All Comments on 'A Normal Girl'

Great story. George, Jeff, Mandy, Christina! What a foursome that will be! Five stars, JB.

Humor is the real category for this story. I thoroughly enjoyed the narrative of our heroine's path to womanhood.

hope u write more like this it was great

Probably not realistic but, who cares! The build up was excellent. Her thoughts were so arousing. Would have liked a bit more on the description of the sex, overall very good though. Pretty much hit almost everything on my pecker-meter. Excellent flow to the story, never felt any drag. Left me with a feeling that I'd love to actually meet Christina as a real person. 5*

that girl is a natural submissive

That I'm very happy all of you enjoyed so much this story! Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments. Happy Halloween, JB

I hope you follow up with more of Christina. She’s a very entertaining character and I think you could go far with her. Thanx for a great story!

This is the best story I have read in several weeks. I shouldn't have been surprised, as I have read some of your other works. If there is a sequel I'll read it, and if not maybe one will come later. I could deal with having sex with a sister, but that is only in theory as I only have a brother. Oh well, I can fantasize about loving a sister in that way, possibly for a lifetime.

Believabilty factor? Hmmm. Great ztory? Supurb. Loved it.

Incest is never going to be okay with me.

truly wonderful and so well written

Loved the internal dialog, the tension, the excellent writing and the literary references. What a hot story!

First time stories are always so hot, This one is very much a winner. Thank you for sharing it with us.

I absolutely loved it. Very well done! Her internal dialog made it seem so much more real.

Well written!

I Loved it! You made me wish I'd had a sibling who took me in hand.