All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Girl'

Holy shit! That was amazing!

please keep writing....I was sorely disappointed to learn this was your only contribution so far....please please continue

It lived up to the cliched title. Nothing great about but nothing bad about it either. Face it, that describes most of the stories here and, well, pretty much everywhere. As a first effort it was serviceable.

This individual is in love with his daughter and it is obvious that most people never have been. My love for my daughter was certainly greater than that I had for my wife.

Great story. Keep writing.

Don't stop, great first story!!!!

write more daddy daughter stories - good one

this is so delicious

It was o.k. 2*

The initial conflict was really nicely done but the final stages lacked build up and perhaps some more of the subtle seduction and coy foreplay would have helped maintain the tension.

Big no for me. Didn't like the format. No much dialogue. it was mostly talking about the signs, not actually happening. Boring really. 1 star

love her giving daddy a hand job