All Comments on 'War Prize Ch. 02'
by BelleCanzuto
- 8 Comments
Really enjoying this. Cannot wait for the next part. Him sounds somewhat asshatty. Great job.
very interesting story, although it seems like maybe it should be in the BDSM category, since she is a submissive, even though it sounds like that happened through some pretty evil grooming... If she loved Him and the general killed Him, there should be no hope for this new pair whatsoever and she should do whatever it takes to kick the general's ass for good, then this definitely would belong in the non-con category, but if she is rationalizing her submission to this new jerk as if she's fulfilling the last will of Him, that seems like definitely BDSM in its essence, which is not my cup of tea, I only like non-con stories when the hurt party gets her revenge and comes out on top in the end, so I'm still giving this story a chance and cannot wait for another chapter, as you are really a great writer!
I started reading this to get ready before my husband got home but I ended up reading it for the story. Can’t wait to hear how this turns out
Love your writing. I clearly think it’s in the right category she doesn’t want to be there and she would in a heartbeat escape if she had a chance. Interesting dynamic and I really do not like “him” seems he was not as in-tune to her as it would seem. Thank you also for finishing the story cannot wait for last installment.
Complex, an emotional funhouse, well-written, erotic. Thank you.
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Your writing and execution are always improving. This had what I like about these stories—- good plot but not torture and senseless gore that is erotic horror. Looking forward to the next chapter she is one tough cookie.
I would have preferred that you had added a "piss" tag to the story so people who aren't in to that won't read it - the fact that he pissed on her vulva and later went down on her totally ruined what would have otherwise been a good story to me.