All Comments on 'Transformations - Travelers Ch. 01'
by wayneandanntriskelion
- 29 Comments
This was a great start to a new chapter for this beautiful saga. I look forward to more and as always thank you❤️
I’m rooting for Monica to becoming a Dominatrix, Teri will be her bimbo brat. Nice start of the new book
I have missed your work so much! Five stars! I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Absolutely wonderful. Thank Morpheus you two are back. I certainly missed your stories! 5 stars as always.
Good to see you back with another new story. I wonder how this is going to play going forward.
This was a great chapter and I can't wait to see how it connects to everything that came beforehand. This is the best series on Lit and perhaps the most ambitious series on here. Your stories never cease to surprise me.
I am curious, when you begin a new chapter do you start with an outline or have you already made a map and just hit plot points? The preparation for something on this level must be a long process.
Always thrilled to see a new posting of your wonderful work. It may take time but quality can’t be rushed. Thanks for the new content and the work you put into it is appreciated.
J.D.
: Many people are able to sit down and create an outline or even write down plot points. We’re not among them. Going all the way back to Witnesses, I had a rough idea of where the saga would lead. By the time we finished the short stories, I knew the entire story right down to the very last scenes in the last book. And, well, it’s all in our heads at this point. No outline. Each book is simply a matter of writing down the scenes in our heads. We add a lot of detail, of course, and we fix plot holes (most of them, we hope). Some books are more important to the story arc than others. Naughty vs. Nice is a side story, Book of Adam is more important to the arc. But all of them tell a different piece of the story.
Long winded answer, sorry :) But if anyone wants to talk more about it, look us up over on FL, that fetish site, and we talk your ears off ;).
Thank you, you're back and hope all is well.
Another new story and a great one but who are going to be the main characters and how will it all fit in with the rest of this epic saga. Looks like another giant whiteboard is needed 😂😂😂⛤⛤⛤⛤⛤
It's always an event when one of your stories drops. They never disappoint.
It was a good story, lots going on but it was easy to follow, good job. I am waiting anxiously for the next chapter! Thanks
Clue number one, The Book Of Adam is known to the church and is banned. But it is buried at last on the list, almost as an annoyance and less important.
My breath is bated. I wait....
Would love to see Adam mess with the White Witches plans and see a pair of new covens be born on the flight.
Coven 1 is Monica becomes a White Witch with Paul as her Whoremaster, David becomes Davina a futa and Terri becomes an Amazon Whore (tall, busty, muscled brainiac). Coven 2 is Nancy becomes a White Witch and takes Christine as her Professional Caste wife, their husbands become Street Studs, Tammi gets reprogrammed (again), Samantha beomes a better version of what Diana and Hannah envisioned for Sammi (Sammi and Tammi become twin Amazon Whores) and Lawrence becomes a Whoremaster.
I can't really see Adam messing with White Witches plans, he is more of watch and see what happens type(to me) unless something major happens. He is still learning about himself and his powers I think right now. Now if something happens to or about to happen to Angela( aka Sugar Tits) he might interfere. Love makes you do crazy things.....
I think Monica might be headed toward White Witch hood the way she is protective and caring......one of the qualifications of WW it seems .
Another daughter of a politician. Mom is toast, er, transformed. 70 grand to babysit her wild child and follow her into insanity.
Man you just keep adding layers.
Any update?
We're working on Chapter 2 right now... lots of moving parts. We expect it to go into the queue this weekend. This will be another chapter coming in at near 22,000 words.
Another brilliant chapter. Have to admit, god knows how many chapters in, I'm with Hannah on the boob front. I know Morpheus has a thing for G cups but a nice set of C's or D's is infinitely sexier. Can't wait to see what you do with Christine & Monica. Nancy & Terri are toast, they're both already half way towards being street whores even before the mind fucks. Roll on part 2
Yes, I know this book chapter could stand on its own, but I needed (maybe wanted) to do a bit of rereading. Before I jumped in…
This chapter, as always, was brilliant. As I read each word on each page I was contstantly finding myself trying to read ahead into the paths all these new personas will travel in this book. So many possibilities with all these intital threads wove into this first chapter.
It is incredible what you two have created and even moreso that you continue to share it with us.
I can’t IMAGINE where this journey will take us, but I’m fully onboard. My seal belt is on and fully tightened low against my lap. My seat back and tray table are in their full, upright, and locked positions. I know exactly where the emergency exits are, even the ones behind me, but let’s be honest there is no fucking way I’m getting off this flight!
Thank you again for sharing this with us.
Finishing edits on Chapter 2 and it will go in the queue today. We went a little crazy with the length - about 27,000 words. As with last time, the first 5000 words will go on that fetish site today…