- Loving Wives
- Vendetta
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Erica, Elliot and I were living together as a happy family. Albertson hadn't bothered us with any tricks since he met his handsome lawyer girlfriend. We had a typical small-town life until Anna-Lena gave birth to her baby boy. I refused to sign any papers and the DNA gave me the proof that I wasn't the father. Then we got the great surprise when rumors of Albertson's DNA test got out in town. The baby wasn't his. After a while the social welfare authorities got Anna-Lena to confess a short affair with a married fellow worker, whose wife took their two children and immediately left him.
To my great surprise Albertson's lawyer girlfriend invited me to lunch. She was a really classy and bright-minded lady. After some polite small talk she went straight to her errand and told me that she had cancelled Albertson's case against me, so it was up to me if I would drop my case against him, which I promised her to do.
Though she didn't expected Albertson and me to be friends, she wanted us to behave like adults and forget our silly vendetta. In her opinion I had gotten a fair revenge when Albertson had let me win the competition about Erica. I told her, "He aimed higher and I can hardly believe he feels like a loser."
She smiled and said, "Do you envy Samuel and want to change Erica for me?"
I replied with a smile, "I really admire you but must say 'No thanks' because I really love Erica."
She promised me that Albertson would keep his mouth shut about Anna-Lena's baby. I had to agree with her that in some strange way he had done me a favor when Anna-Lena's earlier cheating was brought out to my knowledge. We parted with a hug and it was a great benefit for all of us to have put a stop to the vendetta between Albertson and me.
During a vacation at the Spanish island Gran Canaria together with our very good friends the Svensson family whom we met during our first date at the zoo, Erica and I married at the Scandinavian Church in San Agustin. After a number of failures I had gotten a loving wife.
- COMMENTS
Nice story and a nice ending but soobvious English is your second lanuage. That along with the Scandivian custums makes it s difficult read.
Scoring a single mother, however gorgeous (using makeup and other props), is not a win. Finding a debt-free virgin of your own race with no tattoos is.
Good story. Erica did nothing wrong. Accepting a proposal in the aftermath of heated sex while going through a divorce and having only dated for a month, is not then some betrayal when she tells him she is visiting her soon to be ex husband to see if they can work it out for the sake of their mutual son. She wss honest and had to make a difficult choice. By playing the high road with Erica, the MC got what he wanted and has a HEA. 5 stars.
Not sure what story some of the prior commenters read in which they blame Erica for somehow laying into the MC regarding Albertson. All she wanted wad the truth. Period. She couldn't be in love with a man even while falling in love with him if she thought he was slandering Albertson ad part of some vendetta. He told the truth. She verified and she told Albertson off. Full stop.
If you want to gripe about Erica then talk about her exploration of reconciliation with hrr husband primarily for the sake of her son. She spent half a day with her soon-to-be ex and found he was the same arrogant, self entitled prick as before. Yeah it hurt the MC yo think what might happen, buy despite her accepting his proposal at her request after a hot sex session, real world factors came into play like her son. It didn't take much for her to realize she was better off with the MC. Good story. Not great. But 4 stars.
What kind of a rush Erica has about dating Albertson and trying to save the marriage, after another man has already proposed to her. Somehow she turns out to be fickle and selfish. She scolded the MC for allegedly treating Ass-Hole-Albertson badly and calling him names, while she twirls her tail in front of several men at the same time.
I felt like I was reading an episode of Downton Abby. The language was stiff and hard to read.
Sorry I wanted to like it but just didn't care Perhaps the Marina Set is simply not my cup of tea.
Story has a very good theme however the verbiage is too "matter of Fact" and abut boring .
If Anna-Lena got pregnant after being with AHA, his victory was increased by his turning her from a faithful wife to a man-hungry cheater.
If Anna-Lena got pregnant before being with AHA, his victory was diminished by his seduction of a faithful wife becoming a case where he wasn't special or accomplished, just another prize for a man-hungry cheater. (He hadn't accomplished anything that not everyone could have done)
Parts of this were contradictory and the ending was pretty unsatisfactory. Especially for Albertson. Why the fuck would a woman take up with him after she learned what an asshole he was? She wouldn't.
Let's not even forget the husband's weak-ass reply to Albertson's new girl when she told him AHA had let him have Erica. Should have told her he'd never trade Erica for a dumb bitch like her.
Sigh, WF stories are difficult for me to like. They obviously have the ESL barrier, but they also usually come with very unsatisfactory responses and endings by/for the husband.
Nice story but I feel there more story you could have told. You have talent that I never could hone enough to be happy with.
What to say. Every story you have written so far read as if narrated by a robot with the mind of a twelve year old. No compassion, no emotions. Plots are great, but the storytelling isn't, unfortunately.
Please work on grammar and framing proper statements and paragraphs.
Even when you have good plot poor writing makes the reading very uninteresting.
I did like this one better than some of your others. Keep this type of work up.