow this type of modesty act in the bedroom.
No pun intended (well, maybe a little one....). Of all the women I've bedded in my several decades of life on the planet, I only ran into one who absolutely abhorred oral sex of any kind. She wouldn't get near my cock with her mouth, and she would totally freak out if I tried to go down on her (and she smelled so yummy, too!), push me away, and slam her thighs shut. Needless to say, that was a VERY short-lived relationship.
I really feel sorry for anyone, male or female, who doesn't enjoy giving and receiving oral sex.
In any case, enjoying the story! On to the next chapter....
I didn´t like when he started telling his side. This all knowing guy knew right away his wife was up to no good when she asked for sex? A shy wife asks for sex and you refuse? And you want to wait and see if she attacks you? Apparently from what I can garner. You are the one that controls the house and if she asks for something you get suspicious. Well Im sorry to have to tel;l you. BUT!! its the husbands place to teach his wife about sex if he sees shes not experienced as you want her to be. You don´t just give up to some sexual acts just cause she is uncomfortable with them. You need to be patient and teach her there is nothing wrong wirh going down on someone. unless you´re trying when you´re all sweaty before taking a bath. I´m glad she found someone that took his time to teach her what she had been missing.
and the choices that stumble in her path. TK U MLJ LV NV
"You WERE my wife, you silly bitch."
Therein lies the truth of the matter. The same thing I told my wife when I caught her during a lunch break sitting on her lover's cock in our living room. When I let him leave, it's difficult to do with a .45 directed at your head and you're naked, I made him take her along with him. And those were the last words I spoke to my soon to be ex-wife.
Any guy that let's his prudish wife get away with this ridiculous make-believe sex life deserves everything he gets. I'm no sex therapist but I think this is not exactly a rare situation.
It's astonishing that men have become such sissies that their wives aren't giving a little oral sex. It's so bloody innocent and it is a nice gesture of intimacy. This guy should just grease up his tail and head down to Castro St.
Word.
but Alan is a dipshit if he's been married for 2 years, let alone 22 years, without a blowjob. Grow some buddy!
Bobby deserves some public recognition for his actions.
As described, Julie is a very weak and insecure woman. Bobby is a player of the 1st degree. And the husband is willing to sit back and wait for things to mend themselves. Three thoroughly unlikable people.
“but then, he wasn't 26 anymore, the way Bobby was.” – You’re not 26 anymore either!
And cheating in the marriage bed!
yes, there is reconciliation in this, but the author does a great job of making the justification. It certainly doesn't come easy, as one would expect from a wimp, and only after hubby gets some strange of his own. This is a five star effort.
Stupid and naïve. That's what I would call her before the affair. Now she's just stupid. And homeless as of now. Worthless cheating cunt.
now sue for divorce an name dear old bobby as herr lover and file for adultery and sue the school system for allowing it. Hopefully they will both get firedd. Then make sure that every where dear old bobby goes they know what he did. make it hard to find a job other than delivering newspapers
I can't understand these women who won't do oral sex and new positions with their own husbands, but will do it with their lover.
And fucking someone else in the marriage bed is the ultimate "Fuck you!" to the husband.
There is NOTHING that says he can't destroy the inside. He can rip the sheetrock off and throw it everywhere. He can tear out the insulation and the plumbing so nothing works. There is nothing against the law about doing that.
And he can shut off the electricity, the water and heat/cooling. So all you fucking whiny girls saying he can't kick her out, he can just tear the inside up and live there. She'll be gone soon enough.
Can he throw her out?
It depends.
Did he own the house before he married her?
Do they have any children under 18?
If the house is his only, and they have no young children why should she stay?
Of course he can't legally throw her out and keep her out. If she comes back with a court order for him to let her back in and a couple of cops to enforce it, he can tell her to come on in while he packs to leave, and then she'll hear from his lawyer about the divorce and will never see or talk with him again. Her choice is to comply with his demand for her to leave with a slim hope of saving their marriage or refuse and have no hope at all.
I assume he'll have to repeat the two-month business because she was in no condition to hear/understand him. Of course, he'll take her back. Let's see if Ohio can make that happen in a novel way. These folks have a daughter in a boarding school? She must have grandparents with money.
I'm just worried that he is going to take her back. I do believe that sometimes a cheating spouse can be redeemed but this goes beyond sexual cheating. She does things with the boyfriend, someone that is just 'a stupid flirtation' that got out of control, that she never did with her husband.
Why he didn't take Thursday off. He could have caught them in the act and a chance to beat the shit out of the lover boy. A healthy back hand blow to the bitch in heat won't have been out of place.
But does ohio think that. I'm not sure...
Because he can't legally throw her out. Even if she had fucked the guy right in front of him. He can leave. But throw her out? Not happening. I appreciate the attempt to be macho man. But at least write something that is plausible.
You just can't throw your wife out, you have to go to court and get an agreement in any case they will share the home till there is a settlement . Unless. One party commits a violent act.
when it never does for countries. TK U MLJ LV NV
No way can he forgive this deliberate adultery on her part and then her doing all the things she had denied him. I have been reading all of Ohio's stories, right down the page. If he weasels around and gets them back together I will not finish the page and will never read his stuff again. No forgiveness- NONE!
Sex is not the most important thing in a marriage. Trust is! Without trust all you've got is stomach problems. I am NOT into wimps or wives (fictional or otherwise) that can't be trusted and to make it worse, then lie to my face, so I read enough of Ohio's stories to see what happened and then the end of his stories to see how "the husband" dealt with what happened to determine if I want to read the rest of the story! Next!
You have to be kidding. Throw her lying cheating slut ass out along with her clothes and the turn on the sprinkles. Make copies of the tapes and send them to her family, friends, coworkers, church, etc. NUKE her ass.
Somehow he could read her so well that he was able to discern she had an affair within hours of seeing her? Seriously? And then he kicks her out of the house?
He can't. It's against the law. He doesn't get to do whatever the fuck he feels like just because they cheated. And if he's such a fucking wimp that he lets her walk all over him then he deserves her cheating on him.
"You WERE my wife, you silly bitch. But right now you aren't anything to me but a slut who fucked another man in my bed! And you're getting the hell out of my house!"
Fucking hilarious ! .. Way to go Dan! But if I'm familiar with Ohio's stories, he's going to take the skank back..
What the fuck. Why does a self respecting woman married 22 years to the same man decide to do this outrageous crap? Refusing your husband, the love of your life, the pleasures of love-making but giving it to a co-worker/stranger? Ch. 2 next. We'll see what happens...
Dear Anonym beastlover I do not post here any comment here, only your favorit sidekick to injure everybody here after your favorit female dog refused you last night ...........
roscovich: ignore that idiot, he knows as much about reality as DWorncock, that is to say, not much.
He points out that legally he couldn't do it. Unless of course he owned the house before they were married. It's called the moral high ground. Are you telling me that a wife who wanted to stay married would confront him on this? She would be feeling guilty and might just suppose correctly that if she stayed in the house he would leave. Which would add to his resentment: she cheats and he gets thrown out of his own house. He might very well leave and file for divorce. If she really wants reconciliation, of course she would move out. This way she knows where he lives. I don't know that she would even have to reason this out. She cheated, she moves. She would be naturally afraid of any further confrontation, so of course she would acquiesce.
this author is a great believer in talking and talking with the sluts. fucking stupid, I say. Ever think of injecting their cunts with acid?
Great start I hope the next 2 chapters are the same!! Thanks for sharing.
that twinkle in her eyes is the sunlight shining in from her earholes
You throw her out once,change the locks and apply for divorce immediately.
That said,excellent story,as per your high standard.Thanks Ohio.
MARRIED FOR 22 YRS AND I WANT TO KNOW IN ALL YOUR STORIES HOW THE WIFE GETS THROWN OUT WITHOUT A DIVORCE OR DSETTLEMENT OR COURT ORDER FOR ABUSE. IT DOES NOT WASH..I DONT CAR FOR CHEATERS BUT THE COURTS ARE CLEAR HERE. NO CAN DO,
before posting the endings. This is starting out real good, so lets hope it gets better, if possible. TK U MLJ LV NV
unless the story has infants being molested that turd DWmoroncok will rate it 1*
Just another old hide story. Except for men in their 50s and 60s who cannot do better, no one wants an old hide.
I have read the story several times and really like it. I typically do not like reconciliation stories but in this one you described two characters that both seem to be good people that have done bad things and deserving of forgiveness. The husbands actions in chapter three probably helped him see that he too is human, likes sex and sometimes also needs forgiveness
i wonder how this writer will work it so he takes her back, i say this because i read some of his other stories and no matter what they do they always are forgiven in the end, they would have to kill him and then i think this author would still have a reason for forgivness.
Good story but don't any married couples on Literotica have joint ownership of their homes? This is about the third story I have read in which husband tells cheating wife to be out of the house in an hour. Every couple I know have house in joint ownership so that it might be dificult to throw wife out in an hour or a week.
the Ct Yankee
Shitty idea in this story. It is obvious that our society and it's man-made rules have gotten to you. Hell, you cannot even fantisize. I hope that in the next part you will wake up and allow this wifey the freedom to let other cocks slip into her heated depths and even maybe breed her.
Ohio:
but your warning that Ch. 02 was 2 months down the pike caused me not to comment at that time as I knew I would have to reread ch 01 again and I didn't want any premature comments to prejudice my 2nd reading. It's still a damn good story. To you nosy parkers; to ask why 2 months wait is rude and basically none of your damn business. Thank You. Ronnie W.
she suck and did things for her lover that she won't do for hubby to easy.now what cause that to happen all of a sutton.hubby want being good to wife in bed as he should've or wife a whore.either way the marriage is in trouble.she was a fool to bring her lover to her and hubby bed.now the writer you have a lot of nerve to tell your fans wait 2mos.without some reason.than writers wonder why they get bad comments.
You've all read his other stuff, so you won't need to wait two months. The husband will bluster and puff his chest out, threaten divorce, BUT, if he doesn't have tattoos placed on her body or embarass her publicly, he will be kissing her feet and asking her to remain his wife.
I divorced her cheating ass, went out and found a good woman who truly loved me and we lived happily ever after. There, that didn't take too long, did it? Short, to the point and covers all the bases. She fucked another man, was caught at it and he didn't put up with it. Good story.
For heaven's sake don't make us wait 2 months.Your stories are to good to tease us like this.Post it before xmas,please.Remember,trust,but verify:reconcile with a price!
Ohio,
I like the idea of the two months break whether you just need a rest or its part of the story line. Like the story so far and I'm sure the two months will be worth the wait.
My best regards
All of a sudden started fucking so many strange men in their husband's marital beds and crying so loud afterward?
Is Jesus coming back or something I don't know? I know, it is Literoticaland fiction,,, but why are all these authors so into wives bringing the big brothers and his friends to fuck her in her marital bed and all that?
Do these loving wives need more counseling than these fantasy writers who always create such characters in the first place?
Don't mind me; I was just wondering silly,,,,
Great story as usual, BUT why is there a 2 month wait before the next installment?
if it was me don't write a part 2 or another story as a cliffhanger.that us me.
This well written story appears to be a pretty straight forward tale of adultery. However, I cant help but think that there is more here than meets the eye. Is there another shoe to drop?
I want to convey few words of praise and then one request.
First the praise. Again, Ohio at his best provides classic lines! For example read the following quote which is, suitable for the pantheon of the revenge literature. Quote: "Stop, Alan, stop!" Julie was weeping, looking at me beseechingly. "Oh I will, Julie, I'm all done." I went to the hall and returned with the suitcase…. When she saw it Julie jumped up and came towards me. "Please, Alan, please don't leave!" "Oh, I'm not leaving," I said. "You are! …and I want you out of this house. Now!" End quote. It feels like quick boxing maneuver: surprise –attack –surprise!
Now for my request. Seeing that you might take your time before the follow up to Ch. 1, I would be very grateful if you don’t join the new trend which I would call the “I don’t know and I don’t care” trend. According to this trend, the main characters do not know and do not care to learn why anything went wrong in their relationships. Presumably they just want to fix (or end) every thing first without understanding why anything happened. They try to do so by variety of temporary or permanent punitive or corrective measures. An example for a punitive measure – one spouse goes to ‘exile’ (many times it’s self inflicted) An example for a corrective measure : wife has to wear from now on a Burka just kidding, I mean - from now on wife needs to get a written permission before she can talk to men etc.
Even if the examples are somewhat in jest, the phenomenon is real. Most readers (I think) see it as cop out, plus it makes as much sense as expecting a Physician to provide treatment prior to running tests on the patient. I do not say that you are planning to do that type of IDK&IDC maneuver; I am just airing some mild anticipatory anxiety when one of my favorite writers takes a break…
I love your writing. I look forward to seeing each new story you have posted. This one is no exception. However I have a question. What is the wife's motivation for suddenly experiencing a sexual awakening and desiring to completely decimate her husband with whom she has had a loving and satisfactory, long term relationship?
Perhaps if you had told us that she was feeling the effects of losing her sex appeal, had a girl-to-girl chat that awakened her desire, had been set up for Bobby to seduce her, felt angry at her husband for a some slight, or was unfulfilled sexually in her marriage we would understand. But for a mature, happy wife of long standing to just go out and be the instigator of a sexual tryst doesn't give us any sympathy for her.
Not that these things don't happen. It's just that your readers don't know why it happened in this case, so we can't care anything for her. She becomes a cardboard character, onesided and unsympathetic.
It's your story. Others' comments about reconciliation are irrelevant. (They're biased and inaccurate as well.) I'm looking forward to an entertaining ending. Thanks,
Does she love him? Does he love her? Most of those who have left comments have said the marriage is over. Maybe it is. I think it all depends on what she does over the next 2 months. If she continues with her fuck toy, then it is over. She doesn't love her husband. If it truly was a mistake, a really, really bad mistake, then she will not continue to be the slut with Bobby or with any other man. Can a person in a loving relationship make a mistake? Yes. Can it continue more than one time? Unfortunately, yes. Thankfully, her husband woke her up before it was too late - or is it too late already? What will he do? I would be torn up that she thought more of her boy toy than me. But then again, why didn't he ask her immediately? If he had, would she have stopped? If he had told her he knew she had the next day off work, would she have stopped because of the guilt? Woudl love have won out? He is as much fault for letting this happen as she is for getting involved. Both of them have a lot to work through.
Please don't make us wait 2 months. By then, we, your readers, won't care.
Very nicely done Ohio, realistic character traits and plotline. I too enjoyed that for once in this genre, some small measure of justice is literally metted out, if only that the transgressor is turfed out of the marital abode (as opposed to her cheating and him leaving).
I agree with most commenters in part, and mostly peggytwitty in particular...this marriage is over, no matter what spin you put on it. You've portrayed a no-nonsense guy reacting as most would, in discarding her sorry arse. Some percentage would now be also extracting a measure of severe retribution, but, say the naysayers, then you must dig two graves, yes quite so, hers and Bobby's, imo.
The problem if there is one, is you've portrayed quite unrealistic rl traits in Julie's character, and now you'll be forced into consistency. Unrealistic in that she turned full circle and succumbed so easily to cheating on a 22yr marriage, really a very unlikely scenario, changed her prudish persona during the two liaisons and became accepting of foreplay, oral, doggy etc overnight. Damned her then by more favourably describing these acts to her husbands loving. So where do you go with her now? If Alan's throwing her out has her turn up at Bobby's, the door opened by another of his lady friends fresh from bed, with even he then rejecting her "it was just sex, you don't mean anything to me", then so be it and a nice outcome. Whoring on a street corner due to a newly discovered addition to illicit and adventurous sex? Or are you having her plead to return home and make it all up to him if he'll just give her a chance. Who cares about her anyway, none of the readers as you've told it, so you can have it how you want with this slag.
But don't, I repeat don't, have any retreat, backing down, reconsidering, gesture of forgiveness, or admission of fault from Alan. Please keep him consistent, if only to let us see how you deal with the challenge of writing from that perspective, because it's only a rare feature of stories that are left at the point you've left this one. By all means have him powerfully remove every vestage of her misable and sorry presence from his life, have him divorce her from a position of moral and legal strength, severing all ties completely...a complete amputation of body and soul, and let him gain strength mentally, spriritually, and physically from doing so. And have Julie see it all, his gaining this strength in the adversity of her destruction of the marriage.
What's wrong with him meeting a terrific gal who gets into his heart and bed, who restores his self image as a lover, and value as a person, father, husband? Only after his full emancipation by such events could you ever have him allow her to crawl back into his life in any way. Then it's a new deal, he can decide to be with her again, that's different to taking her back in forgiveness, it's a new start of his choice if it happens and that's the key difference. He's proved he can discard her like yesterdays trash if she doesn't measure up in any way.
You've fired up the senses with this one, well done!
Two months...give us a break!!!
it depends on how you end this story. If you force a reconciliation, then this story will be worse than "The Worst Week of my Life". If you have them divorce and perhaps begin to move on, then it will be one of your better stories.
Like others have mentioned, I can't see a reconciliation happening here. Too much damage has been wreaked on the marriage by her actions. She clearly does not love him like she used to, so why bother even trying to sort it out. In two months time she'll just have gotten sneakier in her plans to resume her affair once she patches up her marriage.
[End of Part 1—This story will continue in two months.]
It is amazing how every time you manage to be unable to meet my new (lowered) expectations of you.
Keep up the good job. Thanks.
Right?
Why not wait to post this if you really have so little idea of what you are doing to know it will be two months.
What a waste of space - why not warn us at the start of the story so we had the opportunity to not waste our time reading the stupid thing?
Ohio, this story does have a great start. I agree with several of the others, that a reconcilliation is not probable. I base this on the followings facts listed earlier: It wasn't a one time affair, it was done in their house, and in their bed, she did things with her lover that she didn't do with her husband, and lastly she put down her husband by poorly comparing him to her lover. Maybe some men can get past part of that list, but I think the entire list would crush any man, and therefore the marriage. I hope for a few things: she makes out poorly in the divorce settlement, Bobby is named in a suit for causing the split of their marriage, Bobby and probably her as well lose their jobs for violating a morals clause, and lastly that she realizes how stupid and selfish she was, and the magnitude of what she did, and what she lost.
As expected Ohio, your writing is very good and the plot--well I can hardly wait to see what you do with it. You have a nasty habit of twisting and turning that leaves us dizzy and usually wanting more.
My only comment so far is that the husband does not seem to love her any more than she loves him. Hpefully both sides of this story will delt with. But I will reserve my judgement for later. Thanks
JimDinMN
Tomorrow or the next day, I'll want to read more. In 2 months I won't even remember what it's a continuation of.
She made her decision he doesn’t really matter anymore.
After 20 years you can overcome many things because the love you have is part of your whole life and makeup of two people being more like one unit, what hurts one immediately hurts the other.
This is not a one-time fling where she feels the truth come up and smack her in the head of what she is doing to her husband and marriage. This is my husband doesn’t matter anymore compared to me. He has turned totally irrelevant to her happiness. After the first time she cheated she come to terms that the marriage is not important and he is a wimp not worth trying her newfound sexuality with. After 20 years of turning down varied sex she feels no shame in doing it with the new fuck toy this is an act of hate of her husband as a man and partner.
This marriage is surely over.
A great story by you. Please keep sending in your stories as you get the time.
Thank you.
[End of Part 1—This story will continue in two months.]
do you mean when you post ch 2 tomorrow or soon after that the story will be told from 2months later,or the ch 2 will be posted in two months?
surely your not going to make us wait two months! you've obviously built up a nice appreciative audience of readers and i would hate to think we would be made to wait 2 months!
comment?
don
Well written and emotional as always. I'm only giving you a 75 because the ending is apparently still up in the air. Don't see how any man could take her back though after she did everything with another guy and wouldn't do any of them with her husband.
I'm betting she runs to Bobbies apartment.
Where she finds a wife? Or a girlfriend?
Or just an adamant Bobbie--NO you can't stay here.
Not too bad so far, although I agree with anonymous andy1hardy who said you have probably telegraphed your ending. What I wonder is weather or not you will actually write an ending. After letting "Worst Week of My Life" just drop, I am not convinced that you can maintain your interest enough to write an ending. It seems like "House of Cards" (An excellent story) may have taken it all out of you.
it's very difficult to make a decision when confronted daily with tremendous emotional issues. By separating, they can deal with their emotions, feelings, anger, love, etc. without the continuous influence of the presence of the other party. He’s giving her the time and space to decide what she truly wants, and by being apart, she gets the full impact of life without him. At the same time, he gets to experience the same thing. Making a major life decision should be done with the clearest mind possible; having outside influences only clouds the reasoning process. Keep up the good work, a fan always.
I just meant unexpected in terms of these stories.
After they are found out, the wives always cry and say they didnt mean it, their husbands are the only ones they ever loved, it was just a horrible mistake, etc. Then they become celibate and depressed during the too short reconliation/temporary seperation. If they loved their husbands so much and they had such good marriages, why did they start cheating?
PAPATOAD is about the only author I can think of that writes rl cheating stories. His cheaters are only mad that they got caught. No crocodile tears and pretending to be sorry from them.
Instead of the wife following script, it would be nice to see a more realistic portrayal of her character. Since she has no respect and not much love for her husband while she is cheating, it seems odd that they become despondent after they are caught and it seems they may lose their husbands.
I shouldnt have said funny. It wouldnt be funny - it would be sad and depressing from the guys pov but at least it wouldnt follow the script of stupid wives who had deep abiding love for their husbands all along even while stabbing them in the back and overly perfect husbands who never have any real doubts and seem to be able to read their wives minds. They (husbands) dont seem to have any problems with insecurities or doubt no matter what evidence is presented that their wives are able to lie convincingly and/or where never the person they thought they were. Instead they (husbands) boil everything down to sex and once they are reasonably sure their wives wont have sex with other men anymore, move on like nothing had happened. Seems odd that they are so sure of their wives and themselves to me.
My dislike of the perfect, overly accommodating, guys with fruit flyish attention spans in some of these stories probably influenced my p.s. as well. I was trying to get across how bad its becoming by facetiously saying I hope she dumps him. Since Ive been accused of being very much black and white wrt cheating, that Im starting to identify with the cheaters more than the wronged spouse in some of these stories must mean something though.
Anyway, I hope that the 2 months is story time and not real time so there is obviously something I like in these stories. If I hated the story outright, I wouldnt care if or when the author finished it.
I do agree with Dynamite Jack that "So far" I liked the story.
It was a good story, and while I do agree with the majority of what Average-Joe said some of the stuff at the end that Average-Joe said bothers me as well.
I was often one of the guys that felt you forced a reconcillation story on the husband, regardless of what the wife did. And I've always felt that that was really unfair to the husband. I mean if you ever put yourself in the shoes of the husband you often felt more like a punching bag than the husband of a loving wife. Like the husbands were hunch-back men that were so desperate to have a woman love them, they would put up with anything she did. But "So" far this hasn't felt that way, but again I'll wait and see.
But what bothered me was that suggestion of that twist by Average-Joe. That isn't really a new twist for reconcillation stories, I've seen it used before. Often it's used to help the husband share the blame with the wife and him trying to convince her to give him another chance. I've always hated that. Its like a dream sequence in TV where once they kill off a popular character they have another character pretend to have dreamed it all up so they can bring back that character with the "No harm no foul" idea. Having the wife decide she likes being free to sleep around and then having the husband beg her to come back, just really further removes and destroys in most readers eyes any "left over" self respect the character may have after finding out his wife of 22 years was:
-Cheating on him
-In their house
-In their bed
-Giving out blow jobs she wouldn't give him
-Having sex in various postions she wouldn't do with him.
-Saying that her lover was younger with better stamina
-And indirectly implying that while sex with her husband was good, with her new lover it was better.
-Expecting that her husband would be ok with it once he found out.
-And the total disregard of both her husbands feelings and any respect she claimed to have had.
I never could see how repeated destructions attempts, blows to her husbands feelings, and destroying his ego, could ever be used as a foundation for a reconcillation story. But I've seen it done often before. But I think if you were to consider to go with Average-Joe's twist it would be an even worse idea. But that's, again, my idea too. But somehow I think you already have the sequel written.
For now, what I've read of it, it's a good story. But I'm curious how you will end it.
PS: Are you really going to wait two months, or are you saying the story will pick up from the two month mark in part 2 with the husband/wife reliving what happened to them during that time? Or was that statement meant to keep everyone guessing? (^_^)
You did a good job of bringing the emotions out. Both his and her reactions were consistent with what I would expect.
I won't try to predict (or influence!) the outcome... you are one of the better writers and I know it will be a great read regardless.
Nice read!
I realize that the wife has to wait 2 months to find out what happens, but making your readers wait that long is just not right!!!
It took you a month for your 20 minute story, and that was too long...
I love your stories, house of cards, i hate surprises, ect. but I don't know if I can wait 2 months...
Even this guy comes across as a shell of a real person.
andy1hardy is probably right about the reconciliation as well.
Hope Im wrong and this is your answer to critics that say you always force reconciliations no matter what. In this case, its the husband that would be a stumbling block and not the wife. So what if she only cheated once? A guy who spent over 20 years with a sexually repressed wife only to have her start cheating and do stuff she never would do with him isnt going to get over it imo.
A normal guy in the real world with real insecurities and without 100% knowledge of his wife's inner mind isnt going to just get over it no matter how much he wants to or how much he loves his wife. Bitterness, jealously, doubt, etc would eventually swamp him imo.
As to what is written - you might have wanted the husband to come off as cool and collected but I think he comes off as a shell without any real emotions. To me it sorta seemed like everything the husband did and said after the revelation was following a script. Even though that is the case since this is a story, its not supposed to seem like that. He didnt really have any normal reactions and seemed like a guy who was just faking what he thought was best:
- I should apear angry her so I will raise my voice - that will scare her into towing the line
- I bet if I broke off contact for a while, she would be really sorry for what shes done and jump at the chance to take me back
- etc
Seemed like a guy going through the motions rather than a person with real feelings reacting to what should have been a very disturbing situation.
Still an ok story though even with its flaws. Thanks for writing.
p.s. a funny ending for this would be the husband waits at home for his wife to do her time then come home and beg for forgiveness only to discover she has moved on and has a new lover(s). Instead of 'Honey, I only love you and made such a terrible mistake' he gets 'Once I found out what real sex was like, why would I deprive myself? Its bad enough that I had to put up with a miserable little shit like you for over 20 years but now I find out you were a dud in bed too. Im divorcing you and taking the house so you can find someplace else to try playing cock of the walk.' That would be a twist and funny too.
Another pretty good 1 but two months before we get an ending is just wrong.
You have already telegraphed your ending...
"My philosophy....was be calm,be patient, and let things slide"
I don't have to wait two months to know the author's blueprint...
Julie will do soul searching over the two months...
Alan will understand and forgive...thinking cheating once in 22 years should not terminate a marriage...
The kids will or will not know about her cheating..may or may not take sides...but who cares ...they are old enough...
Bobby admits he seduced another wife by his passive aggressive predator ways...and may start stalking...
Some psycho-babble
"Benefits" of now having a liberated wife...
And then RECONCILATION...
'nuff said
Andy
Totally unlike another story ("A Day Early") submitted today by another writer, your story is realistic. The man reacted just like a real person would react and took realistic measures to make his point. Also, your "wife" didn't say stupid things like "it was only a mistake! I love YOU!" Nothing makes me more nauseous than men or women calling a personal choice of betrayal a "mistake," and then following that stupidity with a comment about how much he/she loves the person they betrayed.
Keep it going and keep it real. Thanks.
Excellent - held my attention throughout. Very emotional and realistic. Alan's anger was justified and his reaction reasonable. Am really looking forward to the next installment. My thanks to the author.