All Comments on '[ENF] The Emma Girl's New Clothes'
by swguy123
- 20 Comments
Only Americans could be so weirded about nudity that they have an entire fetish category for stories about it. No idea why that's even remotely erotic, but whatever.
Although America's Puritan roots are definitely related, I think you've missed the point for stories like this. Speaking broadly, it isn't so much about the nudity itself, and more about being nude where / when you're *not supposed to be*. Naked in the shower? Not inherently erotic. Naked in front of your classmates when they're clothed? Erotic. To your comment though, this is definitely a bigger category for Americans simply because there are more situations where nudity is culturally inappropriate.
An unscrupulous mob of stupid followers forces a beautiful young woman to commit suicide, because that's what often happens in cases like this. Can anyone tell me what is funny or erotic here?
You are a very talented writer and your 4 erotic stories till now are really awesome hot stuff !!! I hope (and with me many readers) that there will be many other very hot erotic stories from your hands, please keep on writing the good stuff, many thanks Guy :p
I love your stories. They're harmless fiction and fun to read- and I'm used to your style now. Keep it up- it is appreciated :)
I kept hoping at least Devin would start to do the right thing and stop it, or return the favor on her two "friends".
Well told story with plenty of descriptive action. Would personally have had or have Devin in a following chapter come for Emma and fall for her for real. Maybe if he did and led her to be more outgoing, as in flirt with becoming an exhibitionist and maybe find her way into finding out great sex is. This would shut down the girls who took advantage of her and give Emma a totally new life.
Fantastic prank-humiliation story. Doesn't go into the realms of unbelievable absurdity.
Had Emma committed suicide at the end of this story, it would have made it worth the read. As written, it's rather silly. As is, Emma should claim she was heavily drugged by enemies, and claim victim status. Consequences should be severe in a scenario like this, but that's just my opinion. It was well written.
An interesting read. Emma might be naive and too trusting but with so called friends like those two evil Bitches who needs enemies?
What goes around comes around!
A follow up story of getting revenge with the help of a genuine but streetwise friend could be good.
This is a wicked story in the extreme. There is nothing erotic about this. It was about nothing but pushing a young, kind and decent girl to the point of practically killing herself. Those girls were never her friends, and neither were all her classmates. Each of them acted well beyond common sense. This is not a post for this site. Be a sane dear writer! You have crossed the acceptable limit. In reality, this girl's life would be completely ruined, she would probably make a fatal decision. Don't write stories like this, don't give it a chance to ever become reality. Practically every character in this story is extremely mentally ill and belongs in a closed ward. You should think carefully about what the limit of taste is. Again, this was not erotic in any way, this was not a humiliation for that girl, it was the end of that girl's life.
Not much of an erotic fantasy. More of an abusive submissive fantasy. I agree with one of the commentators. What goes around comes around. A follow up with revenge. Either that or stop writing abusive fantasies.
the only thing that bothered me about the story was the constant use of the word "filming" when we are decades into digital video. You can shoot, record, capture, and compose pictures or videos, but filming is an outmoded phrase for the act.
Why don't you know the difference between embarrassment and humiliation? Is it an issue with the English language or an issue with understanding basic emotions?
And why do you intentionally mislabel your hardcore non-con stories as "ENF" and then whine and blame others when they go in expecting ENF like you labeled it but instead finding hardcore non-con like you wrote it, while you avoid people actually into hardcore non-con finding your story?
You claim to be really involved in ENF, but all your actions and words imply you don't actually know what ENF is. I'm genuinely curious if this is willful ignorance or intentional grifting.
Considering your stories seem to go okay before suddenly falling apart at the end out of nowhere, I'm starting to think intentional grifting is a bit more likely, since the sudden swerves right at the end really do seem to imply you're intentionally trying to trick ENF fans into riding hardcore non-con.
Why don't you know the difference between embarrassment and humiliation? Is it an issue with the English language or an issue with understanding basic emotions?
And why do you intentionally mislabel your hardcore non-con torture porn stories as "ENF" and then whine and blame others when they go in expecting ENF like you labeled it but instead finding hardcore non-con torture porn like you wrote it, while you avoid people actually into hardcore non-con torture porn finding your story?
You claim to have been really involved in ENF for many years, but all your actions and words imply you don't actually know what ENF is. I'm genuinely curious if this is willful ignorance or intentional grifting.
Considering your stories seem to go okay before suddenly falling apart at the end out of nowhere, I'm starting to think intentional grifting is a bit more likely, since the sudden swerves right at the end really do seem to imply you're intentionally trying to trick ENF fans into reading hardcore non-con torture porn.
Man, you definitely know what you're doing! Don't pay attention to negative comments! Your story is magnificent! Please, keep writing!