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Click here"Welcome home, Jerry," said my mother. "We came over early before opening the store to take you out to breakfast. We thought Millie would want to come too but she must have stayed with one of her friends last night. She's going to be sorry she missed out on seeing you this morning."
About that time, I heard Millie yell out from the bedroom, "I found it, Jerry. I found the vibrator in your underwear drawer."
We all looked up and here came a smiling Millie wearing one of my button type shirts. She was smiling when she came into the room until she saw Mom and Dad standing there.
"Mom, Dad, what are you two doing here?" she asked, as she tried to hide the vibrator by holding it behind her.
It was too late, they saw it.
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Epilogue: mum and dad were pissed but they accepted us fairly quickly once we pointed out that we weren't blood relatives and so it wasn't really incest. We all had a good a laugh about how stupid they were being. Fast forward 5 years and we're about to go out on our 5-year anniversary date, which is guaranteed to end in lots of hot kinky sex. Mum and dad are over the moon and are watching the girls (we had twin girls 3 years ago and they are the lights of our lives). Life couldn't be better.
Some of you might be wondering what happened to Marti and her husband. No surprise there; he cheated again. Shocker, I know. Marti wasn't as forgiving the second time around. Let's just say he won't be having any intercourse for the rest of his life. Not sure if she found someone else to make her happy. I hope so. She deserves to be happy.
This story was truncated; it is heavily incomplete. It badly needs a proper ending chapter and more details: for instance, what is the sister studying in? Any areas of special interest professionally, fun activities, etc. for her? Let's remember that she used his apartment for some fun loving times!
Let's also remember that he was adopted; so he and his sister are NOT biologically brother and sister or blood relatives. I loved the idea of their parents finding about them together after their first time as actual lovers and the finding out of her vibrator!!! That was really good.
5* for this story and I hope to be able to eventually give another 5* later on to the follow-up chapter.
BJ
I think the pacing was too fast to show as much emotion as the word "love" needs to convey. It's a good rough draft. That cliffhanger ending was actually hilarious I'd love to read a sequel once you've got one nailed down.
MICK WAS A REALLY STUPID SEX CRAZED BASTARD!! HIM BEING NEEDY OVER MARTI THEN BEATING HER HYSBAND WAS PATHETIC!!
Well, the story had a great start but as a reader I always become disappointed when the author takes you to a point or in this case a cliffhanger in the storyline the parents catch them together and now what happens? DG it really needs a finish. 4 stars would have been 5 stars if you had an ending on it.
, he had sex with his sister the whole night, but it's technically not a incest story, yeh right...
I enjoy reading sibling incest stories but sorry this isn't a very good one. The story just didn't flow for me the way the MC narrated the story as though he was writing it just didn't work and didn't feel natural.
But enjoyed the story. I thought the ending finished far too abrupt though. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Sort of a copout. They were not brother and sister and could legally get married.
So is it Millie or Minnie? Other than that distraction, it was a very good story. I can see where the conflict that Jerry felt would be genuine for someone whom he truly cares for rather than simply lusting. Since the story involved very little involvement by Millie/Minnie as an adult, I would have enjoyed seeing a bit more of the story to include her since she IS the sister in the title. I gave it 5 stars simply because they "found" each other. That's the touching part. Thanks DBH for the read.
-bern1965(pending)
talk about a cliff hanger.....that was a evil thing to do but if it wasn't a good story it wouldn't have mattered.
Come on man that is a total cliffhanger ending!!!!! What happens when they found out???
They make every brother who loves his sister to be some kind of sex maniac. and most sister bisexual and then the brother fuck her friends . in some story there is some brother who is loved by 2 even 3 girls including his sister . i dont know what those writers think they are
But we all have minds of our own -
They were not related by blood - so no laws were broken and few morals of import -
It would depend entirely on who the parents were - down deep -
I chose to think they smiled and every one had a good breeakfast -
This story is incomplete there is not a conclusion. The reader is left hanging at the end.
I think I would have had Mom go over to the stairs and call Sis down for breakfast. The parents should have seen it coming for years and been happy that it happened. After all, the kids were not related by blood. They wouldn't and didn't say anything before because the lovers should and did find out about each other by themselves. That is why they should have had the smiles on when they came into the store.
I really love this story! I love how the sister found. I'm glad she did find out. If you find the love, and they feel the same about you, go for it!
But seriously, you HAVE to continue this. What were the parents reaction? Will they approve (albeit right away or over time)? Will the siblings move together some where and live as husband and wife?
PLEASE CONTINUE!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL at the ending!!! I FOUND THE VIBRATOR IN YOUR UNDERWEAR DRAWER
Bro/sis love stories are just the best. This wasn't incest in the purest since of the word, since they weren't blood relatives. But, I bet mom and dad didn't quite see it that way. I'm glad you let us imagine our own endings for the story. Thanks for another fine tale.
another useless writer that get us hooked then fails to finish the story i wish they would ban these wanabe writers and remove their unfinished stories
I really liked the story, the characters weren't too sophisticated, but were literate. The question of incest always bothers me. The genealogical considerations are a documented issue. I guess modern birth control interventions would suffice to remedy that particular concern. Next the biggy to me, the betrayal of a position of love and trust. A non-consensual relationship of any sort, even Dom/sub would seem to me to be a capital crime. Intergenerational incest seems next on the ladder of acceptability, if the people are of age and truly consensual, I can't truly see where it is as serious. Sibling incest is probably the most common venue. If, as in this case, it is truly consensual then apply the golden rule. I think coming 'out' this way was cruel and shocking. The parents were hurt, so were the siblings. Yeah, biologically they weren't related, so what, to every other test they were brother and sister. Tough road ahead, but if they truly love each other, then they have a chance.
To me the biggest problem with incest, is the inherent dishonesty that the couple has to portray to allow the relationship to continue. There will always be the fear of other people finding out and exposing them to the 'slings and arrows' of the general populace. Everyone I know gets uncomfortable around the subject of incest. Probably why everyone shuns the practice. Supposedly the genetic issues are the primary drivers of this societal proscription, if that is truly the case, then perhaps in the future the practice will become more allowable. I just don’t know.
In any case the story was loving, albeit in a sophomoric vein. The author painted likeable characters who were human and made human mistakes. The reaction to the ‘rape in progress’ scene provided a lot of tension, but it was very predictable. The story seemed to flow well and the sex scenes supported the story. All in all, DGH writes pretty soft stories that most people like, this reader included. Thanks for sharing!
I loved the story...the end DEFINITELY made me chuckle. :-) I could see it happening in my mind which made it even better.
The last scene was quite something (a good comic relief after a lot of build up tension). Usually I am not much of a reader of stories from the incest section, but when I saw your name I took an exception – and by all means was not disappointed. It proves again that there are no boring subjects only boring story tellers. I liked the narrratve form you chose, especially with the asides to the reader even the pretend response to imagined challenges to the narrator judgment. Even though you ‘softened’ the edges of the literal incest (there is no blood connection), you still made it clear that emotionally, they both approached their relations as if they had the burden of incestual relations – a correct point which you explored very well.
Nice story. Here's hopeing for part 2 to find out what happens with the parents
I'm not a member of the Worship Society, but I do know a good story when I read one.
The next episode ( and be honest, few among us DON'T want one heh) should also be a great read.
What will mom and dad think? Did they know all along? Is Millie pregnant?
C'mon, you KNOW you wanna find out. heh
I don't have a DG worship group. Readers tell me what they believe. The people who read my stories will tell me if they liked or dislike my stories. The nice thing is they will take my stories for what they are and how well they are edited. Not every story is for everyone and both me and my faithful readers understand that.
To anonymous, when reading a story by any writer, put yourself in their shoes. All any writer wants is honest and fair voting and comments. Thanks for commenting.
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The story was good but sorry to say I'm not one of the D G Hear Worship club. I don't think real people say "inebriated" or describe it as "intercourse." I will now don my flame proof suit and wait for the DG Hear fans to flame me. :-)
it's not really incest.
That makes it tough to classify. The incest is all in his mind, throughout the story, but for me it's really a Romance story.
Nicely done - being a writer I enjoyed the interludes about the writer thinking about his story and writing.
Finely crafted!
Regards, Jack
What is typical DG Hear? To me, DG Hear means well written top quality stories that keep us coming back for more. So what can I say? Yet another super DG story! Not really 'Incest' but certainly a 'Romance' in the best true romance style. Your "keep them hanging" ending begs, nay demands, further chapters so when can we expect to see them? Another 'Great Job'! Pete.