All Comments on 'Back to You Ch. 05'

thanks for the update

You have a knack for writing very believable characters who are easy to fall in love with. Thanks for the update. I adore these boys!

I like your stories, this one is no different. Keep it up.

It's the little things, slipped in, that make your writing so appealing to me:

"Oliver's fingers took the compliment..." What a great line. Such great imagery. I'm so pleased that you're still sharing your talent now in 2021.

I love your stories - I read a few. This one while still fantastic, is riddled with issues. The overuse of “the boy”. No matter who is speaking, the other is my boy, his boy, the boy. Throughout the whole story it repeats. Also, Oliver never was interested in men (or at least you never mentioned he was) and was a virgin, but you had him sitting on Matt’s dick as if he were a pro. Described as 9”, that’s a huge piece of meat to take for the first and second times. He didn’t need any warm up, he just sat straight down on it in practically one pass. He would need a lot more training and Matt would’ve/should’ve been concerned for his boyfriends well being instead off egging him on to take it all. Same goes for Matt. He’d never been fucked before and with Oliver putting 2 fingers in his ass he was suddenly ready for a big dick. I know this is fantasy, but a little reality could have made this perfect.

I love the jokes at the end, and the way they love each other