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All Comments on 'Loving Silver Eyes Ch. 06'

by marie_fantasy

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NightpleasureNightpleasureover 13 years ago

i JUST LOVED THIS CHAPTER. i REALLY CANNOT WAIT TO READ THE OTHERS. KEEP IT UP

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Worth The Wait

and I really hate waiting. It truly is the best and worst of reading a story. Being excited that more is coming and being mad at having to wait for the next part, well this chapter was worth the wait. You left me at chapter 5 w/jade eyes and now you leave me w/being stabbed only it's not me. Again I will wait, but not to long I hope. hehe he

green2ballsgreen2ballsover 13 years ago
REAL GOOD

I love it, can not wait for the next one. It s a cliff hanger, suspense around the corner ,your really good at it.

canndcanndover 13 years ago

Loved the ending! I really can't wait to see what she is and why her mother was hunted and why she's coming to her. I have a feeling she's going to be one of the druids that are thought to not live anymore. Can't wait to see.

The only thing that surprised me was that she never said 'you're a vampire' or asked what he was.

I hate when a guy is so blind to a manipulative Bitch...ie- Hildie

Truckerdude92Truckerdude92over 13 years ago
Good job

Definately worth the wait, waiting for more

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 13 years ago
Good chapter

Some of the transitions were a little abrupt and I didn't know if it was a dream or real life at first. A little more indication of that would be great.

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 13 years ago
Well, go on then...

and give us the next chapter! Love this story and your style. Keep up the great work :-D

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 13 years ago
This story is really, really good!

Is she re-living her mother's death? It's all so mysterious!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Huh?

What's going on? Is she dreaming? You seem to have trouble going from scene to scene. Try to indicate a new scene.

shortydeeshortydeeover 12 years ago
Having Fun!

It is a little scary but fun to read...LOL

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