- BDSM
- His Perfect Girl
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Click hereShe could do this, Mark realized, because this wasn't a game to her. She wasn't playing at being his pet or his slave. She accepted that he was superior to her and treated him accordingly. It was as natural to her as breathing. She wasn't proud in her subservience, making it a gift he had to acknowledge. She was simply there, fulfilling her function, just like any other form of entertainment.
"Would you like my cock in your throat again, kitten?" Mark asked as he pulled her nipple as far out from her body as he could.
Allie's teeth were clenched against the pain. "Yes, Mark, I'd love that."
Mark released her nipple and watched it snap back, jiggling delightfully as she hissed in pain. He grabbed the other nipple and slowly started stretching it.
"I can't decide whether to fuck your cunt or your throat next. I could fuck your ass, I suppose, but I don't want to kill you." Mark laughed, watching the girl's tit stretch, noting how her eyes widened in fear. "I should be stretching your ass instead of your tits to get you ready for me, but I'm feeling lazy." Mark let go, smiling as her tit bounced.
Suddenly he stood up. He grabbed a handful of her hair and started walking toward the stairs, Allie scrambling on her hands and knees to keep from being dragged. He pulled her up the stairs and into his bedroom.
He let go of her to undress, and she quickly locked her hands behind her back and opened her legs. Mark patted her head in approval. When he was naked he pointed at the tall bed in the center of the room. "Up girl!"
She scrambled onto the bed. Before she could resume her pose he said, "On your back, hang your head off the side." She did as instructed and he shifted her a bit, trying to get the perfect angle. He slapped her face. "Open."
She opened wide and he fed his cock into her mouth. He grabbed a tit in each hand and leaned his weight onto her chest as he thrust into her throat.
She kicked out with both legs and fisted her hands into his bed cover. Then he was fucking her again. Not as brutally as he'd fucked her cunt, but he certainly showed no mercy. His massive cock rammed in and out of her throat as his hands dug tunnels into her tits.
After a couple of minutes, he pulled back, up into her mouth to let her breath. He only gave her a few seconds and he was pushing back into her throat. This went on and on, Mark allowing her only seconds of gasping breaths every few minutes. This was his third fuck of the night, and it was going to last as long as he wanted.
At some point, through Mark's haze of pleasure, he saw the girl's hand moving between her legs. Mark was furious. He pulled her hand away and slapped her cunt hard.
"Bad girl!" he grunted, thrusting harder. "Selfish kitten!" He continued to slap her pussy as he pounded her throat. "This," slap "is not" slap "about YOU" SLAP! And then Mark was cumming deep in her throat, grunting loudly.
He finished quickly and rolled the girl off his bed. She landed with a soft cry, then gave a louder cry as he kicked her in the ribs. Of course being barefoot, it also hurt him. He picked his belt up off the floor and used it instead.
Mark rained blows down on the girl's body. She didn't try to get away, in fact she managed to get onto her knees and lace her hands over her head, giving the belt clearer access to her tender flesh. She was sobbing hysterically though. Screaming "I'm sorry, I'm sorry," as the belt bit into her over and over.
But Mark's was a fury fueled by bitter disappointment. He had thought she was prefect. She was supposed to be perfect. His cries of "Selfish, selfish, selfish," echoed with her "sorry"s and the loud cracks of the belt.
Mark stopped when his arm grew too tired to swing. He stood over the weeping girl, panting for breath. She was bleeding in a dozen places, though none badly. Her screams had faded to hoarse whispers now. "I take it back, I take it back," was her new mantra.
Mark felt like weeping himself. "I had my cock inside you, and it wasn't enough for you. Do you have any idea how that made me feel? You can't take back something like that. I was fucking you, and you were thinking of yourself. How can you ask me to forgive something like that?"
Mark sat on the edge of the bed, with his face in his hands. Neither spoke for a long time.
"I've never touched myself like that before." Allie finally said. Her voice was rough, and talking was obviously painful after the screaming and the fucking.
"I didn't even mean to do it." She said, so quietly Mark had to strain to understand her. "I barely realized what I was doing until you pulled my hand away. I didn't know it was a bad thing. Whatever happens now, I swear I'll never do that again. And I don't expect you to forgive me, Sir. I never expected someone like you to notice me at all. But you're wrong about one thing."
Mark glared at the girl.
"When you had your cock in my throat, I wasn't thinking about myself. You had your cock down my throat, Mark. I wasn't thinking at all." She took a shuddering breath.
"You can't know how overwhelming that is for someone like me... to have someone like you... There are no thoughts. There's only sensation and .. and wonder. I'm so sorry for whatever flaw in me made me do what I did. But don't think for a second that your cock wasn't enough for me. You're the most amazing person I've ever known. I'm sorry I couldn't be perfect for you."
Mark frowned thoughtfully. "Maybe you're right. Maybe it was just instinct... a wicked, selfish instinct. I shouldn't have expected more from someone like you. I told you I'd be your teacher, so its hardly fair to throw you out after one failing. I'll think about giving you another chance."
"Thank you, Mark." Allie said, gratefully.
"You still disappointed me, pet. I'm not ready to be over it, just yet. Go sleep in the downstairs bathroom tonight. We'll see how I feel about you in the morning. Go on now, I want to be alone." As she obediently crawled away, Mark slid under the covers of the big bed, wondering whether or not the girl was worth his effort.
- COMMENTS
The main character walks a fine line between alpha and edgelord manbaby, and at the end he unfortunately falls into the latter category.
okay so it became a s&m petplay (still not bdsm) from a noncon initially
the story building,the execution,the honesty and details of both characters mind and feeling each sec ,character building was brilliant
but as much nice and adjusting allie was considering her first time
mark was clearly a big disappointment since he is way too impatient and wants a perfect pet just within hours of meeting her which is impossible for any sub hey they too are humans with their own capacity and threshold
mark doesnt understand the clear line btw abuse and sadism
laughing about someones child sexual abuse is never funny
laughing abt her being infertile due to her abuse isnt funny i know its either enticing or disgusting for a man to find a young woman barren for the rest of life but for the woman its something beyond her control something she will never cherish no matter the perks which comes along with it
what was most upsetting that he took her on the date on a false pretence of helping her with understanding men he never told her about the real deal that he wants her as his pain slut
he told her about his terms and condition after brutal facefuck rape yeah definitely noncon
and that too just after when he came to know that she was raped and injured as a child
he says his pleasure only matters isnt he selfish
calling women and her selfish when he is the only one who is selfish he seems to be hypocrit when it comes to selfishness as if it is right when only men are allowed to be selfish
he seems to destroy her body just on the first n8 .good master never break their toy
he says he believe in giving and taking pleasure but i never saw him giving her pleasure even the pussy fuck was super painful considering how small she was how long she has she been fucked since the last time poor girl never even masturbated before no finger no toy technically still a pure virgin
he says he isnt a rapist but back thein the car he practically did raped and chocked her throat when she has no idea what was expected of her she is barely legal(18) might have not even about psin and pleasure ans s&m dimension .i came to know about this dimension only after 50 shades of gray came to the world
all i saw was mark being classic wifebeater abusive husband with zero mercy as she is very docile and delicate how has be been able to hurt such a delicate little naive innocent woman is beyond my thinking and imagination
he definitely isnt a sadist but pure bully and abusive who gets off on hurting petite shy and innocent woman whom majority of men try to protect with their life
Still, if the worst tragedy of your life means something nice for me, don't expect me to get all weepy about it."
making fun of her being raped underaged by some pedo i think he is an abusive man not a sadist dom
This was beautifully written and it would be awesome if you could write more......pleeeease
Thinking about that 1960 tbird. Imagining rubbing my naked self all over the smooth metal. Sitting on the warm hood as the engine rumbled.
Then I cried.
Imagining that beautiful machine wrapped around a concrete pillar, crumpled and leaking steam. Made beautiful in its loss by the glistening red ornamentation of its owner.
It's a bit strong for Literotica. Fortunately not only am I a kinky bitch I also understand the difference between fantasy and relity. Awesome, hot story!
This story is a bit more brutal but I enjoyed every bit. The sentences that people dont like are necessary for the character he makes his character stick to you if you like it or not. The way he uses her is hot. People if you dont find this story enjoyable then just go to the next. I think the writer knows how to use his plot to make it stand out to the reader and wants everything to fall in place to show his great character persona. The story is amazing hope to read more please... :-)
Despite some of the other reviews saying that this story was sick, I thought it was wonderful. Keep writing, I love your work.
All this biting lip thing always makes me remember of Fifty Shades Of Grey, I just can't help it... So...
The writing is marvelous, it really is. I love your writing style a lot!
It's perfect, very fluid, amazing amount of dialogue and descriptions, just really amazing.
But, the story disturbed me quite a bit. I still don't know what to think but I'm captivated by your writing and couldn't stop. Damn it!
What disturbed me the most is the fact he is such a bastard and he is so selfish! He says he hates selfish women but he is probably the most selfish man on earth! He has some serious fucked up issues. That's what disturbs me the most.
And the comment he did when she said she was raped. For God's sake, I guess this was the most horrible sentence I've ever read in a story. I know is a story but is still a fucked up sentence!
But again, the writing is spectacular.
This is really horrible... you should never joke about rape and to be honest the stories we write usually come from within. get some help
i know that this is just a story but i work with rape victims and to have him laugh and then say to her you look like you have been mouth raped and that he is glad she cant have kids because he does not want them that is undescribable. you have some serious issues you need to work because some stories do come from what you would like to do. you should never write or joke about rape period there is no reason for it. then telling her she is nothing but a animal is just as bad i liked the writing but the story line disturbs me.
If it doesn't work for you, that doesn't mean it doesn't work for others.
Both characters are feeding of each others energy and are complimentary in their desires. I find personally the barrier of shyness, the hardest to overcome and my Truly Satisfying Sexual Relationships (capitals intended), have always been ordered/taken/presented to me.
So yes this definitely floated my boat.
I know this is fantasy, but in reality things don't make sense. If she is a pet I don't know people who beat their dogs or cats. Second, to always keep hitting someone and causing blood will in the end leave damage..hospital, then hospital bills, police will be called in etc..and what if when he threw her off the bed she hit her head and died then what? In the end this girl would end up dead or irreverecabilly have mager damage...even being paralized. So why damage your "property"? And that's why a relationship with a sadist or "wife beater" only leads to death. Plus, how can you play with your toy when it's broken?
I'm giving it five stars because it's very well written. I'm still not sure if I like the story yet, or not. He's obviously a bastard, but at least he knows what he is and is comfortable with himself. And she seems to be a good match for him, even though I'd like to sit her down for a good talking to.
I would be interested in seeing more of this.
I loved this story. very creative, very erotic! i hope you make this into a series, i would love to read more of your work!
This author may have gotten an "A" in creative writing, but should probably spend more time in abnormal psychology. I am sorry I read this article and would encourage the author to seek professional help to deal with his anger and rage issues.