All Comments on 'The Big Performance'

Good job, nice writing. Some fantasy, I can picture it happening.

Well done

DG Hear

I liked this one. You chose an interesting situation and place for the action. A very hot and sexy story.

Loved the story, Mil. very hot and I loved your characterizations. This story has become a new personal fantasy!

A sexy interlude like this is worthy of a repeat performance. A matinee maybe? Good luck in the contest.

Well now, that gets the temperature rising! Well done, and has just the right touch of possibility to make the fantasy all the more exciting. Good luck in the contest!

Wonderfully done, Vermilion. I loved the way that things escalated slowly from reading the lines out loud ... each step seemed to be natural progression and the tension/heat was almost palpable. Excellent pacing, well written and more than a little hot.

I like the way she takes control back at the end…her brusque acknowledgement defusing the idea of blackmail and securing the loyalty of the lighting crew. Acknowledging a thing sometimes removes its power over you. As to the idea of a “day of fucking fucking”? *Grin* Can you imagine the Hallmark cards for that?

I've watched this one develop over several drafts. An excellent story, I love it.

I particularly like the use of the poems. Well done.

Now that was hot... Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

You maybe ought to consider turning this into a book. Maybe her performance inspires the stage play for example?

Love your work.

Burly men? in theatre lighting? Not my experience. Me, at 5'7" and 15o lbs is usually only the "burly man" by comparison to the short, skinny women who make up the rest of the crew.