All Comments on 'Kate Gets Her Man'

It's a really good story, like al the stories you write, but aren't you suppose to write a second chapter to "When" ?

Your readers are waiting here, shame on you :)

It's written and it's very good. Try SOL

Humm.. thank you, but I went to SOL and there is no Second part, in fact the ending is exactly the same : "Ok, not the usual love story but let me know what you think, and before you ask I don't as yet have a second part."

Could u give a link to sequal

Denny started his run at 7:45, ran 10+ miles, returns to his home spending 30 minutes there before exiting at 8:45. Nobody runs a 3 minute mile and certainly can't string 10 together.

Yes, SOL has Ch 3 posted.

So far so good. The characters are a bit unbelievable especially the heroine, but then again this is a strory isn't it.

I have never read a story quite like this one. You have me hooked.

As usual, from your LW stories, character development is great. The dialogue is believable and follows the train of thought.

A few technical, english, problems that do not detract from the story.

Gave you 3*s. A very good beginning.

One question, are you going to abruptly change the personality of a character ? That happens often in your LW category stories. Inquiring minds want to know,lol.

AMerryman

Nothing too far out in left field. Just an obnoxious cop determined to prove she's right. You'd think that her Boss might sit her down and explain her obsession with Denny was wasting taxpayers money and she could be fired for her actions. Not particularly clever but we'll see where it goes.

Nice beginning. Heck, you even got 3stars from a hypercritical anon who apparently is a member of the grammar police. On to the next chapter!

The link is storiesonline.net, and on sol the story link contains links to each of the parts.

The interesting thing is that SOL says that the story is "In Progress", but there has been no update since 7/9/2015.

Nice areas north, south, east and west of Rochester to find surface exposures. Wonder if Utica Club tapped the subsurface waters. Wee bit west and north of your Lit., stomping grounds. As to sailing, well there is Lake Ontario.

I want to see Kate come out of this on the good side. I believe the intent is she is going to come out okay. I hope so anyway. I love her, I'll marry her any day. I'm hoping the criminal is really a good guy.

I have an idea of where I want this to end, but well it can go anywhere.

Don't hurt the lip

Got idea see if right

Basics are there and get you interested from the off. Will carry on reading.

Chuckles. Love at first crime, I suppose.

THIS is a fun story. In reality the officer would have been reprimanded for obsessive and foundation's persecution. She might have been fired. She's the personification of Captain Queg.