All Comments on 'Making Rent'
by Cheerleader Fan
- 17 Comments
The right amount of build up without dragging it out.
Gets right to the dock action without seeming rushed.
Good setup without being demeaning or cruel.
Hot as fuck action.
Wow that was an AWESOME story. I wish I had a landlady like Stephanie. I’d love to do anything. Like the other readers I really hope there’s a lot more of the story of Stephanie and Darren. 10 hard cocks er stars
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Thanks for all the comments.
I don't currently have plans to write a part two, but I really don't have much control over what my brain wants to write, so if it happens it happens. I have other stories to post yet. Some along these same lines and others quite different.
More please did he sucker again did he let her get his ass did she f*** him in the ass
Wonderful story, great writing, like all the others have written, hope there is a lot more to this story, love to see you pump him full of hormones, and turn him into your little shemale toy...! Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo
Yummy story !!!! Would love to be late on my rent ;-)
Chapter 2 in the making I hope?
Very interesting story and well written, not to mention that Darren is adorable. I am a little confused, is this the end of the story or is this the end of the beginning? It reads as if it is the end of the beginning, the storyline certainly could be expanded much, much further.
Veronica